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Posted: 18 years ago
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It was a bright new day. We can se two gals sleeping in a room. Suddenly alarm rings. One among the gals picks up the clock and throws it on the floor and returns back to her sleep. It was now 8 in the morning. One of them asks to other.

1st gal: hey what's the time?

2nd gal I don't know

1st gal: plz chk kar ke bata na

2nd gal: side me cell rakha hai khud chk kar lo

1st gal: plz yar

2nd: [chking the clock] its 8

1st gal: okay. We have 4 more hours to sleep. Gud night

2nd gal: gud night

They go back to their sleep. Just after 5 mins hey hears some one banging on the door

1st gal: aye wake up yar. Plz jaake dekh na darwaze pe kaun aya hai

2nd gal: leave it na. jane do jo bhi hai.

1st gal: ha okay

Again after 5 mins they hears loud bang on their doors this time they heard a voice as well

Person: Ashi Anu open the door.

[Yes the gals were Ashi and Anu who had never woke up before 10 am in their entire life]

Ashi Anu plz wake up. Its 8:15 yar only 1 hour is left for exam. Come on yar wake up

Anu: hey Ashi ye awaz kuch jani pehchani lag rahi hai na

Ashi: jani pehchani nahi ye Dhwani ki awaz hai

Anu: acha Dhwani ki. Ok but Dhwani kaun?

Ashi: Dhwani …..dhwani mate… humari mom… tu so ja

Anu: okay

Dhwani again started banging on their door

Anu: Ashi last question

Ashi: pooch

Anu: ye Dhwani humare room ka darwaza kyoou pit rahi hai

Ashi: kyouki aj humara exam hai

Anu: acha exam hai

[ achanak Anu ko exam ke bare me yad ata hai and she wakes up with a start AND SCREAMS] AAAASSSSHHHIIII

Ashi: kya hua chilla kyou rahi ho

Anu: Ashi humara exam

Ashi: ha kya hua exam ko

Anu: Ashi aj humara exam hai.

Ashi: I no

Anu; Ashi aj humara exam 10 baje se hai[pointing to the clock]

Ashi: oh shit

[Just then Dhwani again screamed Ashi Anu wake up we r getting late] Anu jaldi ja ke darwaza khol

Anu: coming Dhwani wait a sec

Anu goes and opens the door while Ashi goes in the bathroom to get ready as it was already 8:30 and they were supposed to reach at centre latest by 9:45

On the other hand the scene of boy's room was no better. Abhi and Rohan were in same room so they were ready by time but Yuvi who was in separate room was still sleeping.

Rohan and Abhi tried a lot but nothing could wake up Mr Yuvraj dev. Near abt 8:45 went to reception. In the mean time Ashi Anu and Dhwani also came there full ready Anu and Rohan gave each other an angry look while Ashi just ignored him

Dhwani: hi guys so all ready

Abhi: yes Dhwani we r ready but there is a prob

Ashi: problem what problem?

Abhi: actually Yuvi is not opening his door

Anu: oh god I always knew these boys will bring us some trouble.

Rohan: hey Miss Chapar chapar keep your mouth shut

Anu: oh really wuld u plz kindly tell me that why am I supposed to obey u

Dhwani: Anu Rohan stop it. We r in serious trouble. [To abhi] now what we are already getting late only one hr is left for exams

Abhi: I don't know. Meri samajh me to kuch nahi a raha

Ashi [who was sitting on sofa all this time speaks up] hey bhaggu! Ye kaisi na insafi ki tumne. Yaha mere siwaye kisi ko bhi akal nahi di

Rohan: oh really miss akalwali. If u r so smart then why don't u tell us way to get out of all this????

Ashi; why shud I this is none of my interest.

Abhi: Ashi plz if u have any idea then plz tell us

Ashi: wht do u mean by if? Of course I have an idea. Just go and ask the receptionist for master keys they have master key which can open up any room. Waise I can talk to her if u want

Rohan: no need man [to Ashi] thx 4 ur idea redhead but we can execute it ourselves. Just wait and watch

Rohan: [to the receptionist]: hi

Receptionist: good morning sir how may I help u?

Rohan: ya actually we need the master keys

Receptionist: sorry sir but we can't give u master keys

Abhi: plz mam its very urgent u can send any one wid us we just need to open up a room

Dhwani [to Ashi] Ashi plz do something

Ashi: no ways mate.

Dhwani; Ashi plz plzzz 4 me Ashi

Ashi: okay but I will do this only 4 u

Saying this she goes to reception where Rohan and abhi were still trying to convince the receptionist

Receptionist: sorry sir but we can't allow u to enter in any one's room like this

Rohan: plz try n understand it's very urgent our frnd is in room no 401 and…

Ashi [cutting him] mam plz actually our frnd is in room no 401 he is very upset kal hi uska uski gf se break-up ho gaya hai she had ditched him so he is in depression. Last night he called us and told that he don't want to live any more me wants to die. He is not opening his room since then we are very much worried. Mam kahi usne kuch kar na liya ho plz mam help us

receptionist: but

Ashi: mam dekhiye wo humara dost hai and agar use kuch ho gaya to uski zimmedar sirf ap hongi aur koi nahi age apki marzi

receptionist: okay okay come wid me I will open up the room 4 u

they all go wid her to Yuvi's room where she opens up his room . there they find Yuvi sleeping soundly.

Ashi: [to the receptionist] thx a lot mam and also sorry

Receptionist: kisliye mujhse jhut bolne ke liye

Ashi [surprised] apko pata tha

Receptionist: beta Maine apne ye bal dhup me safed nahi kiye hai. Maine pehle hi tumlogo ki bate sunli thi. Yakeen mano maine apni zindagi me har kisam ke logo se deal kiya hai but jo sachai and unity tumlogo me hai wisi maine aj tak kisi me nahi dekhi. yahi sachai aur ekta tumlogo ko ek din bahut dur le jayegi.

Saying this she goes from there. Ashi kept staring her till she gets out of her sight. Then she comes back to her senses and sees that no body has got success in waking up Yuvi. It was 9 then so she went to them

Ashi: hey bhaggu! Is kubhakarn ko kya sidhe lanka se utha ke laye ho.ise jaldi uthao nahi to iski neend humari life barbad kar degi

Dhwani: shut up Ashi hum try to kar rahe hai na

Ashi: mate ap aur apki tries ye aise nahi uthega? Iske liye to spl treatment chahiye

Anu: Ashi to kuch kar na plz

Ashi: wait and watch[ she picks up water jug and pours dwn all water over Yuvi who wakes up wid a shock]

Yuvi: wht happened?

Ashi: abhi tak to kuch nhai but agar tumne jaldi nahi ki to hum sare yahi kahre khare suicide jarur kar lenge

Yuvi: shut up wako. And how dare u pour water on me

Abhi: plz Yuvi ap abhi yaha shuru mat hoyiye abi ap plz jake change karke aiye hum exam ke liye late ho rahe hai

Yuvi; oh god main to bhul hi gaya tha. Give me 2 mins mai abhi ata hu

Finally at 9:30 they leave 4 exam hall which was 20 mins from their hotel.but due to traffic they reached there at 10:10. after a lots of mehnat mashakkat they were allowed to give the exam. After which they had to w8 one week 4 the results. So they decided to spent the wee there as a vacations before their joining army. These were their last days

Of freedom so they wanted to enjoy them as much as possible coz after this one week they will be trapped for ever first as cadets and then as officers.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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well frds.. this was all in part-3&4..
but wait! therez a lot more cuming....sumthing exciting!!!
just w8 n watch out for rajveer's entry in the next part!!!

hope u wul like this part. plzzzzzzzzz send us ur comments. they are really valuable and encouraging
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well frnds..i know u all waiting eagerly for our hero's entry..... 😊
so here cumes our hero....
chek out the link below & enjoy it!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q9RPdixkt9U

do comment on this too!

regardz:
varalikka & farheen
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
varallika & farheen..yeh taliyaan tumhare liye for the 3rd , 4th & the video 👏 👏 👏 👏
ur story rocks just like the two of u rock...i totallt love it.... 👍🏼 please continue soon..me will be waiting for the next part... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks a lot for liking it!
i hope u'll enjoy the next part too 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ya guys thx a lot 4 liking our story. u r commets cost a million to us
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 5 khwaabo ki manzilein...

well frnds...kaafi mashakkat karne baad sabhi yougsters exams ke liye pohochte bhi hai aur exams bhi dete hai....ab yeh apne results ke intezar mein hai.to ab yeh apni azaadi ke bache hue din enjoy kar rahe hai..

its a bright new day..kashmir ke kareeb ek chota sa gaon hai....ek hasta khelta gaon, jaha ke log ek dusre ke saath bade pyar aur aapsi samajh se rehte hai..per ek din iss gaon per kuch logo ne...kuch terrorists ne kabza kar liya tha...jiski khabar indian army ko mili.
un terrorists ne waha ke sabhi logo ke apne hi gharo mein kaid kar rakha tha.
iss gaon ko bachane ke liye indian army ne ek rescue team bheji thi..a team wid the best officers of the regiment.
hum inhe best officers keh sakte hai kyunki iss regiment ki khass baat yeh thi ke aaj tak iss regiment ko diye hue har operation ko bade hi achche se pura kiya hai.
per yeh operation kuch jyada hi khatarnaak tha..per iss regiment ke liye kuch bhi impossible nahi tha.
but this time it was a bit different.....

Every one in the base was waiting eagerly for call from the field. Their link with the officers was broken and thus they had no news of what's going on in the field. The fact that they had their best officers there had made the situation very strange. Each person was divided in two. One side of their brain was saying that they had their best officers in the mission so this mission can't fail but other side of their brain was saying that they were also human being so any thing is possible. Time was passing very quickly it was now more than one hour but still there was no news from there. Last news they had was that they were entering the crime area. So every one was getting more and more impatient.
We can see captain Pritha sharma (gauri pradhan) and captain Kunal kapoor (chaitanya choudhary) sitting in front of communication system in hope of getting any info. Mayjor general Abhimanyu Seth has several times asked them for any new info but all in vain as there was no way to contact them till they them selves contact the base.

Lt. gen. Siddharth Vashisth[ronit roy> was sitting in his office with major general abhimanyu seth[Mahesh thakur>



Lt. gen Siddharth Vashisth: abhimanyu unki taraf se koi khabar ai

Mayjor general abhimanyu seth: no sir abhi tak koi khabar nahi ai hai. hum lagatare koshish kar rahe hai but unse humara contact puri tarah toot chukka hai.

Lt. gen.: kya humari bak up team taiyar hai

Major gen: yes sir humari back up team bilkul taiyar hai. sirf oders ka intezar hai.

Lt.gen: ok agar agle 10 mins me unki koi khabar nahi ati to humari back up tem ko waha ke liye rawana kar dijiye.

Major general: yes sir

Lt.gen: who are leading our back up team?

Mayjor general: captain Pritha sharma and captain Kunal kapoor

Lt. gen: very gud so tell them to be ready.

Mayjor gen: yes sir

Saying this he moves to the communication room to give orders to both the captains.
Now lets see whats going on in the communication room.

Captain Pritha sharma: Kunal ab mujhe tension hone lagi hai pata nahi waha kya ho raha hoga?

Captain kual kapoor: I cant keep patience any more. Waha itna bara mission chal raha hai but hume yaha back up me dal diya hai[bangs his hand on table>

Just then major general abhimanyu seth enters the room. All stands up and salute him

Major gen:[to Pritha> Field se koi khabar

Pritha: no sir abhi tak koi khabar nahi ai hai

Kunal: sir hume yaha baithake kyou rakha gaya hai?

Major gen: captain army me orders follow kiye jate hai question nahi.

Kunal: sorry sir.

Just then phone starts ringing at the bas. All hurries to it

Pritha: hello army base…
[Pritha puts it on speaker>

Major gen: hello

Other side: mission successful sir

Major gen: any complications

Other side: no sir… most are dead few arrested..

Major gen.: wht abt villagers

Other side: all r safe

Major gen: any injuries

Other side: nothing serious

Major gen: r u ok?

[the person removes mask from his face we can see a very handsom guy in his thirtees. uske chehre pe jeet ki khushi aur akho me jeet ka jazba tha, Major gen ke sawal se achanak unhe apne hath pe lagi goli ki yad ati hai jise wo jeet ki Khushi aur sathiyo ka hausla barhane me bhul hi gaye the. woe k pal ke liye chup ho jate hai>

Major gen. : I am asking u Rajveer [ yes guys he is major Rajveer Rathod our hero>

Rajveer: am fine sir

Major Gen:[after a pause> congratulations to ur team major

Rajveer : congrats to u too sir….[ Pritha makes some curious sound as if she wants to ask sum thing> aa.. sir captain karan pratap is absolutely fine
[Pritha gave a relived look and Kunal started smiling.>
Major gen: wht

Rajveer : nothing sir… we will be there in 60 mins

Major gen: okay major[to every one in the office> so guy finally we have succeded in our mission. There is nothing to worry abt so now all of u can relax.[ to Kunal> captain thori der pehle tumne mujhse ek sawal kiya tha so captain uska jawbab ye hai ke we cant risk all our bests at same time and Pritha u go to hospital wing and tell them to be ready

Pritha: but sir mayjor Rajveer ne kaha ki sab thik hai

Major gen:[smiling> captain I know him better than u so do as I say
[saying this he leaves for leuitenent's office>



Lt. gen: I knew it… after all we had our best in this mission

Major Rajveer Rathod (rajeev khandelwal)
Major samarth chopra (manav gohil)

Major suraj mehra(rahil azam)
Captain karan pratap (hiten tejwani)


And captain radhika verma(sweta kwatra)

They are our pride…they are simply the best

Major gen. ap jaiye aur unke ane ki arrangements kijiye. Let them relax a bit then I have a new mission for them


Major gen: one more mission but abhi abhi to wooo.

Lt. gen;[smiling> don't worry abhimanyu mai unh eek lambi chutti pe hi bhej raha hu, and i'm sure they will enjoy these holidays.



so guys here ends part 5 hopu u all would like it and plzzzzzz dont forget to send us ur comments. we will be waiting 4 them

wid luv
farheen and varallikka




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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
varallika & farheen yaarr i totally love your story...me getting glued to your story seriously.. it is totally awesome...fantastic...coollllll...   ; &n bsp; mind blowing.. excellent...... 👏
me loved Rajveer's entry.....wow..yaar..simpy superb... 👍🏼 now me waiting for our heroine's entry....i want to see her reaction when she will treat Rajveer... 😉 please continue soon..me will be waiting for the next part... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi surya

chhoooo sweet of u to like my story. yar u guys give us lots of encouragement. its coz of u tht we write. i promise i will post next part very sonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-6

kkm part-6.........

Apne mission ki kamyabi ki khabar dekar sabhi officers base laut rahe the,
At the base...in Lt. General siddharth vashishth's cabin...woh kisise phone pe baat kar rahe hai...
Lt.General: are sir aap to iss desh ke defence minister hai, aapko to yeh khabar sabse pehle deni hi thi...
Minister: (laughingly) ha General sahaab...i know ki maine iss mission ko apne desh ke sabse kabil officers ko soupa hai..aur mujhe puri umeed thi ki issmein
hume kaamyaabi zaroor milegi..
Lt.General: ha sir, after all yeh hamare desh ki suraksha ka sawaal hai, aur jaha desk ka sawaal ho, waha we have our best of officers.
Minister: ha ha, hume pata hai.waise saare officers base per laut aaye?
Lt.General: nahi sir, per bas kuch hi der mein woh yaha ate honge.
Minister; ok. any casualties.
Lt.General: ha sir kuch hai, per exact kitne hai yeh to sabhi ke luatne per hi samjhega.
Minister: ok general. hume abhi press conference ke liye nikalna hai, hum aapse uske baad baat karenge.
Lt.General: ok sir.
Minister: and meri taraf se sabhi officers ko mission ki kaam yaabi ke liye mubarakbaad dena.
Lt Generally: certainly sir.Jai hind sir
Minister: Jai hind.
and Lt.General hangs down the phone...aur saare officers base per laut aate hai...one by one they enter into Lt. general's cabin
Suraj mehra (rahil azam): Major Suraj Mehra reporting sir.
Samarth chopra (manav gohil): Major Samarth Chopra reporting sir.
Karan pratap(hiten tejwani): Captain Karan Pratap reporting sir.
Radhika verma(shweta kawattra): Captain Radhika Verma reporting sir.
Lt.General: at ease evryone...and welcum bak officers.congratulations for achivieching the mission.
Evrybody: thank u sir.
Lt.General: Major Rajveer kaha hai?
Suraj: sir woh Subedaar Vikram ko hospital wing lekar gaye hai, bas aate honge.
Rajveer enter..
Rajveer Rathod (Rajeev khandelwal): Major Rajveer Rathod reporting sir.
Lt.General; at ease Major..and welcum bak..congratulations for achivieching the mission
Rajveer: thank u sir.
Lt.General: well ...officers aap jaakar thoda aaraam kar lijiye...i have another mission for u.
Everyone: yes sir...
And evryone leaves..
Lt.General: Major Rajveer
Rajveer returns bak...
Rajveer: yes sir...
Lt.general: Major...aap baaki officers aur members ko to hospital le jaa rahe ho, per main chahunga ki aap khud bhi doc se mil hi aayiye.
Rajveer: but sir, i'm absolutely fine...
Lt.general: i can see that very well Major.aap kitne thik hai.aapki hath mein lagi goli aur beh raha khoon sab kuch bayaa kar raha hai ki aap kitne thik hai.
Rajveer; (smilingly) sir ,agar iski parwah karta to army ke best officer aur mere sabse achche dost ko kho deta.
Lt,General: oh, i forgot main kisse baat kar raha hu.(smilingly) waise RAJVEER, Chahat ka phone aaya tha, usse baat karlo
Rajveer; per Chahat ne aaj kaise call kiya...
Lt.General: wo pata nahi but bahut gusse me lag rahi thi… tum usse bat karlo… per pehle tum apne iss haath ka treatment karoge understand.
Rajveer: sir main thik hu, aur waise bhi goli chukar nikal gayi hai, yah to bas thoda sa khoon...
Lt.General; Rajveer tum jaante ho ke tum sirf yaha ke officer hi nahi balki mere bete jaise ho...apne liye na sahi mere liye , Chahat ke liye..
Rajveer: per sir...
Lt.General: Major its an order...aur yeh order tumhe siddharth uncle nahi balki
Lt.General siddharth vashisth de raha hai.
Rajveer: (haste hue) yes sir...
and Rajveer leaves...and lt.general stands bak smilingly.
Now we can see Rajveer sitting on a bed and a gal treating his wound sath hi sath wo lagatar kuch bole ja rahi thi aur Rajveer bas baitha baitha uski bate sun raha tha. That girl was in a g8 temper and Rajveer was making a scared faces.
Girl: mujhe ek bat samajh nahi ati field me kya sari goliya tumhare liye hi chalti hai
Rajveer: wo..
Girl: shut up….. kya wo… aj tak kabhi bhi field se bina kisi injury ke aye hai ap? Dusro ko to kuch nahi hota.
Rajveer: meri bat..
Girl: just shut up and seedhe baithe raho…. Ek bat batao field me goliya tumhe dhundti hai ya tum goliyo ko
Rajveer: but goli lagi kaha hai?
Girl: just shut up… goli lagi kaha hai… itna dukh hai to jake boldete na un militants ko…. Wo log Khushi Khushi tumhare sar me goli mar dete
Rajveer: are suno to….
Girl: mujhe kuch nahi sunn….Tum na businessman hi thik the pata nahi kaha se ye army me a gaye
Rajveer: are tumhare liye hi to aya hu
Girl: ha tumhare liye hi ayah u…. to ab ye bhi bata do ki goli kiske liye khai
Rajveer: wo suraj ke
Girl: oh…[finishing bandage] Lo ho gaya ab bhagwan ke liye time se bandage change karwate rehna aur ha ek do din jyada hilana mat isko waise hilane se koi prob to nahi hai bas thora sa dard hoga and bleeding ho sakti hai… but I no tumhe koi fark to parega nahi
Just then Karan enters in the room. He was looking very scared.
Girl: ye lo ek aur a gaya… ab tumko kya hua?
Karan: wo…wo…
Rajveer: age bhi bolega
Karan: wo afat… shit…Chahat ai hai
Rajveer: Chahat yaha? Achanak
Tabhi radhika enters in the room
Radhika: yani tumlog phir bhul gaye[to the gal] hi vaishnavi [ apko kya laga Kashish haiJ]
Vaishnavi: hi radhika. Waise tumne in logo se aur expect bhi kya kiya tha?
Radhika: ha wo to hai
Karan: ladies plz apni ye code language chorke koi mujhe batayega ki akhir bat kya hai?
Just then pritha enters in the room.
Pritha: tum log yaha ho. Chalo Chahat ne sab ko neeche bulaya hai
Rajveer: plz koi mujhe batayega ki bat kya hai?
Pritha: yani tumlog phir bhul gaye?
Karan: mujhe maf kar do baut…. bara pap ho gaya mujhse … ab plz batao bat kya hai?
Pritha: tht was pathetic
Karan: plz batao na yar
Pritha vaishnavi and radhika{all together}: bewakufo aj rakhi hai
Rajveer and Karan: oh shit
Sare log neeche ate hai they see ki waha pehle se hi Major Samarth Chopra, Major Suraj Mehra ,Captain Kunal Kapoor, General Abhimanyu Seth, Lt General Siddharth Vashishth, Dr. Sashank Joshi, Doctor Devyani Mehra sare log maujud the. Chahat was samarth ko rakhi bandh rahi thi. Sab log white kurta pehne huye hote hai they all were looking very hot.She gives them a very angry look
Karan: [to Rajveer] lagta hai aj to gaye. Ye aj hume nahi chorne wali
[ Chahat comes to them. ] are Chahat tum yaha? Hume phone kar diya hota
Devyani: usne kal hi phone kiya tha and maine tum sab ko bataya bhi tha
Rajveer: [feeling guilty] I am sorry Chahat but…
Chahat: mujhe apka koi bahana nahi sunna. har sal ap dono bhul jate ho.
Karan: we are sorry Chahat
Chahat: kya sorry. Har sal ap dono aj ka din bhul jate ho aur kehte ho kam ke tension me bhul gaye. But yaha suraj aur samarth bhiya bhi to hai wo dono to kabhi nahi bhulte but forget it… mujhe ap dono se koi bat nahi karni
Lt. gen. : are bhai jhagra bad me karna pehle inhe rakhi to bandh do
Chahat: nahi uncle… mujhe nahi bandhni rakhi… jab inhe koi fark hi nahi parta to mai kyou bandhu… jinko meri fikar hai maine unhe rakhi bandh di hai. Inko nahi bandhna
Saying this she goes to Rajveer's room leaving a shocked raj and Karan in the hall. They well standing there hell shocked unki samajh nahi a raha tha ki kya kare.
Tabhi waha kahre sare log ek sath bolte hai
" are bewakufo usko ja ke manao"
With this they come to their senses
Rajveer and Karan: oh shit
Ye bolke wo log Rajveer's room ki taraf bhagte hai.while all others start laughing.
They enter in the room and find ki Chahat mu fulake baithi hui hai
Chahat: maine kaha na aplogo ko ki muhe apse bat nahi karni hai
Karan: but chaht humari bat to suno
Chahat: kya bat sunu… aj kya koi naya bahana banaya hai ap logo ne….
Rajveer: Chahat hum koi bahana nahi bana rahe hai…
Chahat: mujhe apse koi bat nahi karni hai. apko pata hai aj mujhe Austria jana tha meeting ke liye. But maine use sirf is liye cancel kiya ki mujhe aplogo ko rakhi bandhni thi. But u guys just don't care. Mai yaha apne sare kam chorke sirf apke liye ati hu but apko to parwa hi nahi hai. Yaha sabko yad tha siwai ap dono ke.[to Rajveer] Karan bhiya ko chor bhi do but ap to mere apne bhai hai na…..[realizing wht she said she luks towards Karan who was very hurt] I am sorry bhiya… I didn't mean tht
Karan: koi bhat nahi Chahat waise bhi tumne to bilkul sach hi kaha na. raj tumhara apna bhai hai… hum to
Chahat: plz bhiya aisa mat bolo am really sorry[holding her ears] dekho maine apne kan bhi pakar liye ab to mujhe maf kar do
[Karan kissed her on head] acha chalo hath age karo
Karan: kyou
Chahat: rakhi bandhni hai
Karan: oh okay
Wo apna hath age karta hai and Chahat use rakhi bandhti hai. Rajveer darwaze pe khara hua sab dekh kar muskura raha tha. Tabhi use Chahat ki awaz sunai deti hai
Chahat: ab apko kya invitation chap ke du?
Rajveer: [cuming to senses] ha… kya?
Chahat: hath age kijiye
Rajveer: kyou?
Chahat: hey bhagwan[to Karan] ap dono kya dialogues reherse karke ate ho?
[ Karan starts laughing while Rajveer luks at them surprisingly] are rakhi bandhni hai hath age karo.
Rajveer: oh okay[ wo apna left hand barhata hai.]
Chahat: hey bhagwan ye mai kaha bewakufo ke beech a gai? Mere pyare bhiya rakhi na right hand pe bandhi jati hai left pe nahi.
Karan: koi bat nahi Chahat waise bhi ye sare kam ulte hi karta hai. Tu ise rakhi bhi ulte hat pe hi bandh de.[ Chahat gives him a very harsh luk] acha baba mai jata hu. bhai behen ka pyar khatam ho jaye to neeche a jana bhabhi humara intezar kar rahi hongi unse bhi rakhi bandhwani hai.
saying this he goes out of room. Now only Rajveer and Chahat were left in the room. Chahat sees Rajveer ne abhi tak apna hat age nahi kiya hai. Actually wo Karan ko kuch ishara kar raha tha. Chahat gets angry and wo jhatke se uska hath uthati hai. Achanak hone ki wajah se raj ko kafi dard hota hai and he closes his eyes in pain he didn't want Chahat to no this so he turns his face in other direction. But Chahat ye dekh leti hai.
Chahat: bhiya kya hua?
Rajveer: [ trying to hide his pain] kuch nahi
Chahat: aise kaise kuch nahi. Saf dikh raha hai ke… [pointing to bed] ap baitho yaha.
Rajveer: Chahat am fine tum jaldi se rakhi bandho neeche sab wait kar rahe hai.
Chahat: to karne do wait. Ap mujhe batao ke kya hua hai? [ sudeenly she sees blood strain on his uni wo sidha hospital se a raha tha to usne abhi tak kapre change nahi kiye tha] ye kya hai. Bhiya apko goli…. Aur mai tab se…[she started crying-]
Rajveer: [hugging her] kuch nahi hua hai Chahat. Chalo ab jaldi se rakhi bandhdo neeche sab wait kar rahe honge
Chahat raj ko rakhi baandh deti hai…raj changes his clothes aur who dono neeche jaate hai.
Chahat: ok bros! Maine rakhi to baandh di hai per, mere gifts kaha hai?
Suraj: ha baba, tumhara gift tayyar hai. Yeh raha tumhara gift..
Chahat: aur samarth bhaiya ?
Samarth: yeh lo, kuch log shayad aaj ka yeh din bhool sakte hai per tera yeh bhai kabhi nahi bhulega…
Chahat: thank u so much bhaiya.i luv u.
Samarth: I luv u too …
Chahat: karan bhaiya, waise mujhe laga to nahi phir bhi ….
Karan: yeh raha tumhara gift Chahat…. (Karan Chahat ko bada sa chocolate box deta hai)
Chahat: ah! Chocolates!!! Iska matlab hai aapko yaad tha bhaiya..
Karan: aaj ka din bhi bhool sakta hai kya.pagli…..aur jiski itni pyari behen ho wo to kabhi bhi nahi, koi gadha hi hoga jo aaj ka din bhulega…(looks at raj)
Everyone starts laughing loking at raj and Karan.
Rajveer: to Karan, tumhe lagta hai ki main gadha hu ha ?
Karan: maine aisa to nahi kaha na..main to bas yehi keh raha tha ki aaj ka…
Rajveer : Chahat yeh raha tumhara gift… a sweet teady for a sweet doll…
(Ek basket mein ek white and red color ka sweet sa teadybear hota hai)
Chahat: ahhh bhaiya, this so sweet, iska matlab hai ki aapko yaad tha.
Rajveer: ha ..aur rahe tumhare favourate chocolates….
Chahat: ah bhaiya u r so sweet, I luv u….u r the most sweetest, cutest bro in this world..
Karan, samarth, and suraj: (together) aur hum?
Chahat: aap sabhi bhi…I'm so lucky ki mujhe itne pyare bhai mile hai…
Jaise hi Chahat yeh kehti hai kunal enters thr…
Karan to Rajveer;(very softly) lo ek aur bhaiya aa gaya..
They both start laughing…
Chahat: yeh kya ho raha hai
Karan: kuch nahi..woh dekho kunal aaya hai..hey kual..aaja chal aaj tub hi rakhi banva le…
Karan and Rajveer starts laughing… kunal feels extreme embaressed.
Kunal: shut up Karan.
Rajveer: (haste hue) waise kunal, kaha the aap?
Karan: ha aapka kabse intezar ho raha tha…
Raj jus keeps laughing…
Chahat: ha ha how funny was that bhaiya…..inhe chodo kunal, how r u?
Kunal: I'm fine…
Chahat: ok bhaiya ab main chalti hu..mujhe ek meeting ke liye jana hai...
Rajveer: ok, apna khyaal rakhna...(and hugs her)
Chahat: u too..bye evryone!
evryone: bye Chahat..
and Chahat leaves...
Lt.General (ronit roy): hey boys, aap thoda kaam ki baat ho jaye....
suraj; yes sir kahiye..
lt.general: well..aaj se aap sabhi ko main ek mision pe bhej raha hu.ek aisa mission jaha aapki chuttiya bhi hogi aur kaam bhi.
Karan: kya matlab sir..kaam bhi aur...
lt.general: well..officers u all are going bak to NDA...national defence academy, gulmarg...
evryone is just surprised as to wat is lt.general is talking...
so guys here is the 6th part of our story... hope u all will like it...like it or not but plz send us ur comments we will be waiting 4 that
wid love
farheen and varallikka

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