Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2*

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Pooja-Piya

@shilpa401

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Love this story pls don't stop !!!
Keep writting more !!!
So good

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Live-life

@Live-life

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

O mi god!! 😲

This update was sooo interesting!!!

I loved it!!

It was all mixed emotions in this one. With shree remembering Riya and visiting her house along with Chotu but finding out that it wasn't her house!

Yeah that was a shocker! 😲

And and Rathore and Arjun seeing the same women they consoled on the republic day, whom they assumed to be Mrs.Mukherjee! But I doubt that is true...too obvious to be true!

Ab ye coincidence tho ho nahi Saktha! Right?

With shree and Chotu finding out that riya's home wasn't her home, Arjun and Rathore finding the 'Mrs.Mukherjee' in the commissioner's office?

As the saying goes

1st time is chance

2nd time is coincidence

And 3rd time...it's a pattern!! 🥱

And there is indeed more to Riya than what meets the eye! But it is true that she was the one who was starting to arouse feeling the great acp heart...isn't it?

And Arjun did admit that he was affected by her and still is😊 and he did say that maybe she was something more! Well I am glad😃

Ur Riya sahi kehthi thi, "Aurat ki kabiliyath par kabhi shak nahi karna chaiye"

This was an awesome update nd a rocking one too👏👏👏

And it did make me cry at some prts!! 😭

This was an emotion packed update!!

Great job!!! 👏

Update. Soon!!!!

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: shilpa401
Love this story pls don't stop !!!
Keep writting more !!!
So good

Originally posted by: ramishafariha
wow good!!! continue soon!!!!!!😊

Guys, don't worry! I will be continuing the tale. Update this Tuesday😊

Thanks a lot for commenting😃

Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: nakshatra92
awesome update... 👏

lvd it...

arjun reminded of riya and his thoughts were beautifully portryed...

shree and chottu went to meet riya's mother but rathod and arjun got a chance to meet her...😆

precap sounds interesting...

update soon

Thanks! I am glad that you liked the chapter.

Next chapter is going to be very thrilling😊 See you this tuesday with an update;)

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Pisces_Gurl
Wow..brilliant update...
Soo finally the truth of Riya will be out soon...
Interesting..Very interesting...
Arjun's thoughts abt Riya were amazing..he remembered eacj n every detail abt her..sweet..
N u forgot to mention my name who comment...haha..never mind..
But thanks fr writing such awexome story..
Update soon..

Yes, Riya's truth will be out soon.

Arjun's thoughts about Riya made me cry a little bit myself. I really enjoyed putting into words how he might have felt.

Sorry for leaving you out, I didn't mean to! Going to edit the post and include your name ASAP.😃

Will update this Tuesday😊

Thanks for commenting;)

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: Leki
Awesome update...
Riya got link abt the killer... but why does that chit remind her of ETF & Arjun...
Arjun tackled the situation really well...
Shree thinking abt Riya nd he decided to return her things to her family... but he is in for some shocking revelations...
Riya thinks every one in ETF forget her... dear ur are truly mistaken!!!
Arjun's thoughts on Riya beautifully written... if Riya was alive they must hv shown Arjun's feelings and actions & reason behind it same way...
So Rathore is miffed with Arjun...
So Coehlo has some role to play in this Riya's so called death...
Arjun and Rathore sees Riya's mom... well she is not Riya's mom for sure...
How i wish they show something like this and had bought Riya back... i miss her...continue soon...

About ending the story plz dont do it... consider your regular readers yar...
My like button is on strike...

Thanks a lot for commenting, Leki😊

A clarification, it's not the paper that reminds Riya of the ETF and Arjun. Her thoughts keep going back to her friends even when she's working, she is that attached to them😊

And Riya is mistaken about the true extent of her friends' attachment for her. But she will realize it very soon.

Some clues about Riya's 'mother' will be given in the next chapter. And yes, Coelho will play an imp. role in the tale.

Rest assured, i am not discontinuing the story. If i have readers like u, it's more than enough.

And I also wish they'd bring her back, but i guess that's impossible.😭

Don't worry about liking, your comment made my day😛

Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: Live-life
O mi god!! 😲
This update was sooo interesting!!!
I loved it!!
It was all mixed emotions in this one. With shree remembering Riya and visiting her house along with Chotu but finding out that it wasn't her house!
Yeah that was a shocker! 😲
And and Rathore and Arjun seeing the same women they consoled on the republic day, whom they assumed to be Mrs.Mukherjee! But I doubt that is true...too obvious to be true!
Ab ye coincidence tho ho nahi Saktha! Right?
With shree and Chotu finding out that riya's home wasn't her home, Arjun and Rathore finding the 'Mrs.Mukherjee' in the commissioner's office?
As the saying goes
1st time is chance
2nd time is coincidence
And 3rd time...it's a pattern!! 🥱

And there is indeed more to Riya than what meets the eye! But it is true that she was the one who was starting to arouse feeling the great acp heart...isn't it?
And Arjun did admit that he was affected by her and still is😊 and he did say that maybe she was something more! Well I am glad😃
Ur Riya sahi kehthi thi, "Aurat ki kabiliyath par kabhi shak nahi karna chaiye"
This was an awesome update nd a rocking one too👏👏👏
And it did make me cry at some prts!! 😭

This was an emotion packed update!!
Great job!!! 👏

Update. Soon!!!!

I am glad you liked the update!

Couldn't resist putting more of Shree in this chapter. I guess he related more to Riya more than anyone else, because both of them are the youngest among the ETF members. So i wanted to explore how he dealt with Riya's death.

And yes, there is a lot more to Riya than what meets the eye. What exactly, you'll soon find out😉

I also added the "Aurat ki.." line because it is my most favorite Riya moment in the show. You can see Arjun understanding her worth for the first time as he remains silent. I am glad that you liked it😛

Aww, I'm sorry I made u cry But happier times will soon be here, I promise.

Thanks for commenting!!!

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: Mishti_k5
Awesome,amazing wonderful ,fantastic dr

I love it

I read in 1 go

I love ur all words tht is remain my mind

Thanks for commenting, Mishti!

I am glad that you enjoyed all the three chapters. It's amazing that you read it in one go😊

Thanks a lot for remembering all my words so vividly, that's a great compliment to me as a writer.

Keep on reading and commenting;)

Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago

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Sia

@satanslove

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

A amazing thriller story!!

It is very well written and well etched story with all the characters amazingly written...

So now everyone knows that there is somenthing more that what meets to the eye...and of course add the case to to it .

All in all ..amazing read ..makes u want more

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: sips_crazy
A amazing thriller story!!

It is very well written and well etched story with all the characters amazingly written...

So now everyone knows that there is somenthing more that what meets to the eye...and of course add the case to to it .

All in all ..amazing read ..makes u want more