SWARON BACK TO SCHOOL DAYZ :FINAL RAMAYAN UPDATED! - Page 3

Lmao 🤣
Gawddd!! U r A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!!!!
i hav read d first part bt nt commented oer der..bt dis one yr...Hadd kar di tune!! 🤣
Baba re baaba 🤣 🤣 🤣
Am still roflin lyk an IDIOT..Hehehe 😆
Freak yr!! Ur sense of humuor is AWESOME!!
N yesh...neither u noe me nor i noe U..
Ummm..lemme introduce myself! Am prajakta n am a taarey fan..n i havent read ny Swaron wrk..urs is d first one n itz damn hillarious 🤣
If u dnt mind can u plzz plzz pm me d next part..
Aur my hindi sir ka naam bhi PRITAM PYAARE hi hai n english mam ka naam bhi MISS BRIGANZA🤣
Sachchi me dearie😆
plzz pm me ur update!i so damn love dis story❤️

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

Angel it was so hilarious...ramayan with d3 gang...I couldn't stop laughing fr single second...ur writing is improving like hell...I m totally impressed angel...

Ilove all character here...taani kriya bonding...Sharon and her gang...reyam all were there in their character... j

Originally posted by: PrOjeCtA

Lmao 🤣
Gawddd!! U r A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!!!!
i hav read d first part bt nt commented oer der..bt dis one yr...Hadd kar di tune!! 🤣
Baba re baaba 🤣 🤣 🤣
Am still roflin lyk an IDIOT..Hehehe 😆
Freak yr!! Ur sense of humuor is AWESOME!!
N yesh...neither u noe me nor i noe U..
Ummm..lemme introduce myself! Am prajakta n am a taarey fan..n i havent read ny Swaron wrk..urs is d first one n itz damn hillarious 🤣
If u dnt mind can u plzz plzz pm me d next part..
Aur my hindi sir ka naam bhi PRITAM PYAARE hi hai n english mam ka naam bhi MISS BRIGANZA🤣
Sachchi me dearie😆
plzz pm me ur update!i so damn love dis story❤️

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Haila PP mujhe kuch bolne layak hee nahi choda tumne...

main itna itna has rahi hun ki kuch aur nahi bol sakti🤣🤣🤣

Mindblowing concept👏👏

Dis is funniest os ever read by me..

baaki comment baad mein unres karungi abhi only rofl kar rahi hoon..

🤣🤣🤣

ufff ab likhti hoon properly...

i loved loved loved it yaar..

jab nil ne khamosh bola i bursted out louldy laughing🤣

n sharon ka 1 st dialogue as sita den swayam ka oh gosh brilliant..

out of dis world os..

wat comic timing superb👏👏

mera toh haas haas ke halat kharab ho gaya..

ur d best comic writer PP👏n i mean it seriously tumhara comic sense amazing hai..

pls tu comedy he likha kar..

jaldi update n pm me😊

Thank u soo much di indeed means a lot glad that u like my comedy so just wait for the actual hilarious ramayan

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

it was awesome The ramayan play😆😆

swayam ashi k bete types bane🤣

bechari ashi uske dil ke armaan ansuyon me beh gaye

and bharat sita mata ko uthane ko aaya h🤣

kriya and taani are friends it's a BREAKING NEWS

it was awesome👏loved it
plz update the next part very soon and do pm me

Originally posted by: muskan108

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<font size="4">it was awesome The ramayan play😆😆

swayam ashi k bete types bane🤣

bechari ashi uske dil ke armaan ansuyon me beh gaye

and bharat sita mata ko uthane ko aaya h🤣

kriya and taani are friends it's a BREAKING NEWS

<font size="3">it was awesome👏loved it
plz update the next part very soon and do pm me
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Thanks dear for sure

kruti doll pehle to hugs for this🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
next sorry for such late reply

coming to this part
ramayan with D3 gang superb concept
doll tu to amazing hai re

hindi waale sir ka naam pritam pyaare
teri hindi padh ke mujhe to bohot mazaa aaya.ek dam shuddh hindi

Ram - swayam

Sita ' Sharon

Rey ' lakshman

Vicky ' bharat

Nil ' shatrugan

Bharat ' hanuman

Amar ' ravan

Neha ' kaikai

Kriya ' kaushalya

Taani ' sumitra

Vishaka ' rishi muni (raavans trick attire)

Simmi ' jatau

Rinni - kumbha karan

Aashi - dashrat

dil to kar rha hai pura part hi quote kar doon.kya likha.the dialogues are bang on.tune kis basis pe sabko characters diye pta nahi but they are hilarious.Especially simmi-jatayu

mera pet dukh rha hai has has ke.Ruk saans le lu thoda sa

okk aage ka part to aur bhi hilarious hai.Loved the Ram-Sita acting part.Swayam ka majnupanaa to kood kood kar baahar aa raha tha.Sharon apne pran naath ka cheerharan karne waali thi

.

bechaara swayam sharon ke saamne apne aap ko control hi nahi kar paata

has has ke meri ye haalat ho gayi hai


your comic timing is out of this world.kya likhti hai pls mujhe bhi tutions de de.Tere OS padh ke lagta hai i suck at writing.You are such an awesome writer doll and your improvement is off the charts.Itna padh ke haal behaal hai agli update padhne ke baad to has has kar mar hi jaungi mai

kruti doll
This was just mind blasting,fantastic,awesome,fantabulous,stupendous,awesome etc etc etc etc

love you so much for this

aglaa update jaldi warnaa

Originally posted by: cenation123

kruti doll pehle to hugs for this🤗
next sorry for such late reply

coming to this part
ramayan with D3 gang superb concept
doll tu to amazing hai re

hindi waale sir ka naam pritam pyaare
teri hindi padh ke mujhe to bohot mazaa aaya.ek dam shuddh hindi

Ram - swayam

Sita ' Sharon

Rey '
lakshman

Vicky '
bharat

Nil ' shatrugan

Bharat '
hanuman

Amar ' ravan

Neha '
kaikai

Kriya ' kaushalya

Taani '
sumitra

Vishaka ' rishi muni (raavans trick attire)

Simmi ' jatau

Rinni - kumbha karan

Aashi - dashrat

dil to kar rha hai pura part hi quote kar doon.kya likha.the dialogues are bang on.tune kis basis pe sabko characters diye pta nahi but they are hilarious.Especially simmi-jatayu

mera pet dukh rha hai has has ke.Ruk saans le lu thoda sa

okk aage ka part to aur bhi hilarious hai.Loved the Ram-Sita acting part.Swayam ka majnupanaa to kood kood kar baahar aa raha tha.Sharon apne pran naath ka cheerharan karne waali thi

.

bechaara swayam sharon ke saamne apne aap ko control hi nahi kar paata

has has ke meri ye haalat ho gayi hai


your comic timing is out of this world.kya likhti hai pls mujhe bhi tutions de de.Tere OS padh ke lagta hai i suck at writing.You are such an awesome writer doll and your improvement is off the charts.Itna padh ke haal behaal hai agli update padhne ke baad to has has kar mar hi jaungi mai

kruti doll
This was just mind blasting,fantastic,awesome,fantabulous,stupendous,awesome etc etc etc etc

love you so much for this

aglaa update jaldi warnaa

My my never thought anyone would ever like it n I actually thought of dumbing these series but pata nahi wat clicked my mind n I just wrote it n thank god I updated it . Thanks thanks a lot itne bade replies dekhke mai hava mein udne lag I hun thanks di n sab charectors ke peeche mera specific logic hai Jo aapko agle part me in aacha lagega hopefully . Again thanks 😃