Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2*

IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007
lamba??? ahaan...nice, me loving it...

pls update soon tomorrow...cant wait for the story to move

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EkNoKiNashedi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

sorry if i am starting to irritate u by my nagging..well its like finding needle in jungle 🤣 finding hard a gd story that too based on ariya...so i cant help...also i hv become nagging queen overnight thanks to my fnds 🤣

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007
sorry if i am starting to irritate u by my nagging..well its like finding needle in jungle 🤣 finding hard a gd story that too based on ariya...so i cant help...also i hv become nagging queen overnight thanks to my fnds 🤣

Nah, I perfectly understand.

Even I have read such wonderful stories by FF writers who stop at a vital point, and I just wish they would continue soon;)

To think that someone thinks the same of my story is the best compliment I can get;)

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Pisces_Gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Hey...
Wow...just fabulous...
What a great story yaar..
The way u write the entire scenes..its looks like we are actually watching the scenes infront of us..
Riya chAracter iss soo mysterious yet so charming..
N Arjun feeling her closer to him..wow..his heart n ind in fight abt that..
Whats with Shree-Liza...sumthing is up with Liza mayb thats y she turned away..
N our Raesha...supercool...
Waiting fr the next mor interesting update..
N i hope itbwill be more loger than this..

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Pisces_Gurl
Hey...
Wow...just fabulous...
What a great story yaar..
The way u write the entire scenes..its looks like we are actually watching the scenes infront of us..
Riya chAracter iss soo mysterious yet so charming..
N Arjun feeling her closer to him..wow..his heart n ind in fight abt that..
Whats with Shree-Liza...sumthing is up with Liza mayb thats y she turned away..
N our Raesha...supercool...
Waiting fr the next mor interesting update..
N i hope itbwill be more loger than this..

Thanks for commenting!

I am glad that you liked my portrayal of Riya.

The comment about the realistic nature of my story...it's making me blush endlessly;)

Things are going to get more heated up in the future chapters...Chapter 3 will be posted today, so do read it to see whether it meets yours expectations😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: Amri174

First of all, let me thank you from the bottom of my heart for such a lovely comment.

It is certainly encouraging for a fanfiction writer to know that she is doing a good job, and that the readers, who are also the viewers of the show in question, are relating to the characters the same way while reading a story.

The long update was planned and executed in the last 2 days- I intended to give you all some delicious stuff to read, considering that this story still has a long way to go😊 At least 12-14 more chapters.

And yes, I definitely miss the camaraderie between Riya-Shree-Chottu. 😭 That's the reason they're going to be one of the highpoints of the fic. And so will the relationships between the various members of the team. Everyone will have an important role to play in my story.

And the Riya Kashyap of this story has the same heart as Riya Mukherjee. But she has her own issues, and she's much stronger than how they portrayed her in the show. I am glad that you liked it.

I am waiting for next Saturday too! Till then,take care😊

Hey I love how you reply back to my comment. Sorry didn't say anything about the first one. Actually I was going to but then your chapter was already up and thought to comment directly.

No need for thank you's :) It is true that you're doing a fab job on this FF and you're a mindblowing writer so keep it up and hopefully you always get inspired. I also love how you're up and straight with your updates like when you gonna update and all and the fact that you still have some more chapters left made me grin like an idiot in front of the pc :P

Okay so gonna wait for your next chapter now!

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey I love how you reply back to my comment. Sorry didn't say anything about the first one. Actually I was going to but then your chapter was already up and thought to comment directly.

No need for thank you's :) It is true that you're doing a fab job on this FF and you're a mindblowing writer so keep it up and hopefully you always get inspired. I also love how you're up and straight with your updates like when you gonna update and all and the fact that you still have some more chapters left made me grin like an idiot in front of the pc :P

Okay so gonna wait for your next chapter now!

Thanks again, Benaz.

I really appreciate all the compliments that you're throwing my way.

Never mind that you didn't comment about the first one, you did on the second and that's all that matters.

I have a lot of shortcomings, but one good thing about me is that I'm punctual.

So you may rest assured that you'll always be getting your updates on time😊

See ya in about 4 hrs;) It's soon going to be 5 p.m. here in India.

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