ArShi FS: Cloaked Murderer Last part pg 30 - Page 4

nice mystery OS.. liked it

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Originally posted by: ..SaRun..

Update Diii !!😆

Originally posted by: BerryBlush07

reasonfull res😳

~~~~~~reason full unres 😳 ~~~~~~~~

first things first...I just got an OS dedicated to me...and that to by my most favourite writer..my spamming partner ..my critic...and my sister!...

Yeah i'm ur favorite writer and thats maybe bcoz u read only my works and that too in between😡🤣

...its true..jab Bhagwaan dethe hai tho chappad phaad ke dethe hai...

now coming to this very bhery cherry berry outstanding OS...what more shud I say..its dedicated to me soo its bound to be awesome 😎...ok..ok..i will leave self praising for this day..😆..

Yelo shuru hogayi self praise🤣

truly keshu...u have made one master piece...as i had told..i read this in one go! and craved for more...👏...

the starting itself.. "tring tring "...those two words have got alot of meaning into it!..its the call of the DARK..the call of the TIME..the call when it all BEGINS..

Frankly speaking when i wrote this i didnt think of all those things u mentioned above and now that im thinking abt it, it sounds so apt

frankly..speaking this OS gave me chills...actually i read it when the room was dark and the way u described the murder scene and the affect it had on khushi..just gave me goosebumps..i imagined it all happen..and man! i had a fun tym getting scared..after all it was u who made that happen..😆 😳

Your answer gave me the goosebumps i didnt get while i was writing this!

Making Ayeshu speechless-Done!

Troubling Ayeshu-Done

Scaring Ayeshu-Done

Im too good😎

...sooo...u watched all those crime videos...and spent ur precious tym in observing all that just for this dumb person..😆 😆

Yup i did and it was fun😆 Actually i love crime fiction so was deffo not an issue for me😆

...i am overwhelmed 😳..no not wid tears..but wid the assurance , satisfaction and acknowledgement that there are ppl..out there staying miles away from me and whose actions have been dedicated to me 😳

Love u ji 🤗

...ok now getting back to the story...every word u wrote..i saw it all happen...and wished..i cud publish it as a buk so that it stays wid me forever...😳...i am loving Amans character...he is one smart side-kick yet scared of ASR...and ASR what to say..wow! how did u even think of this..i mean this role suits him perfectly..i have alot of detective admirations lyk sherlock holmes and jimmy kudo/ detective conan of the detective conan anime series..and now ASR has been added to that list 😳..ok getting back to the OS again...hey!..y is this an OS!??..i want u to extend it!..if the start can be soo gud then i am hell-bent on reading more of this stuff!...⭐️...Khushis character also seems to be great...! I love the way u have made her!..and hoh! 😲 😲 Anjali is all out!..🤢...this is one interesting piece...Anjali seems to be much independent and fast in this..having an affair 😆 😆..i luv it too..!...and ASR nd khushi's encounter..was perfectly written...u have embedded all of ARSHI's traits and yet managed to make new characters out of them.. hats off to u keshu 👏 👏 👏...and..wait a minute!..OP..his wife!..aww..bechari Anu di 🤣...ok..ok..sry Anu di .😳..soo OP i bet he has a big part in this murder!..oh teri!..OP wrong place at the wrong tym..bechara 🤣...and he has a mobile too..aww..😃..ok..ok..soo this murderer surely seems to be a maniac to me 🤢..he stabbed her multiple tyms..and even used chloroform for a clean murder 🤢...SCARY! ...and verry interesting! 😃

and wow! the ending convo..!..ASR and amans convo abt khushi...and Aman going for her looks..and ASR cutting in..! aww soo cute! 😳..i am surprised that u managed to bring in romance in this...and perfectly done! 😳 ...and the last dialogue was...O.U.T. O.F. T.H.I.S. W.O.R.D !!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

THE END 😳

p.s: i hope u lyk my review..😳

p.p.s: no thanxx again my awesome keshu 🤗 🤗

p.p.p.s: I luv the part where ASR says.."Aman I am missing my partner in investigation Ayesha " 😳 😳 ..😎

GN ! SD!

u have made my lyf beautiful..😳

I know right Arnie as a detective sounds too cool

Haan u see Anjali is bhery quick here🤣

OMG i totally forgot that OP is Ani di's lubh...sorry di🤣

Thats modern OP with mobile for u

@red- tu kabhi nahi sudhregi🤣

nice one👏 waiting for next part

WOW!!!❤️

Totally loved it Keshu! <3
Awesome!😎

Truly amazing!!!!❤️

Update soon pleej :P

Thanks for PM! :D

Happy writing😳

Nice one n thrilling as well
pls updt soon n pm me..
thx..

wow Arnav singh raizada as a detective...!
I love it how he said aman dat her eyes can kill wit his signature smirk...
Goddd i am imagining his face wit that sexy smirk ☺️
hayeee i love him ❤️
Hayeee
fantastic update 👍🏼
waiting to knw who has actually murderd anjali 😳

Loved it.. Pls continue... and don't forget to PM me...

cool arnie as detective investigating murder of anjali
wow so khushi is one of the suspects
but who killed anjali one wonder
well this was real interesting
cant wait for more for sure