ArHi FF : Beauty & The Beast#2 [Thread 3 Link on Pg 148]

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luvbug

@luvbug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#701

oh tht was a wonderful update...im glad khushi is by his side... his reactions were completely justified... go khushi... eagerly waiting for arshilicious updates :)

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#702

You delved into the depths of a couples trust in this chapter, loved it. Khushi totally understood how much Arnav needed for her to believe him more than anyone else.

Arnav in return knows if he has her trust he has everything.

Upon seeing Priya he was drawn back to his actions of what he did to Khushi but sometimes one needs to face these demons... Khushi is allowing him to move in while he recuperates, this is going to be fun !!

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#703

Chanced upon this story and read it in one go. Its beautiful and awesome. Please PM me when you update next

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khusipra

@khusipra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#704

one of the most beautiful ff

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#705

awesome part...

aww feel sad fr arnav...

he is guilt...

khushi trying to make him easy...

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Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#706

Originally posted by: Rihanna4all
aha .. first to comment ... glad that finally storm has passed... hopefully they will be able to make progress in their relationship. Lovely update as always!!

Congrats on getting the first spot!😉 yeap...one storm has passed now another small one is headed their way...but this one is tiny..😳 Thank you sweets!

Originally posted by: Arilip
Loved the update much required to get the proper closer to their situation 👏

Thanks!! yeap...like I said when I brought in the twist...much required.😉

Originally posted by: ducky_anne
OMG! When she said "He's the one!" My heart skipped a beat! :/ Great update! I hope everything gets better soon! I love the pace you take with this story. It's perfect. Things can't be all of a sudden okay, and that has to be admitted. Even though I'd love to see the happy ending, I know I'm going to have to wait!

Yeah...that was Evil Katie making a quick appearance.😆 Thank you so much for your feedback on the pace of the story...like you said...things can't be okay all of a sudden but this case will help them take bigger steps now...but yes...the happy ending will have to wait...😳

Originally posted by: ILoveFF
Superb update... I hope he overcomes the trauma soon

Thanks! why fear when Khushi is here?😉

Originally posted by: kkyajo
loved it 😊

Thanks!

Originally posted by: dumas
loved the update but what the hell was that inspector trying it was like he wanted priya to say he attacked her loved how khushi stood by him arnav has returned to that place in his mind it will take a bit to get him to return to the arnav who he was before the incident awesome update thanks for the pm

Thanks Dumas!! Like the inspector said...he was just doing his job.. Arnav definitely has returned to the dark corner but Khushi will yank him outta there.😆 Maybe with her help, it will be quicker...😳

Originally posted by: AKHUSHI
OMG! I could not take my mind away from this case. Until I read priya's coming and telling ,he is the one who saved me,. I was like sitting in the edge of my seat biting my nails. I was really worried yaar. It was scary situation. Luckily it got solved. Now Arnav has to cone out of the shell and it will be a tough job and emotional one for Khushi.

Hehe...I made it shocking, scary, and unexpected, I know...but these things don't happen with a warning, right? Arnav has gone back to the dark place, yes, but Khushi is here with her words of wisdom and her gestures to help him along the way.😊

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
loved the updateawesomethanks for the pm

Thank you sweetheart!😳

Originally posted by: huny.thebest
fab update K...

Thanks Huny!😃

Originally posted by: Arnav1Khushi
It was a nice update. Glad the problem got solved. I love this Khushi. She is really forgiving and poor Arnav.

Thanks! I love this Khushi too.😉 Arnav will eventually come aronud, don't worry.😳

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priyanka1998

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Posted: 11 years ago

#707

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#708

part 34
awesome...
a man like Arnav can be forgiven and given a second chance...
but not every one deserves that...
forcing on some girl is an offense...
but Khushi and Arnav are here thinking and adjusting and the most important thing is Arnav regretting and Khushi taking time to adjust thinking and considering every single aspect...
glad the girl told everything...
but Arnav is traumatized again...
cont soon dear...

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#709

oh no...the look on the face of tht girl reminded arnav of the khushi she was before 5 years ago...and arnav is haunted by tht look...he has deeply regretted his doings and tht decision of going to bar with those peoples 5 years back...

hope khushi will be able to bring him back...as its now his only hope...as now he fear to hope for good too...

loved it dear...

plzz continue soon...

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sexy_eyes

@sexy_eyes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#710

So you know that I dont cry easily when I read or watch movies or whatever but this story...I found my self getting tearful more than once. At one point, I literally had tears rolling down my cheeks and THAT is the power of your writing, my love!

I feel like no words I put into this comment can do justice to how beautifully you have written this tale. The love, the pain, the guilt, the regret...oh God...Only YOU can make us readers feel sorry for Arnav even after everything he's done!! His act was utterly unforgivable but right now, I'm desperately waiting for him to forgive himself and for her to forgive him! His sufferings are heartwrenching!

Now coming to Khushi..the way you have built her character is flawless!! there is not a single thing I would change about her and how I wish that the creatives of the show had portrayed Khushi the way you have. She's a strong woman, who lives true to her name despite the hardships of life. She's a today's woman! Strong, independent and beautiful! Amber and Aditya are the two perfect angels every parent wishes for and I really hope my little one grows up to be like them! he's only six months old right now so I got lots of time to make him turn out like Aditya! hehe

Another thing you've included in this fic that I wish happened in the real show: Aman-Anjali!! I was uber pissed off that they never showed who Aman was! I really wanted him to make an entry ad then woo Anjali and see Arnav's reaction to it in the show! hehe..oh well..I guess we'll get to see that here, thanks to you! ;)

And last but not the list...Angad-Kripa-Sur-Prateek...a big big big big thank you to you for including them in this ff! A few writers like you continue to bring them in and keep them alive for us!

Brilliantly done! I'm wishing someone from the TV world comes across this and turn this into a daily soap! (one can hope, right? lol)