*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20 - Page 74

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti46

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i knew it,i knew it.
this jerk arnav will do same thing,wats his prb yar,,only physical attraction..oh god he has got pea sized heart as well as pea sized brain,thats why it is not functioning properly..

khushi is again hurted..
vaise is really a sprinter,jitni teji s bhagi,utni teji s vapas ayi ,phir vapas bhag gyi..
😆

hope she gets peaces in camp
but no there is shyamu nA,
irritate karne k liye..

wt the why izz mamiji supporting snakwa,i dont understandwa...😡


Pea sized heart and brain indeed, Shruti!😆
And sprinter Khushi!😆
Mami and snakewa ka raaz...well...kuch der raaz rehne do!😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshidiehardfan

You are a wonderful writer Wiwy... 'Confession & Reaction' - interesting... Will read it soon...


For you AD, my fav word...
Okay 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh the complex tumultuous crazy world of arnav singh raizada, what will khushi, so very alice, do in it... he is the white rabbit, the mad hatter, the queen of hearts... will he find the charming prince in him that he really is?

lovely updates, 18 and 19... that stopping at the chemists, awww, a personal connection there... i hate medicines... always forget to take them... i need a raizada make sure i have them.

her friend called him hotwa?😆 naughty naughty girl..

she came rushing back and hugged him from the back and said it was okay he saw her because she loves him... clever khushi.😳

he is not into all that "crap"? silly asr. needs to really fear that he might lose her doesn't he?

she's leaving.

i can hear a beatles number in my head. what will hotwa do, tells me, pilleejh. and you made mano bad? how badds yous are huh, wiwy storyteller? 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
what by saying baadh mai jaye happen
he will come to you where you go

i loved it
so lovely
fun and suspensewa

come soon ha arnavji
khushi is naraz na
so do hurry
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh

awe very very heart touching update...so arnav was avoiding her in the office as he is not at all interested in shadi and all..it was fun him teasing her with pics :)...awe loved the way she ran back and hugged him from back...but arnav i guess now its ur time to suffer ...when she will leave him then arnav babua ko lag pata jaye ga ...awesome update wiwy,loved it...and ur starting pic is soo soo cute :)


Hey thanks finding the update touching!😃
Yes he was avoiding her, teasing her, and ended up hurting her! 😭
And for liking the hug pic, this is for you...🤗 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Barun_Addict


So I was right
Mamiji n Shyam miley hue hain

Hatewa them
So Shyam knows about Khushi going to Gosak

What is he planning now ??

Coming to the ArShi part
Typical Khushi holding the lapel of his shirt

not letting him go

So Khushi finally decided to tell him...

Arnav saw her that day

Every1 knows that nah

Wasn't it obvious

LOL 😆
Khushi Just ran away frm his cabin 😛😆

But the way Khushi confessed was a bit weird...

She should have confessed it when they were alone

I knew that Arnav wouldn't say ILU too back

Coz he himself said during that car drive..

k ussey farak nahi padhta
He still hasnt realised that he loves her

unlike Khushi who is sure of it !!

He still names it as Physical Attraction...


But I loved how Khushi reacted after all this

Instead of crying n convincing him agai n again

She decided to forget him

I like this bold Khushi

Nice Update Di

Love you !!


Ha Ha!🤣 Love your comments as usual, Shuchi! How they make me laugh!
Yes you were right! Snakewa and Manu are in this together!
Oh! I never thought of Khushi saying ILU to him in private because in the serial she said it to him in front of family! 😳 But I could have changed that too, hmmm...Maybe I can make her say it again when they make love! 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cheesemad

I am not liking this thread😒

I want a new threadwaa soon
May be I can help..!!😈
Update soon...


😆

BTW Mujhe gana nahi tum pasand aayi, tumhara song dedication ka idea pasand aaya! And I wanted to share it with all my friends 🤗
Edited by wiwy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Ha Ha!🤣 Love your comments as usual, Shuchi! How they make me laugh!
Yes you were right! Snakewa and Manu are in this together!
Oh! I never thought of Khushi saying ILU to him in private because in the serial she said it to him in front of family! 😳 But I could have changed that too, hmmm...Maybe I can make her say it again when they make love! 😉



really suchi u r too good...
and WHEN THEY MAKE LOVE...ahem ahem
WIWY make that happen sooonnn...
Edited by shruti46 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cheesemad

I am not liking this thread😒

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I CAN ALSO HELP IN THAT...😆

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