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Hey! Omg thank you thank you for the lengthiest update ever. I had such a great time reading this. On the one hand I didn't want it to finish and on the other when I saw there was a 2nd part as well which was as lengthy as the first I kinda jumped!
Totally enjoyed the first part not only because it was so detailed but also because of the way you portrayed Riya. Indeed here she is so strong as an individual and carries off her job almost single-handedly though there are her two co-agents.In the midst the touch of comedy when Riya thought of Shree-Chotu's reaction was nice hehe can't wait to see how once reunited they all interact. It is also one aspect of the show I miss their masti and funny comebacks together. I also liked how Riya reacted to the situation and took care of it. This was very nicely described.Loll I can't wait to see how you handle Ayesha and Rathore this should be fun to read :D and maybe something there with Shree and Lisa? hehe looking forward to their relationship. Arjun-Rathore's friendship should also be something I'm waiting for and how you tackle them. The fact that Rathore didn't scream back at Rawte was a surprising element with everyone expecting the obvious. And finally Arjun's reaction to Riya's presence on the scene was awesome as if he could literally feel her thereWell the precap seems interesting with Shree digging for the truth hope it comes out soon and they manage to find RiyaI didn't really miss Arjun in this update because your focus on Riya was the highlight and I'm sure we gonna get more of Ariya soon.So I think this is the lengthiest comment I have ever drafted and soorry for taking up too much space.Eagerly waiting for Saturday now!
First of all, let me thank you from the bottom of my heart for such a lovely comment.
It is certainly encouraging for a fanfiction writer to know that she is doing a good job, and that the readers, who are also the viewers of the show in question, are relating to the characters the same way while reading a story.
The long update was planned and executed in the last 2 days- I intended to give you all some delicious stuff to read, considering that this story still has a long way to go😊 At least 12-14 more chapters.
And yes, I definitely miss the camaraderie between Riya-Shree-Chottu. 😭 That's the reason they're going to be one of the highpoints of the fic. And so will the relationships between the various members of the team. Everyone will have an important role to play in my story.
And the Riya Kashyap of this story has the same heart as Riya Mukherjee. But she has her own issues, and she's much stronger than how they portrayed her in the show. I am glad that you liked it.
I am waiting for next Saturday too! Till then,take care😊
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