ArShi FS: Cloaked Murderer Last part pg 30

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Khesnee B

@..Peppermint..

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: mutermuter
Wow amazing dear
Y U Ended It So Soin :(((

Had so dear...i planned for 4 chapters only😳

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Khesnee B

@..Peppermint..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: neevee
superbbb story...👏 finally the cat is out...
heyyy pls do write more detective stories...
you are good at handling this genre...😛

lets see if i can put what i have in my mind in words till friday😉

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sindhu

@misscrazyfan

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Wow wow wow ..that was a super crime of criminal dispatchal.yes i would like to read more..pls do write..nd thanx 4 the reply

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Wat a mindblowing plot it was 👍🏼

i mean perfct [:Y;]

u actually made all ur readers think abt who d murderer is nd trust me u have simply plotted it damn well...!

Each nd every move was suspicious nd u have all of us hell confused thinking everyone to b d murderer...!

Awsum story it was 👍🏼

loved it ❤️

nd i really thnk u should write mor detective stories nd iss baar meko arshi romance v chahiye usme 😉

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Awsom blossom Kesha...i seriously nevr guessd it was payal all da tym...shit man how cud i miss da obvious facts lyk payal gave too much info 2 police evn b4 dey askd...shit shit shit i'm dumb seriously supr dumb...how cud i not c dat but den i cudn't guess da motive which made me all confusd...hatz off 2 girl u realy made me confusd itz not evryday dat i make wrng guesses...now plz write nodr suspnc story plz plz prtty plz w/a cherry on top

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neevee

@neevee

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: kenny_Arhi

lets see if i can put what i have in my mind in words till friday😉

WAITING...😉😉😃 and thanks for the reply...😊

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

it was even better than 36 CT man
no really how he figured sorry they figured it all out was so cool
so it wasnt OPs
and the murder happened because payal loved shyam and wanted to give him what anjali could give him
but it was good plan
shame that with khushi being stuck there it went downhill
so thanx to khushi payal wasnt able to get rid of all the evidence
but poor khushi she has no one now
well lets not forget ASR
so funny how aman asked for her number and not arnie as he knew arnie wouldnt
if you are writing more like this i sure would like to read it
cheers for pm