Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...?' *Cont. in Thread 2*

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riyaarjun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

wow story is going to good n u gave ,when u update next part thanks yaar thanks for pm

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

i am waiting for the next update

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Why today is nt saterday uff! 😡
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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen
Why today is nt saterday uff! 😡
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Originally posted by: mastmegha22
haan me also think that😡

Look at the bright side...there's less than 24 hours left😉

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: mastmegha22
i am waiting for the next update

5 p.m. sharp tomorrow😊

Originally posted by: Aks13
First of all thanks for a long update.
Loved the way u potray Riya's character. She is confident, bold n intelligent.
Wow she is their best agent n that's why her team got this case. Interesting.
She is giving solid competition to Arjun or may I say she is one step ahead of him.
Loved her POV about her team members n Choree imagined her as ghost.
OMG she got the culprit but at the last moment ETF arrived.
She reminded me of Angelina Jolie.
Awww wht a telepathy!!!!!! Riya nai yaad kiya aur Arjun hazir.
Wow Rathod blasted on his team n Arjun is the one who mellowed him down by his reasoning. Unbelievable.
Loved Aisha's POV about Rathod.
Shriza moments r sweet.
Case is getting more n more interesting.
Loved Arjun's sharp observing skills.
OMG he felt the presence of Riya there but shushed that thought away.
Precap looks exciting.
Eagerly waiting for their face-to face meet.
Continue soon.

I am really glad that you enjoyed this chapter, and your comment tells me that you read it thoroughly. I appreciate that😛

Riya's spirit is essentially the same, but yes, in terms of many things, esp. her attitude, she is worlds apart in my story. Yeah, as you pointed out, like A.Jolie in "The Tourist". Good observation.

The tale will also have a lot of ChoRee moments, Sam-Arjun moments, Raesha and Lisa-Shree moments.

Hope that you will continue to read and like this story in the future as well;)

Edited by Amri174 - 12 years ago

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: mastmegha22
res
me first

unres

this one is for us.
lots of hug to you🤗

it was awesome, blossom, fantastic, fabulous, amazing, cool, super-duper, blockbuster , mindblowing ant yet mysterious update dear.

love the way you portrayed riya here I liked the it. She felt like was just another case. She still connected with them.

riya find out the criminal but she left because etf reached there. i thought they were meet but cant.

loved etf moments.

sasha moments also nice.

i thought www3 began but aisa kuch nahi hua.

but kuch nahi hua.

aww.. shirza moments was awesome.

ariya feels that they were close but couldnt find.

after vampu i give you mystery queen tag.

precap is awesome.

continue soon.

waiting for the update.

and thanx for pm.

Thanks for commenting, dear friend. You always encourage me while I update, so sweet of you😛

"It was awesome, blossom, fantastic, fabulous, amazing, cool, super-duper, blockbuster , mindblowing ant yet mysterious update" Aww, I am blushing now.😳

I am really glad that you liked the Ariya moments and Riya's portrayal in the story.

A lot of Choree and Rathore-Arjun as well.

Thanks for the mystery queen tag...Certainly Vampu is no.1, dunno if I can live up to her standards.

And welcome...you of all my readers earned my PM!!!

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abhya/akanksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Amri174

5 p.m. sharp tomorrow😊

I am really glad that you enjoyed this chapter, and your comment tells me that you read it thoroughly. I appreciate that😛

Riya's spirit is essentially the same, but yes, in terms of many things, esp. her attitude, she is worlds apart in my story. Yeah, as you pointed out, like A.Jolie in "The Tourist". Good observation.

The tale will also have a lot of ChoRee moments, Sam-Arjun moments, Raesha and Lisa-Shree moments.

Hope that you will continue to read and like this story in the future as well;)