Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2*

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Suryatapa sengupta

@1993.ssg

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Fantastic update Love from the core of my heart Love way how Arjun handle manager of the club Who is him Riya and her team member talking about? Who is the girl whom Riya saved? What is written in the paper? Riya thinks ETF member doesnot remenber her Like Shree's Rathore's and Arjun's thought. When saw that little he rember Riya Love the way U describe the ARIYA 1st meet to their last scene . Thanks for the pm Waiting for the next part As usual my like is not working

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg
Fantastic update Love from the core of my heart Love way how Arjun handle manager of the club Who is him Riya and her team member talking about? Who is the girl whom Riya saved? What is written in the paper? Riya thinks ETF member doesnot remenber her Like Shree's Rathore's and Arjun's thought. When saw that little he rember Riya Love the way U describe the ARIYA 1st meet to their last scene . Thanks for the pm Waiting for the next part As usual my like is not working

No need to like, your comment is more than enough😊

Thanks for reading the chapters so carefully! You picked up all the important elements. And a lot of suspense is still in store, so wait for that;)

Couldn't resist adding the first Ariya meeting. My most favorite scene in the show😃

Will certainly PM you about the next update:)

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Superb update
Love Arjun n rathor's pov
Just amazing
Continue soon plz

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: shah10
Superb update
Love Arjun n rathor's pov
Just amazing
Continue soon plz

Thanks, dear.

Arjun's PoV in particular was quite difficult to write- to show both his attraction for Riya and to reconcile it with his feelings for Roshni and his guilt at the same time.

Stay tuned for more😊

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: khemanisarita
WOW
AWESOME UPDATE
PLEASE DONT END THIS STORY
I LOVE THIS STORY

Your wish is my command😊

Not going to discontinue the story as long as there are readers like you😃

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Aabish_02

@Aabish_02

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

AWESOME UPDATE
loved the part where riya remembering etf 😒
arjun feeling towards riya was the bestest part
the feelings were very beautifully described
so riya is special for arjun
shree remembering riya
arjun and rathode saw riya s mother
over all it was a fantastic update
eagerly waiting for nxt part
thanks for the pm

Edited by Aabish_02 - 12 years ago

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856040

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

i feel so bad for arjun he's suffering so much

rathore still not forgiving arjun

poor shree and chotu kya jhatka laga

aur yeh mrs mukherjee kya kar rahi hai

awesome update

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856040

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

i feel so bad for arjun he's suffering so much

rathore still not forgiving arjun

poor shree and chotu kya jhatka laga

aur yeh mrs mukherjee kya kar rahi hai

awesome update

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sony1990

@sony1990

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

hey was eagerly waiting for the update and as soon as i saw the msg before the update seriously i got dissapointed i really love the story yar please dont think about stopping the story even before it got started please please

and coming to the update i loved it arjun's emotions were wonderful waiting eagerly for story to unfold and cant wait for 6th aug pls update soon and dont think of abandoning it i will surely follow even if any one doesnt

ur faithful reader,

shravani