Chasing Dreams THd6- Link for Thd 7 on Pg 141 - Page 70

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Posted: 11 years ago
NB,
What I like most about this story is the realistic way you paint the characters, the theme of the story. It provides a great insight to the way parents think, lovers think, friends think, society think, elders in the family think. and it all feels real than fiction. Khushi is just like a girl whom we come across in our daily life. Sometimes I can feel bit glimpses of me in her..that's why I was attracted to this story in the first place. As it progressed, I was more interested because her first experience with love with Arnav, the mistakes she made by denial, then pushing away, fighting and finally accepting the love everything can happen to any girl of her age...And now when you have taken the story along with Khushi's relationship to the next level, it shows the real picture...of course there is rosy rosy kind of things but along with it you do give the real hard facts of life too which a girl has to face in this so called modern world yet not so modern...

Honestly speaking there is a part of me which feels scared for Khushi...because of the prologue you have mentioned in this story..Also making parents understand about this unconventional way of living in their terms isn't easy. You are fighting with them to make them understand you while you urself don't have a guarantee of your relationship. Love is one thing, but it can fade away too, which happens in most of the cases..life long love is just a concept, of course love will be there but compromises are a part of life and people put up with those because they are committed together for a lifetime...But Arnav being Arnav, I am not sure...and not only Arnav, if you think from a guy's perspective, he too would have his own reasons which is justified and then we can't blame anyone. But sometimes I feel its the girl who is finally the looser...and especially a girl like Khushi who is emotionally nurtured, it would be hard on her...

Anyways, I will be following to see how you take this story forward...because I do look up to this story...it do teaches me many things too apart being a fictional entertainment...
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a lovely story this is shaping out to be NB ...such real characters ..your arnav and khushi . Its awesome 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantabulous update!!
khushi nd Arnav getting more close nd comfortable day by day...
i hope garima and shashi too understand that but parents r parents..always want respectful for their child's..
lovely chappy..
loved it to the bits!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting update...arnav confess me very much he didn't want any band with khushi no married... no children...??!! what type of love is this... and sorry i see khushi very stupid and bland in his love..the love she just work and give on it..she give him everything but he no.. he just give relationship???!!! ... if he really loved her he will look for her situation in the society and with her parent ...waiting for more my dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...really Khushi has to and will have to face a lot...at least now Arnav is understanding her...and with her parents looking for her groom, I am feeling so restless to see whats next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi has taken this step of moving further into this relation with Arnav.

How is she going to answer her parents when she is not herself sure about things.She barely managed herself in front of the pharmacist who was asking her difficult questions. How will she hold herself in front of a society who wont treat her kindly. Tough times ahead ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
You have portrayed their love for each other so beautifully. It felt like I was reading about a persons dreams of finding the person of their dreams.

But I just get the feeling this is the calm before the storm

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for all your comments. Can you please let me know if you have received emails notifying of this update from me. Last time quite a few people had not received the emails.
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Posted: 11 years ago

That was an interesting update...I don't but somehow I am feeling sad for Khushi...I know she loves Arnav but it seems like she is ready to make every compromise that this relationship demands...Please update soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
The new terminology "chemical pregnancy" kind of scared me. Haven't heard about it.
Coming to the story - People will always judge and have their reservations about pre-marital sex.
I love the way they are progressing and Khushi is happy about her choice.
Talking to parents would be tough for her. Her parents are thinking about her marriage and she is thinking about living in with Arnav.
Payal too looks apprehensive about her relation with Arnav going by their different approach towards marriage.
It looks like that Khushi is going to miss her pill, may be when Garima will come in Delhi a week before marriage.

My Email id is aquagal001@gmail.com
Edited by aquagal - 11 years ago

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