*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20 - Page 73

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Posted: 12 years ago
Now what?? He has to go ruin a perfect relationship..what's wrong with him..poor khushi she must be heartbroken...she should jus move on and away from him for him to realise...loved reading the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav had a typical ASR reaction but i am sure he will come around very soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh tumne kya kar dia, Khushika dil tod dia.
Kiyu dard hai itna tere ishq mein.
May be Khushi didn't approach him properly. She should take more time.
Arnav sure loves Khushi. He jut can't realize it. Now after his rejection, Khushi will sure not meet him. And he will definitely miss her and will realize that he also loves her.

Hmm so Arnav did see her nude! you naughty girl!
Edited by sohara - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
love the update and hope arnav realizes that khushi could be trusted with his heart anyways loved it and plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
JERK!!!!!!!!
You are going to be eating your words soon Mr. I-Don't-Believe-In-Love Raizada!
Manorama ji helping Shyaam I see...
Wonder why and how did she even meet him?
So Khushi is now headed to Gosak unprotected and Shyaam will be following.
A lot of drama and action in coming updates! Great!
Also, what role is pyaare Nanheji playing in this?
I hope to read more soon Wiwy!
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Edited by Throne - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dis was really awsumm. Ejoyed evry bit of it. Cudnt be more better, oh n 😕😔 hw cud arnav have said a no to khushi, she muct have herat broken. Fab. Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Na jaane koi kaise hai yeh zindgani, zindgani, Humari adhuri kahaani..!!😒

My dear friend Cheeni/ Komal (cheesemad)😃, I call her Cheesy 😉 has decided to dedicate a song to each of my chapters!

'Na jaane koi' is for Chapter 19
Confession and Reaction

Isn't that sweet!😃
Thanks Cheesy 🤗

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=hVl14p11ous[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by wiwy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
cheesy

Hayee I didn't know apko gana itna pasand ayega😳
Love you so much<3


PS: Yaha bhi first😎
Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cheesemad

Awesome update.

Loved reading the chapter.


I was damn sure he is going to ruin everything and he did, what else can we expect from ASR.
Now what? Aaega baad me rote hue..!!
What is wrong with him? He actually said he is physically attracted to her?! Iss bande ka main kya karu?
Shrewd businessman but a stupid lover, ASR.


I actually liked the way he drove her away initially. Reminding her of that day😆
Why did he have to ruin every thing and then learn a lesson, can't he just listen to his heart once and send his ego and brain for a short break?! But of course all these things make him what he is, ASR, Arrogant Sadu Raizada😆 he will come around, I don't have any doubt😉


Did I ever tell you how much do I hate MamiJi? Stupid woman, now that Shyam knows where Khushi is, what is he going to do?

I liked the way Khushi reacted after Arnav's rejection, she is not any random abla naari, good one Khushi, to hell with Arnav Singh Raizada, I am loving her😃

Na jaane koi kaise hai yeh zindgani, zindgani, Humari adhuri kahaani..!!😒

Continue soonwaa..!!



At last i found the time to comment to my readers! And you are special, because you are first again, Cheesy! And i see you have made some fans for your special skill to be first! Ha ha!

You were right ofcourse! What else can be expected from khadoos laad governor!
Theek kehti ho, ab ayega rota hua!😆

My Khushi can never be abla! Cheers to woman power!😃

Edited by wiwy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was surprising

i don knw which was bad...Manorama helpin Shyam...or Arnav's harsh rejection towards Khushi 😭

Khushi is goin away ...Arnav has no idea abt tht...its lik you hav stopped exactly at the interval
and a whole week ...before i knw what happens next...Haye Devi Maiyan Help me!!!!

on the whole very good chapter...with twists and turns ⭐️👏 (not good ones though 😛)

really liked your edit 😉

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