ArShi FS: Cloaked Murderer Last part pg 30 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all, big wala thank you to al of you you liked, commented and kept bugging me about the updates!Thank you all🤗

@chavvi and many others who asked this- Yes, this was very much inspired by 36 china town but you see i twisted many things in the plot😆

@Ayeshu, Smiley hug, Veggie- Hats off for being amongst the first to guess that Payal was the murderer though for some of you it was a mere wild guess😆

@Kajribarunsobti- Seriously girl, i apologise for confusing you so much that you felt that this story would make you bald-it wasn't that confusing at the end of the day😛

@Ani di- thanks for bearing my Eiffel Hangers🤣

@Gauri29- You guessed it right abt the part of Payal adding the ji and wanting to confuse Arnav part👏

@Pearl and epicperson- No, i am not an Under cover Agent nor an FBI one🤣

@Manreet_gill- Your comment after the second update was bang on! You were so close on guessing it correct, though i guess the 3rd part confused u more! Despite that you sticked to Payal👍🏼

Sobtian-Hats off to ur awesome insticts which said that Payal was the one😆

Misscrazyfan- Will surely read that since i love thrillers and im glad that i could give a face to Feluda!😛

@Sambu- I changed that to a Four shot(FS) for you☺️

To everyone- Thanks for bearing the late updates, i know how frustrating it is to get updates late specially when it is a thriller😆

If you have any other query about the updates, or anything that you didn't understand, feel free to ask😳
Those, who were left confused after reading this part, feel free to go and re-read the first three chapters and you will see how i dropped the clues and you people didn't catch them!😆
Edited by kenny_Arhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing!❤️

Read 3 updates in a row😆

Loved it a lot😛


Edited by Butterfly003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res!!! =)

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Originally posted by: kenny_Arhi



Sobtian-Hats off to ur awesome insticts which said that Payal was the one😆


Omg! So my instinct was right! 😲 😳

Loved the update!! Going to miss this thriller. But it has been a good journey of confusions and predictions, and instincts 😛

Payal killed Anjali so that she could get Shyam
That was unexpected.. but I loved it!! Now she'll have to rot in jail, while Shyam will have to look for another piggy bank 😆

Loved the ending. A new chapter begins for Khushi 😃

Awesome work! Love it!!

-Divya-
Edited by .sobtian. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Payal was the murderer and she killed Anjali for Shyam
all the evidence pointed to her being in the wrong but my ishmart brain uff no comments 😆
ok now coming to the last part aww it was really cute 😳 Aman was funny
gonna miss my Eiffel hangers though
keep writing Keshu !
thanks for the PM

Edited by .Anisha. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haha ! Our silentwa is the murderer ! So ultimately, Payal is the silent criminal.😆 Loved this FS. Di, you should write more of these. Would love reading them. 😳
Edited by ..SaRun.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh mah gawd, it was Anklet! *sigh* Poor child, I think she was too tired of not receiving any dialogues on the show so she decided to kill the queen herself. Actually Payal deserves this 👏
She did what I've been yearning to do ever since Poojali was born.
Thank you for this amazing piece of writing!! Best thriller work of ArHi i have ever read!! :D
Thanks for the PM!
-Tasneem :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!...payal!!...😲
superb update...
Aman was amazing at d end!!...😉
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome ending
payal is the murderer she loves shyam
and shyam had affair with anjali just for money
totallyy enjoyed it
hahahahahah aman
khushi ka num

plzz an epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
gabbu 😭😭 its finished

waiting for next one to get started...

n yooo Payal is d murdered..I was thinking he wud b d one bt cudnt gt d reason behind it..u described everything well 👏👏

n lol..u make it FS 😆 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome story !
enjoyed it thoroughly ...

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