Man you are great writer seriously!!!!
Damn you for making stick to each and everyword of ur fic...
Its hard to miss anything and the way you pen it down kya bolna uska waah waah!!
each feeling of a person,their turmoil,their expression u have written it so well and thats what I like about your story the most!
Its an easy flow!!!
gal if u ever write a buk plz do tell me I will defo read it and blv me when I say this stry is not less than any novel!!!
Coming to the stry now its turn for 4 A nd B
What a shock was crashed upon Sameer and Arjun!!!
something they never expected at all...
specially when they saw Riya mom's oops I mean fake mom and Commissioner together...
they role reversal and Convo left them speechless...
and i agree with what they are going through...I mean a person you considered to be close,ya in a way for whom your falling for turns out to be fake can take away the ground underneath your feet!!
arjun feelings were penned down beautifully!!!
Can actually imagine his pain...!!!!
the gal for whom he was falling for,from whom he tried to keep his distance is just a mere made up character...
he felt every moment he spend to be with RIya to be mere Illusions but He forget i guess they were even the sweet one(hope Im right)
for me even sometime even illusions gives you momentary happiness...nd arjun in a way did experience that didnt he???
loved the way you have used the concept of chess to describe their turmoil and their feelings...!!!
true they did look to me like pawns right now but the game is still on..isnt it???
Next part was of Aisha's...
the way you have described the Lady dabbang softness I guess that title wont be apt for now!!!
she did caught upon the lie of Shree and chotu easily..no doubt she is good at it afterall...
Her feeling for Sameer woah..you hit the target...!very well described!!!
Proud and happy for ETF team...
Guys to have gals like Liza and Aisha and cant forget Riya now can we and the gals to have the guys who dont have any discrimination feeling for gals in being on this field!!!
hahah poor gal looks like she is trouble to fall in love with her boss...lets see how the story will progress..i mean their stry:)
Aww sameer...bad of you..You didnt have to lash out your anger on her...she was just merely informing you about the choree whereabouts...
You broke the gals heart...!!!
Loved the way Arjun spoke softly with her...I mean akudu getting little softy well thats a pleasent thing to read;)
Indeed she was having a bad day since she could get hold of choree!!!
Next was choree feelings...!!!
Aww they had so many questiones pooled up in their mind and sad part was they dont have any answers to it...
all they can do now is find those bloody answers...
Are they losing faith in their frndship...????
I get that they are hurt but still all facts arent out right..so shouldnt they have little more faith in her...?(My pov)
Lastly the confession and facts which both the parties have gathered is revealed...
And again jo bachi kuchi zammen thi unke paro thale cheen gayi...!!!
Felt bad for Arjun...
He was the one who was most hurt in this all revelation game...
and he hid that under mask of his anger...ab gussa toh baanta hi hai...!!!
Were they feeling were really used and they later thrown along with them in trash...
will they find out the truth behind fakeness..why she hurted then even without her knowing...
will they understand her...
Cant wait to read more...
You know best part us your long updates truly I appreciate that you take out time from your schedule and give us such awesome wale updates!!!
looks like I forgot Riya...
Sigh!!!
LAstly she gave a name to her feelings...lastly!!!
love...strange thing right when you term it infatuation indeed it will be love!!!
ANd Riya case was no different...
I hurted when I read your statement when Riya thinks she has fallen for a man who dont even know that she is alive..she doesnt even know how much that man is always lost in her thoughts...!!
Love the way the case is heading!!!
I have read all ur updates tonight in one go!!!!
sorry for now will be able to comment only on this update others will do it later I hope you dont mind!!!
I couldnt stop from commenting for this update..it stole my heart away...what was in this update you might wanna ask and frankly my answer would be blank expression thats it!!!
I would be looking forward for your next updates now onwards...
action filled with right amount of emotions,nd tinge of romance added updates..yup defo worth waiting!!!
And for you and your writing three cheers!!!
BRAVO!!!
Sorry if you find any typo errors I have made in this comment im have mad this comment in sleep foggy mind!
And promise for previous updates also will comment soon!!!
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