*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20

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surlin_chhabra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#751

Read all the chapters in a go
Loved them
Awesome story

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Preeti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

nice update
thanks for the pm

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anu1017

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Posted: 12 years ago

#753

Read the whole story in one go, wow it is amazing!!! Please update soon.

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: honey-sweety
Poor Kushi, she is heart broken...

Shyam know that Kushi is going for other place to complete her project..OMG what heppns next???

Wonderful update..

Thanks for liking the update!😃

I have no idea what will happen next! Haven't started writing yet!😳

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
wiwy😭

you made my Khushi crying..and he is angry at her...This is my first grabber...

He loves her but doesn't want to cross his barrier to remain the way you are...very much same Arnav...

One thing is sure she is in his Dil and Dimagh...can't resist laughing or thinking about her...

and now she gave her the back HUG with confession...

She is leaving and Shyam has been informed by Mami😡

Thanks for the grabbers again, Arshi⭐️⭐️! And thanks for the edits!👏👏 Love them.

She is in his dil and dimaag, you are right!

And he doesn't like to see her crying does he?

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#756

Originally posted by: jyothim78
I did expect this...but happy that ATLEAST he I'd not hide or lie... Which is no him at all ...
But I think his heart will make him restless and khushi will push him away from her...probably Shyam trying to hurt khushi may make Arnav REALIZE what's he means to him...waiting for next update...

Yes a restless heart will serve him right!

thanks for commenting😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: ForLoveofBarun
Aww! my heart trembled for Khushi at Arnav's denial of feelings and refutal of her declaration. And yet it hurts for his tortured heart and mind that is unable to reconcile.
Nicely done my dear!

Now the distance plus the revelation that you promised in chapter 20 I am sure is going to lead to the forced marriage scenario. 👏 Thank you for the PM.

😃I am glad your heart went out to both Khushi and Arnav because even Arnav is suffering in his own way!

Forced marriage track? Well I thought of it once but not so sure now😕

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: deepa.e
aww its so good of you to pm me first!!
Look at me seeing it very late :( bad girl!!
Anyways first res for my comments!
Then will go and read it!!

A promise is a promise! 😃

Btw that bad girl slot is mine for answering so late!😳

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magss24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#759

well this is what we can expect from The great ASR...he broke her heart...🥺...poor girl...and what does he mean by just physical attraction.idiot stupid..but i love this stupid very much..cant remain angry on him for a very long time.. u see...omg now that creepwa will be following her...more and more drama and action on the way i think..cant wait for the next part...

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#760

So Mami has teamed up with Shyam. Does Mamaji know?

Poor Khushi. Long way to go before Arnav realizes his love.

Story at an interesting mode now. Khushi may go without informing Arnav. Meanwhile, A may come to know that S is following K. Then A may rush to protect K and realise his love on the way. What say? 😊