*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#711

Updated my comment on page 105:)

Quote

cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: deepa.e

I wonder how this girl manages to be first in many ff's which i read too!!
Way to go yaar!! who ever u r i appreciate u :)

LOL thank you so much😳

First ever compliment on my stalking skills😃

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

sissy this is totally unfair on your part now!!

u stopped at this place?? i mean here? without even giving a hint about arnav's mental condition now?

I know he is having feelings for her then why the hell is he distancing himself from her? now it will be very hard for him to go near her again! i know she will have some soft corner but then we cant be sure that how much favor that is for him!

Also one confusion yaar manorama is against razida's or she is good character, then why the dash she goes and tell shyam about kushi?

Will shyam try to misbehave to her?

This manorama ks suspense is already getting into my head and nerves and killing me!!

Pls dont take long or u wont know what will happen to me: (

Quote

Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#714

Originally posted by: cheesemad

LOL thank you so much😳
First ever compliment on my stalking skills😃

😊 there must be some one to appreciate too na!!

I have noticed your comments quiet many times thats why said it!! :)

by the way if u dont mind shall i ask u something?

Hw are u managing both ur professional, personal life and life here at if?

Quote

rockingsoni

@rockingsoni

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#715

I had this feeling, dat arnav will screw up big time,

but dint expect to be lik dis...

poor khushi, her first heart-break...

n wats wid manorama!!!! she is wid shyam!!!!

Quote

nikhila

@sanjanasree

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#716

shock, shy, nervous, sad u showed every emotion wel
nice update

Quote

Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

@cinthiann1758

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#717

wiwy, loved it, just loved it. i loved how he was trying to ignore her and facing the feelings she has imposed on him during her sleep. typical of him putting her off with the excuse of too much work. i also love how finally he gave in to seeing her. denying his feelings very typical ASR. and wonderful how our dear, brave lioness surrenders and blurts out her feelings and caresses him. i always loved that shot when she did that and apologized for seeing him naked (IPK). it has been a while since i have been able to read and yours was my first. wonderful my friend. now write more so i can mend my broken heart!

Quote

aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#718

i knew it!

Mami was conspiring with Shyam.. Only question is Why?

And now, Arnav carried Khushi in his arms.. Awww.. Dat was just so romantic! <3

coming to the main part:

yaar, Arnav's rejection was expected! The way Khushi hugged him from backa nd confessed her feelings was unexpected.. But all in all.. Her heartbreak and Arnav's rude reply hurt me.. It had to yaar!

Afterall, its not everyday Arnav singh Raizad feels for someone.. He won't accept easily!

And now when Khushi would be gone, he'll know Kuch kam roshan hai roshini.. I dedicate this song.. Kuch kam from dostana.. It wud fit so well here!

He also has his workk in lucknow, Khushi is going to Gosak, which is close and our villian is also ready!

This is going to be Fun, for sure!

Quote

Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#719

Really really nice update.

So Arnav just wants to have physical relationship with Khushi??

Quote

Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#720

Poor Khushi...

But loved the way she confidently proclaimed her love for him..

How does Manorana know Shyam??? she is scaring me..now Shyam will be after Khushi...