Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2*

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007
sat??? aww making me wait...chalo its worth waiting...and expecting their precious expressions wen they find out ri is alive and samjun ww3🤣

ps am i being too greedy?🤣

Not at all😊

me honoured😳

Nope, it's me who is honoured to have readers like you😃

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: 123pritha
nice ff⭐️

Thank you😊

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nakshatra92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

awesome update...

riya's almost meeting arjun ... 😆

and her thought " think of the devil and the devil is here" 😆

so etf going ti knw more abt riya's death ...

hope they will get to know the truth...

sam - jun ...

update soon

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

awesome update
poor choree miss riya so much
omg riya almost caught that killer but uff etf came in between
loved the way both sense each other's presence
loved this cool arjun & brave riya
precap s interesting
cont soon

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MaaneetDeewangi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Awesome update!! 👍🏼 Loved it:) I'm so hooked to this story can't wait for the next part!!

Edited by MaaneetDeewangi - 12 years ago

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Live-life

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

That was a great update!!

I adore it! 👏

Well, well what do you know? So Riya does know how to shoot eh?

Sch she should get an award for being such a good actress!! 😆

I mean...how does she. Pretend no to know how to shoot?

Well tht girl has something in her for sure!! No wonder the ACP will fall for her!! 😉

Oh and the little scene between Ayesha and Rathore was cute! Hayeee ayesha was blushing! Too cute!! 😳 Ab kya Karen rowdy Rathore hai hi aase!! 😆😉

And the famous club Z is quite suspiscious! Kya pata is club Z ki wajjah ETF aur NIB miljayein?!

Aur Arjun ji toh as usual super se upper the! Aur wait...perfect + Mardala!! 😆

And he did sense thatriya was there! Oh god mine itni jaldi expect nahi Kia thi! But I am glad that atleast he did feel something!

Hayee avai to surf ehsaaas hua hai! Jab Milan ho ga to pata nahi kya hoga! God! I can't wait for that day! 😃

Fantabulously amazing and grawesome update!!! 👏👏👏

And Sach meri you did perfectionalize your writing skills! Well I guess you can never stop improving can you! 😉

As Arjun said, "nobody is perfect" 😆 (JUST KIDDING)

Update soon!!

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: nakshatra92
awesome update...

riya's almost meeting arjun ... 😆

and her thought " think of the devil and the devil is here" 😆

so etf going ti knw more abt riya's death ...

hope they will get to know the truth...

sam - jun ...

update soon

I am glad that you enjoyed it😊

Originally posted by: MaaneetDeewangi
Awesome update!! 👍🏼 Loved it:) I'm so hooked to this story can't wait for the next part!!

Thank you;)

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: madmadona
awesome update
poor choree miss riya so much
omg riya almost caught that killer but uff etf came in between
loved the way both sense each other's presence
loved this cool arjun & brave riya
precap s interesting
cont soon

Hey, thanks for commenting😊

I am happy that you appreciated all the moments between the various members of the team.

Will be updating this Saturday.

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Live-life
That was a great update!!
I adore it! 👏
Well, well what do you know? So Riya does know how to shoot eh?
Sch she should get an award for being such a good actress!! 😆
I mean...how does she. Pretend no to know how to shoot?
Well tht girl has something in her for sure!! No wonder the ACP will fall for her!! 😉
Oh and the little scene between Ayesha and Rathore was cute! Hayeee ayesha was blushing! Too cute!! 😳 Ab kya Karen rowdy Rathore hai hi aase!! 😆😉
And the famous club Z is quite suspiscious! Kya pata is club Z ki wajjah ETF aur NIB miljayein?!
Aur Arjun ji toh as usual super se upper the! Aur wait...perfect + Mardala!! 😆
And he did sense thatriya was there! Oh god mine itni jaldi expect nahi Kia thi! But I am glad that atleast he did feel something!

Hayee avai to surf ehsaaas hua hai! Jab Milan ho ga to pata nahi kya hoga! God! I can't wait for that day! 😃

Fantabulously amazing and grawesome update!!! 👏👏👏

And Sach meri you did perfectionalize your writing skills! Well I guess you can never stop improving can you! 😉
As Arjun said, "nobody is perfect" 😆 (JUST KIDDING)

Update soon!!

Thanks for the deliciously long response😊

About how Riya pretended to know how to use her gun- I have planned a scene in one of the chapters giving an explanation about it😉 Hope you find it convincing.

I am glad that you liked the Raesha and Ariya moments as well.

And yes, our ACP did sense her presence.

Will PM you about the update😛

And yes, as Arjun said, perfection is a process that never ends. I believe the same;)

Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago