Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2*

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Shanafr

@Shanafr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Fantastic awesome update loveit plz cont soon

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

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+ 13

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

res

unres...now thats what i call a update👏👏

ps, dont u dare to discontinue this ff, sys??😡

ok, come back to update...ahaan, very clever girl. i was thinking how and why suddenly they went back to riya, and here is the reason. hmm...poor shree always phasta hain becoz of his insmoniac yet sharp mind boss😆

and then...he went near riya drawer, and voila~!!...nice.

on the other hand, arjun also thinking abt her...well to be honest, i didnt see first epi or their meeting, but they way u describe his feelings abt the meeting was fabulous!!! i wished it was the same thing that could hv happened in show...sigh!

ok...then some little girl remidning of riya...well now i wonder riya is also great actress too...all those acting abt shooting...very clever😆 and in that process hotwa loosed his heart little little thoda thoda

and then...shree chotu going to riya's house...aww porr them, how much courage it take...and then shocking revealation!!!! its not riya's house! some amreeka wala ka house...now ...

and also...commissioner is talking to some lady...omg riya's mom???? umm, fake mom😉 well lets see how samjun will react on that.

precap is nice...what more is on the way for us? waiting already...

Edited by riyasarkar007 - 12 years ago

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Jorja
Fantastic awesome update loveit plz cont soon

Thanks!

Will continue on 6/8 if I have more encouraging readers like you commenting😊

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sravz23

@sravz23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

as i said earlier u r an awesome writer.

keep this suspense rolling.

i am totally hooked to this ff.

continue sooon.

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: sravz23
as i said earlier u r an awesome writer.
keep this suspense rolling.
i am totally hooked to this ff.
continue sooon.

Thanks a lot for commenting consistently, Sravz.

It is the ultimate reward for a writer to know that her readers are following the story closely.

I really appreciate it.

Chap 4 will be up on 6/8 depending on...you know what😃

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sharmaayushi

@sharmaayushi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

thnx 4 the pm dear
and thnx 4 such a long and awesome part
loved it to the core of my heart
hey dear loved the update
riya and her team is really excellent
loved shree's inner feelings and emotions
arjun remembering riya was great
the way arjun described riya's first meeting,his feelings,riya's dialouges,riya's clip etc was awesomeand shree dialouges after looking into riya's drawer was heart touching
hey plz its my request plz show the feelings of sam towards riya too, plz if u can otherwise its ok
hope soon the etf team faces the real riya
riya's part remembering the etf team made emotional
precapes sounds gud
plzz update soon
will be waiting 4 more wounderful and awesome parts
plz pm me when updated
thnx 4 the pm once again
awesome work
continue soon.

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: unishaz
awesome

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: sharmaayushi
thnx 4 the pm dear
and thnx 4 such a long and awesome part
loved it to the core of my heart
hey dear loved the update
riya and her team is really excellent
loved shree's inner feelings and emotions
arjun remembering riya was great
the way arjun described riya's first meeting,his feelings,riya's dialouges,riya's clip etc was awesomeand shree dialouges after looking into riya's drawer was heart touching
hey plz its my request plz show the feelings of sam towards riya too, plz if u can otherwise its ok
hope soon the etf team faces the real riya
riya's part remembering the etf team made emotional
precapes sounds gud
plzz update soon
will be waiting 4 more wounderful and awesome parts
plz pm me when updated
thnx 4 the pm once again
awesome work
continue soon.

Thank you, thank you and thank you😛

I am really glad that you liked the chapter.

Your comment shows how you picked up every aspect of my story. That's amazing.

As per your request, you'll certainly get more updates.

Keep reading and appreciating my story.

Regards,

Amrutha😳

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sharmaayushi

@sharmaayushi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

i will surely loved it dear
tum update to karo
phir dekho kitne comments milte hai dear.

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007
res

unres...now thats what i call a update👏👏

ps, dont u dare to discontinue this ff, sys??😡

ok, come back to update...ahaan, very clever girl. i was thinking how and why suddenly they went back to riya, and here is the reason. hmm...poor shree always phasta hain becoz of his insmoniac yet sharp mind boss😆

and then...he went near riya drawer, and voila~!!...nice.

on the other hand, arjun also thinking abt her...well to be honest, i didnt see first epi or their meeting, but they way u describe his feelings abt the meeting was fabulous!!! i wished it was the same thing that could hv happened in show...sigh!

ok...then some little girl remidning of riya...well now i wonder riya is also great actress too...all those acting abt shooting...very clever😆 and in that process hotwa loosed his heart little little thoda thoda

and then...shree chotu going to riya's house...aww porr them, how much courage it take...and then shocking revealation!!!! its not riya's house! some amreeka wala ka house...now ...

and also...commissioner is talking to some lady...omg riya's mom???? umm, fake mom😉 well lets see how samjun will react on that.

precap is nice...what more is on the way for us? waiting already...

I bow down to your wishes, my dear. I will not discontinue the story.

You should really watch their first meeting, it's so intense and passionate. What I am trying to convey in about 1000 words is conveyed in a single glance between the characters. Credit to Sana and Shaleen, they're awesome😃

Ya, so now you got the explanation for why they went back to Riya?😉 Happy?

I miss Shree, Chottu and Riya so much that I can't help adding their moments in each and every update.😭

And yes, the ETF is getting more and more doubts about Riya. Where will all of this end?

Wait for Chapter 4;) And thanks for the lovely comment.