Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2*

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: rocking_gal
Dont be she doest bite that hard🤣

I sincerely hope not. At least for my well-being😆

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#312

Okay, I am now going off to sleep. Bye gals😊

Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Plz dnt ask KBBs expansion cant say in public...lol

Well Vampu is rule book among us so she is not that dangerous us others

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Live-life

@Live-life

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Posted: 12 years ago

#314

I don't have words to describe this update!!

Seriously...I don't!! 😃

It was just too perfect!! With each person's feelings described as if I could

Just see right through them!!

For that I have to give you this...👏

And coming to the update!

It started out with a shocker!! For me atleast!! 😕

When Arjun and Rathore overheard Dustin Cohelo and Meera talking I thought that they

Might come to find out the whole truth!!

But, it wasn't the whole truth! Yet, there was glimpse about someone whom they loved very much!!

And Rathore was pretty angry 😡by what I imagined and read! And Arjun...well it's like he relived the moment when roshni had died. Wasn't that how he described it?

I could tell that he was badly hurt, hurt to his soul!! Realizing the only person who had started to make him feel human again... Was faking it, wasn't what he thought she was. Realizing that it was all an act! If only...they knew the whole truth!

And I liked the little Ayesha's day dreaming scene about Rathore!! It was cute and romantic! 😳

She really has fallen hard, hasn't she?😛 But I felt bad for her when Rathore shouted at her. He shouldn't have done that. But then he was deeply hurt as well...

What should I say about shree and Chotu? They were as badly affected as their sceniors!

With whom they had formed the sacred bond of friendship had betrayed them! 😕

And Riya...well she doesn't realize how much damage has been done to those four men whom she cherished the most.

And well... She has her own turmoil. Realizing that she loved Arjun. She loves the man who think she is no more. And she thinks she doesn't care and has probably forgotten about her.

But... She is wrong. She doesn't realize how much she has affected him. How much she has changed him.

And the las part just go to me!! Four of the men thinking that that there was no truth,no trust and no relationships in this world.

Only deception, intrigue, and manipulation. If they could just see the whole picture...

Because I know for a fact that Riya didn't do all of this on purpose. There has to be a reason behind it!

Behind everything!!

And you made me cry again at the end!! As in mote mote magarmach wale Aasun!! 😭😭

A Fantabulously amazing update!!!! 👏👏👏

Continue soon!!! And do pm me!!

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: Amri174

I don't think I will tire of saying this. Thanks again😃

You're reading my ArHi ff? Don't. It's pathetic. *bites nails nervously*
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A writer never gets tired of asying thank you..telling form experience😆
Dont be..it can be that bad...
And gal biting nails is bad habit!!😆😆
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OMG, you were crying. Sorry

Sorry to keep you waiting on their meeting. But i'll speed up my updates so you wouldn't have to wait for a long time😊

crying ab itna emotional update diya toh hum kar bhi kya kar saktha hai:D

Speed up gal...cant wait!!

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: Leki
Plz dnt ask KBBs expansion cant say in public...lol
Well Vampu is rule book among us so she is not that dangerous us others

@Leki look at live-life comment her's is also big and good one!

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: Amri174

I sincerely hope not. At least for my well-being😆

I;m also praying for that only!!!:D

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ninii

@ninii

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#318

Fantastic have no words just fabulous update
loved the way each and every emotion are described
u are doing very well just awsome
waiting for the next update
thnks for the pm

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: Leki
Plz dnt ask KBBs expansion cant say in public...lol
Well Vampu is rule book among us so she is not that dangerous us others

Hmm, now I'm curious. very very curious. *puts thinking cap on*😃

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: rocking_gal

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A writer never gets tired of asying thank you..telling form experience😆
Dont be..it can be that bad...
And gal biting nails is bad habit!!😆😆
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crying ab itna emotional update diya toh hum kar bhi kya kar saktha hai:D
Speed up gal...cant wait!!

Yeah, it's just that you guys make me very nervous.

The next update will be up the day after tomorrow😛

Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago