Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2* - Page 29

Originally posted by: sharmaayushi

will being waiting 4 riya to kick start dear
try to update really soon dear
plzzz

Originally posted by: Aabish_02

Amazing update
in ur every update till now u described every one thoughts and feelings very beautifully.
so aisha loves sam
etf angry with riya
arjun is really hurt and angry with riya
everyone misunderstanding her
precap seems interesting
update nxt part soon

Originally posted by: madmadona

awesome update

finally almost half truth is out

really feel bad for the guys poor them

eagerly waiting for the rest to unfold

precap is interesting

shree finds something on Club Z footage😛 & threat for arjun omg

cont soon

Originally posted by: Leki

Amazing part...

I was feeling so bad reading this part...Every one misunderstanding and angry on Riya...

Each and every character's emotions beautifully potrayed...

Arjun most hurt by his Riya's lies...

Aisha in love with her boss Sam... Loved Aisha's thoughts...

Riya!!!

Case is getting more and more interesting

Continue soon...

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Edited~


i was thinking wht to comment! 🤣really!
Totally shaken by this update!
May be this part is a filler but, it was the most important part of the story! The most!

It totally portraying the inner feelings , of the men ! The feeling of bitrayed by a friend, a collague , and for someone more than that!
the man was completely shaken by this! But stilll he is fighting with himself! What he exactly felt for her?? And why this is affecting him! I guess it is the hurt of the bitrayal of the person he have trusted the most!
Not only him with the all of 3 men also!
Still i would defenately want to know , what was more between them is hidden! And both can't ignore! Same thing with riya!
Oh god ! She is in love with him! Wow!
And here all of them was thinking that this all that happened was a lie!
Now i am really worried about, how will they react , when they come to know about her being alive! Seriously!

Keeping away this shaking part! I just loved the way you explained about ayesha! Thanks for keeping my request!
The tough cop outside turned into like a teenage girl, having crush on her boss! Sounds surprising!
Ha ha
and then the way she thought about sameer, as her boss ! Was written very nicely!
Aww , he vented out his all anger on her ! Poor she!

But the surprise is arjun! At a time he is showing the softness towards his fellowo member of his team; ayesha, he is also trying to comfort rathod his friend. But the word when he spoke in rathod's cabin, was really like saying from a shattering heart!
And finally the team also could see Rawte! The actual Rawte! And his anger!

So the tina shah case was like this! And this girl too was involed in this! Are NIB goan tell this to ETF??
Oh yess please! Arjun and riya seriously need to cross-path again! 😉
but the unpredictable thing is , how will he react! He might hate her!
And one more thing, none of the team memebr never thought this thing technically, like! They only thought about the lie! But what might be the reason behind this they still need to think , about it after the shock treatment!

So riya is gona crack this siddharth case!

Overall this chapter is the key to the , upcoming part regarding the personal feelings , and the amount of hurt they are bearing right now and how this level will burst and come up to riya and , most importantly how will she feel , when she will get to knw that she was just not a former fellow member of the team , besides more than that!

One more thing, i never knw you are such a die hard romantic person!
I would really love to read the romantic parts explained by you as well!

God this story is driving me crazy!

Precap is interesting! So we will get shriza next part!

And ariya also!❤️

wonderful part!

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

One more thing i forgot to add abt the precap!
Threat to arjun's life😲!
This is gona interesting!
Any fixed time for the next update??🤣