Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2* - Page 27

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Posted: 12 years ago

AUTHOR'S NOTE


Thank you, thank you and thank you for your delightful comments and responses!🤗


You cleared all my doubts and proved that you guys are awesome!!!😛


I want to personally assure all of you that I am not going to discontinue this story. I will see it through till its rightful conclusion, hopefully delivering as per your expectations.


Coming to Chapter 4A & B.



This is more of a filler chapter. A lot of action does happen, and the story does moves forward, but not by much.


The real focus is on how the team responds to the series of revelations about Riya. Especially Arjun's agony, and some Raesha moments.


Hope you like it!!!




Scroll down for Chapter 4A.


Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part...
I was feeling so bad reading this part...Every one misunderstanding and angry on Riya...
Each and every character's emotions beautifully potrayed...
Arjun most hurt by his Riya's lies...
Aisha in love with her boss Sam... Loved Aisha's thoughts...
Riya!!!
Case is getting more and more interesting
Continue soon...

Edited by Leki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res
me again second
leki

unres

it was awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super-duper, block buster and mindblowing update dear.
I just love it.
You have beautifully writeen all pov.
So Arjun and Rathore heard the conversation between commisioner and Riya's mom conversation.
A they come to know that Riya has hidden some truth from them.
Commisioner wants to tell etf member the truth but Riya's mom stoping him to do that
loved rathore and arjun POV.
arjun thinks that riya is bertrayed him. Her love, her care was just a lie.
and rathore also angry.
they think that riya is just a lier.
serously they loved riya as a collegue, as a friend, sister and many things but feel bertrayed.
loved ayesha thinking.
she had a crush on rathore but rathore all anger brusted or poor ayesha.
ayesha feels crying but it was not rathore falut because he also feeling sad and yet bertrayed.
loved samjun talk.
loved riya pov.
riya is falling for arjun but thinks her dead doesnt effect arjun and he does not remember her.
but poor girl dont know who she affect arjun.
yaar it was shocking update. All are angered to riya.
but technically dekha jaye its not riya fault.
riya is doing her job to save her country.
so riya cracked siddharth case.
i think ETF and NIB case are fully same.
i am thinking when they know about riya what was that reaction and specially our super cop arjun.
i just hope they dont angered on riya.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.
or jaldi update dena
Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


leki i am angry with you????
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mastmegha22



leki i am angry with you????

Why darling??? What happened??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leki


Why darling??? What happened??



because main first nahi aaye
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ah ha once in a blue moon i come 1st and u behave like this... dnt force me to lobb u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leki

Ah ha once in a blue moon i come 1st and u behave like this... dnt force me to lobb u



accha bab sorry mai to mazak kar rahi thi

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