Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2* - Page 28

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amazing update 😊

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i was thinking wht to comment! 🤣really!
Totally shaken by this update!
May be this part is a filler but, it was the most important part of the story! The most!

It totally portraying the inner feelings , of the men ! The feeling of bitrayed by a friend, a collague , and for someone more than that!
the man was completely shaken by this! But stilll he is fighting with himself! What he exactly felt for her?? And why this is affecting him! I guess it is the hurt of the bitrayal of the person he have trusted the most!
Not only him with the all of 3 men also!
Still i would defenately want to know , what was more between them is hidden! And both can't ignore! Same thing with riya!
Oh god ! She is in love with him! Wow!
And here all of them was thinking that this all that happened was a lie!
Now i am really worried about, how will they react , when they come to know about her being alive! Seriously!

Keeping away this shaking part! I just loved the way you explained about ayesha! Thanks for keeping my request!
The tough cop outside turned into like a teenage girl, having crush on her boss! Sounds surprising!
Ha ha
and then the way she thought about sameer, as her boss ! Was written very nicely!
Aww , he vented out his all anger on her ! Poor she!

But the surprise is arjun! At a time he is showing the softness towards his fellowo member of his team; ayesha, he is also trying to comfort rathod his friend. But the word when he spoke in rathod's cabin, was really like saying from a shattering heart!
And finally the team also could see Rawte! The actual Rawte! And his anger!

So the tina shah case was like this! And this girl too was involed in this! Are NIB goan tell this to ETF??
Oh yess please! Arjun and riya seriously need to cross-path again! 😉
but the unpredictable thing is , how will he react! He might hate her!
And one more thing, none of the team memebr never thought this thing technically, like! They only thought about the lie! But what might be the reason behind this they still need to think , about it after the shock treatment!

So riya is gona crack this siddharth case!

Overall this chapter is the key to the , upcoming part regarding the personal feelings , and the amount of hurt they are bearing right now and how this level will burst and come up to riya and , most importantly how will she feel , when she will get to knw that she was just not a former fellow member of the team , besides more than that!

One more thing, i never knw you are such a die hard romantic person!
I would really love to read the romantic parts explained by you as well!

God this story is driving me crazy!

Precap is interesting! So we will get shriza next part!

And ariya also!❤️

wonderful part!

Originally posted by: jia03

amazing update 😊

and an interesting precap😊

Originally posted by: -Siyaa-

Interesting very interesting!!

Rawte- Rathore evesdropping there seniors conversation 😆😆😆

What's going between Mr Dustin and Riya Mom ...inka bhi koi chakkar hai kya

All in All

I loved the Anger of everyone one on Riya which was expected ...but mr Rawte on His Riya ...now that a start

I guess of all Shree & chotu would be hurt the most ...really feel bad for them...

Ayesha is in love ...chalo u need to handle two lovestories both blooming ...

As far as Club Z is there...very interesting😉

All in all a loevly update

hey dear
thnx 4 update and pm
awesome and some truthreving part
commisner and riya's mother convo heard by arjun and sam-------------------------------- dangerous 4 riya's plan
the expression shown by arjun-sam is depicted very purely and clearly
they were hurted can be seen through their expression
poor aisha suffered 4 her no mistake
aisha's inner feelings 4 rathore and team was beautiful
shree and chotu r 2 very much hurted to see that their best friend lied to them of her identity
the question of riya mother 2 lied was even more painful
the awesome 4 men of etf
bond with 3 different bonds with riya dialouge was fantastic
all 4 felt betrayed by riya's like
their anger towards riya is obvious
would love to see when all 4 will come 2 know that riya is alive?????
loved the way arjun tried to suprees his inner emotions
riya's inner turnmoil were perfectly depicted
the relevetion of the girl gave a lot of help to riya and her team
precapes is damn gud
great and awesome update
thnx once again
continue soon
will be waiting

Originally posted by: sharmaayushi

hey dear
thnx 4 update and pm
awesome and some truthreving part
commisner and riya's mother convo heard by arjun and sam-------------------------------- dangerous 4 riya's plan
the expression shown by arjun-sam is depicted very purely and clearly
they were hurted can be seen through their expression
poor aisha suffered 4 her no mistake
aisha's inner feelings 4 rathore and team was beautiful
shree and chotu r 2 very much hurted to see that their best friend lied to them of her identity
the question of riya mother 2 lied was even more painful
the awesome 4 men of etf
bond with 3 different bonds with riya dialouge was fantastic
all 4 felt betrayed by riya's like
their anger towards riya is obvious
would love to see when all 4 will come 2 know that riya is alive?????
loved the way arjun tried to suprees his inner emotions
riya's inner turnmoil were perfectly depicted
the relevetion of the girl gave a lot of help to riya and her team
precapes is damn gud
great and awesome update
thnx once again
continue soon
will be waiting

will being waiting 4 riya to kick start dear
try to update really soon dear
plzzz