*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20

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Barun_Addict

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Posted: 12 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: wiwy

Ha Ha!🤣 Love your comments as usual, Shuchi! How they make me laugh!
Yes you were right! Snakewa and Manu are in this together!
Oh! I never thought of Khushi saying ILU to him in private because in the serial she said it to him in front of family! 😳 But I could have changed that too, hmmm...Maybe I can make her say it again when they make love! 😉

I m glad that my bakwaas made u laugh 😃😆

N I would love that to happen

Khushi confessing to him gain when they would make love

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lala rukh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: wiwy
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awe so sweet of u ...jadu ki jhappi 🤗🤗

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rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#743

So Manorama is being bitchy and feeding Shyam about Khushi's whereabouts and movements!

Arnav has rejected her love saying that he is incapable of returning her love and does not believe in such things!

Poor Khushi! What a nightmare she is going to enter all because of Manorama and Shyam!

Nice update.

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Putija

@PutijaChalhov

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Posted: 12 years ago

#744

Baad me jaye LG but really Khushi do you want it. Wiwy so one side love and another side love/ reluctance.

Edited by chalhov - 12 years ago

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: shruti46

really suchi u r too good...
and WHEN THEY MAKE LOVE...ahem ahem
WIWY make that happen sooonnn...

When? Sochne ka padi! 😆 But when I do it I have a good mind to carry on for two updates at least! ☺️

Sometimes I really do feel like fastforwarding my story to such beautiful Arshi moments only!

Imagine if my next update was ahem ahem everyone would be angry with Khushi for giving in to Arnav or mad with Arnav for taking advantage of Khushi's feelings! The building up of a story to an acceptable crescendo is wearisome at times!

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shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: wiwy

When? Sochne ka padi! 😆 But when I do it I have a good mind to carry on for two updates at least! ☺️
Sometimes I really do feel like fastforwarding my story to such beautiful Arshi moments only!
Imagine if my next update was ahem ahem everyone would be angry with Khushi for giving in to Arnav or mad with Arnav for taking advantage of Khushi's feelings! The building up of a story to an acceptable crescendo is wearisome at times!

yeah stories pace is also imp.and as the author you have full authority.

ok i will wait for...u know...😆

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Barun_Addict

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Posted: 12 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: wiwy

When? Sochne ka padi! 😆 But when I do it I have a good mind to carry on for two updates at least! ☺️
Sometimes I really do feel like fastforwarding my story to such beautiful Arshi moments only!
Imagine if my next update was ahem ahem everyone would be angry with Khushi for giving in to Arnav or mad with Arnav for taking advantage of Khushi's feelings! The building up of a story to an acceptable crescendo is wearisome at times!

Haan 😳

Yeah they should make love at right situation n ryt time😳

n i think that time is not too far 😉😆

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: shruti46

I CAN ALSO HELP IN THAT...😆

hayee sachhi😳

fir der kis bat ki😉

Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: wiwy

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BTW Mujhe gana nahi tum pasand aayi, tumhara song dedication ka idea pasand aaya! And I wanted to share it with all my friends 🤗

meri itni tareef