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arnshi

@arnshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

you are awesome with such stories...please write more...and do include more ARHi in it if you can...please.

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Story is very short, but very interesting

Arnav as detective wow super cool

Loved Arnav and amans investigation of anjali murder case. The way they found out Payal as murderer.

There is no much of arhi but very interesting story line.

Thanks shruthi for adding this story to her list.

Thank you for writing very amazing story.

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Read it all at once and loved it.

Everything was planned out just right and what an interesting twist! Rather than the "It was the servants!" take we usually get!

Also some complain about missing ArHi, I think you mixed them in just right for this story! :)

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Rami

@Rami92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Wow this was one such mysterious piece of wrk n jus loved t😊

i guesed t to be payal😃

n was ryt😉

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kurinji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

You made lots of twists and turns, making everybody to be a suspect. And with a bang producing the murderer. Good thing I read the whole updates together or else with the suspense nail biting I would have ended with suspense finger biting.