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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aabish_02

AWESOME UPDATE
loved the part where riya remembering etf 😒
arjun feeling towards riya was the bestest part
the feelings were very beautifully described
so riya is special for arjun
shree remembering riya
arjun and rathode saw riya s mother
over all it was a fantastic update
eagerly waiting for nxt part
thanks for the pm


Thanks a lot for commenting! You're one of my faithful readers, I always look forward to your comments.

The Arjun part just flowed for me while writing it. I enjoyed it myself😉 I am glad that you did too.

Is Riya special for Arjun? Certainly yes.

But why? That's a very loaded question.

Congrats, because you are the first one to raise this issue which lies at the heart of the fic.

The way I see it, their emotions are very complicated. It lies somewhere between physical attraction and love, neither here nor there. Not easily defined. As per the show, Arjun and Riya didn't get to spend a lot of time with one another, maybe 5-6 months. And that's what I am going with in my story as well.

Whatever it is, there is certainly a lot of passion, which is why I titled the fic, "Deception, Intrigue...and Passion?".

They have feelings for each other, true. But the nature of the feelings is something both are unaware of.

Certainly, both of them are special for each other. But where is the trust and understanding that becomes important in a long-standing relationship? That is just one of the things I will be exploring in this story.

The journey of the two characters from ignorance to understanding. From immaturity to maturity. To an awareness of what they mean to each other.


Hope you enjoy the ride😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Christeee

i feel so bad for arjun he's suffering so much

rathore still not forgiving arjun
poor shree and chotu kya jhatka laga
aur yeh mrs mukherjee kya kar rahi hai
awesome update


Thanks for commenting! Glad that you enjoyed the chapter.

What did you think about Arjun's memories of Riya? Tell me, bitwaa!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sony1990

hey was eagerly waiting for the update and as soon as i saw the msg before the update seriously i got dissapointed i really love the story yar please dont think about stopping the story even before it got started please please

and coming to the update i loved it arjun's emotions were wonderful waiting eagerly for story to unfold and cant wait for 6th aug pls update soon and dont think of abandoning it i will surely follow even if any one doesnt
ur faithful reader,
shravani


Hi Shravani.

Don't worry, the author's note was a mixed product of disappointment and insanity.

There's no way I am going to stop writing this story. I promise you personally that I will complete it, at least for readers like you😊

Rest assured! There's going to be a lot of ArIya romance and suspense in store for you.

See ya;)

Originally posted by: jia03

awesome update👏👏👏

and thanks for the p.m😊


You're welcome!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Remarkable update swthrt...!!!!!

Loved the way Arjun tackled the whole situation in the club n get that tapes frm the manager.

Awww she teased MK n coz of that he blushed like a gal.

Whose name n address were mentioned on that chit??????

Thy hv to tell him. Who is that him??????

Is it related to Sik???????

Loved Riya's POV but she judged thm all wrong as thy never forget her.

Poor Shree couldn't get enough sleep coz of his akdu boss.

OMG Shree was all praises for Arjun.

Wow he also noticed that Arjun only responded to Riya after his wife's death. His observing skills r also not that bad too.

Loved Shree's POV related to Riya.

Samjun r too close but still miles away frm eacother coz no one take the initative to mend that gap btwn thm which arises coz of Roshini's death. Thy both understand eachother to well n was slightly thinking on the same line. Sam knw that he needed him but still misunderstoods him.

Awww that young girl reminded him of Riya. Loved the way he described Riya.

Arjun's POV about Riya was beautifully written. U describe each n everything exceptionally well whether its their first met , her importance in the team, whn she said that aurat ki ……. Wala dialogue or whn she consumed X Zora II through Arjun's POV.

He felf something for her but don't want to accept it.

Choree got surprised to knw that no Riya mukherjjee lived in that house which thy thought to be hers.Poor guys don't knw that there r even bigger shocks thn this waiting for thm.

OMG Samjun saw Riya's mom in commissioner's office.

I m sure that thy both got a shock of their life after seing Riya's mother in that attire.

Hats off to u dr!!!!!!!!

Precap looks interesting

Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.

Continue as soon as possible.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aks13

Remarkable update swthrt...!!!!!

Loved the way Arjun tackled the whole situation in the club n get that tapes frm the manager.

Awww she teased MK n coz of that he blushed like a gal.

Whose name n address were mentioned on that chit??????

Thy hv to tell him. Who is that him??????

Is it related to Sik???????

Loved Riya's POV but she judged thm all wrong as thy never forget her.

Poor Shree couldn't get enough sleep coz of his akdu boss.

OMG Shree was all praises for Arjun.

Wow he also noticed that Arjun only responded to Riya after his wife's death. His observing skills r also not that bad too.

Loved Shree's POV related to Riya.

Samjun r too close but still miles away frm eacother coz no one take the initative to mend that gap btwn thm which arises coz of Roshini's death. Thy both understand eachother to well n was slightly thinking on the same line. Sam knw that he needed him but still misunderstoods him.

Awww that young girl reminded him of Riya. Loved the way he described Riya.

Arjun's POV about Riya was beautifully written. U describe each n everything exceptionally well whether its their first met , her importance in the team, whn she said that aurat ki ''. Wala dialogue or whn she consumed X Zora II through Arjun's POV.

He felf something for her but don't want to accept it.

Choree got surprised to knw that no Riya mukherjjee lived in that house which thy thought to be hers.Poor guys don't knw that there r even bigger shocks thn this waiting for thm.

OMG Samjun saw Riya's mom in commissioner's office.

I m sure that thy both got a shock of their life after seing Riya's mother in that attire.

Hats off to u dr!!!!!!!!

Precap looks interesting

Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.

Continue as soon as possible.


Yayy! Aks commented.

I just love your comments because you read every detail very carefully and raise a lot of important questions. It's like you drank my story in, you're that good as a reader😛

Glad that you are enjoying the updates. It's comments like yours from which I draw inspiration for writing.

Thanks, and wait for Ch 4 to be posted on the 6th of Aug!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome,amazing wonderful ,fantastic dr

I love it

I read in 1 go

I love ur all words tht is remain my mind
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Riya got link abt the killer... but why does that chit remind her of ETF & Arjun...
Arjun tackled the situation really well...
Shree thinking abt Riya nd he decided to return her things to her family... but he is in for some shocking revelations...
Riya thinks every one in ETF forget her... dear ur are truly mistaken!!!
Arjun's thoughts on Riya beautifully written... if Riya was alive they must hv shown Arjun's feelings and actions & reason behind it same way...
So Rathore is miffed with Arjun...
So Coehlo has some role to play in this Riya's so called death...
Arjun and Rathore sees Riya's mom... well she is not Riya's mom for sure...
How i wish they show something like this and had bought Riya back... i miss her...continue soon...

About ending the story plz dont do it... consider your regular readers yar...
My like button is on strike...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow good!!! continue soon!!!!!!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update... 👏

lvd it...

arjun reminded of riya and his thoughts were beautifully portryed...

shree and chottu went to meet riya's mother but rathod and arjun got a chance to meet her...😆

precap sounds interesting...

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..brilliant update...
Soo finally the truth of Riya will be out soon...
Interesting..Very interesting...
Arjun's thoughts abt Riya were amazing..he remembered eacj n every detail abt her..sweet..
N u forgot to mention my name who comment...haha..never mind..
But thanks fr writing such awexome story..
Update soon..

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