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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
Loved it completely di!!!!!! Amazing and simply fantabulous!
Keep writing.....always!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx 4 liking our story but yar ye kya aplog bas taliya hi baja rahe ho. waise apki taliya bhi humare liye bahut valuable hai but agar kuch likh bhi dete to humara din ban jata. anyways thx a lotssssssssssssss
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Posted: 18 years ago
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varallika , farheen the part was awesome , fantastic , mindblowing..i liked it very very very much... i seriously love tum dono ki writing..me getting glued to your story...aur jee kartha hain ki tum log post karthe jao likhthe jao aur main padthi jaun padthi jaun.. seriously the part totally rocked..it was toooooo damnnnn goodddddddddd..totally coolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllllll 👍🏼
ab please jaldi se continue karna..me will be waiting for the next part eagerly.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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khwabo ki manzilein... part 7:-

So last epi me humne dekha ke kaise sare log cahat ko apne sir akho pe baithake rahte hai. chahat ke sath hasi mazak me pura din kaise beet jata hai pata hi nahi chalta. Now back to work lt gen. gives them a new job of going back to army school

lt.general: well..aaj se aap sAbhi ko main ek mision pe bhej raha hu.ek aisa mission jaha aapki chuttiya bhi hogi aur kaam bhi.

Karan: kya matlab sir..kaam bhi aur...

lt.general: well..officers u all are going bak to NDA...national defence academy, gulmarg...

Karan: but sir humne to nda 4 sal pehle hi pass kar liya tha

lt. general:[smiling] I no captain ki apne nda pass kar li hai but captain hum apko waha parhne nahi parhane bhej rahe hai

Radhika: but sir we are not teachers

Lt.gen: I no captain that u all r soldiers infact u 7 are our best soldiers that's why we have selected u for this job. This job is not as simple as it looks to be.the fact is that nda gulmarg is one of our infact we can say that it is the best military school we have. U all will know that coz u have been a cadet there. Now listen carefully to what am I going to tell you it's a top confidential news two days earlier militants have threatened us to destroy Nda gulmarg. They have showed us their power by kidnapping colonel bikramjeet sinha for a day. So now the ministry wants our deptt to take care of that school. And for this purpose we have selected u all as we all know u r the best we have. I want u all to go there as a teacher. Apki sacchai sirf mujhe aur deptt ko pata hogi.

Suraj: but sir humara is tarah se base chorke jana kya sahi hoga

Lt. gen:major chuki ye military school humare direct contact me hai isiliye ap log bhi humare contact me rahenge this way u all will serve double purpose. Infact u will serve 3 purposes.

Kunal: sir whats the third one.

Lt. gen:[smiling] captain u all are best so naturally students will get benifitted from ur teachings. Any doubts

Rajveer: sir what are we supposed to teach there??

Lt. gen: you will get all those details later. Now u all may go and relax.

All salutes him and leaves cabin.

Karan: ye leh…. Aye the officers banne ban gaye teachers

Kunal: wo bhi bina extra salary ke

Pritha: mom ne sahi kaha tha teacher ban jao… bekar mai army me a gai

Radhika: hey meri mom ne to professor banne ko kaha tha… chalo unki ye khwaish puri ho gai…

All sees ki Rajveer is standing silently

Karan: hey Raj tum kya soch rahe ho?

Rajveer: yahi ki waha ke students kaise honge????

Karan: jaise humlog the academy me

Rajveer: exactly … jaise humlog the…. aur humlog unhe parhayenge

Karan [ shuru usne kafi excitedly kiya tha but ye kehte kehre uske cehre pe dar ka expression a jat hai]: mar gaye yar maine to ye socha hi nahi tha

Suraj[ cums to them] kya nahi socha tha.

Karan: yahi ki hum cadets ko parhayenge kaise

Suraj: waise hi jaise baki bachho ko parhaya jata hai

Karan: bachho ko na… but shaitano ko kaise parhate hai ye pako pata hai???

Suraj: ye kya bol rahe ho

Rajveer: bhiya yad hai humare bach ne class ke first day kya kiya tha

Suraj: ha ache se yad hai. tumlogo ne teachers ki kursi ka pair tod diya tha and wo pai wale portion ko pani se bhari balti se bandh diya tha aur jaise hi wo baithe to seedha neeche and pani ki balti unke upar[starts laughing]

Rajveer: are bhiya apko to sab yad hai to ab jara sochiye agar hum aise the to Abhi ke cadets kaise honge??

Suraj: sach kaha mujhe to Abhi ke teachers pe taras a raha hai bechare kaise sambhalte honge

Rajveer: bhiya hum unhi ke teachers banke ja rahe hai

Suraj[ still laughing] are ha hum to teachers banke ja rahe hai

Rajveer: bhiya hum teachers banke ja rahe hai

Suraj:[ suddenly realises the situation and stops laughtng] hum unke teachers banke ja rahe hai… yani.. hum…[wo jane ke liye murte hai]

Rajveer and Karan: are kaha chaldiye

Suraj: devyani se kehne ki bag me thore se bandages and haldi bhi rakh de. Pitne ke bad kam ayegi

Suraj waha se chala jata hai and all ppl start laughing.

Karan: pata nahi yar cadets kaise honge??

Now back to our prospective cadets. they have got their selection letter in the morning itself. They were selected for NDA Gulmarg. they were supposed to join academy after 3 day for this they will have to leave Mumbai tomorrow so now this was the last day of their freedom they wanted to enjoy it as much as possible. They were having party only 4 six of them. They were in the most happening pub of Mumbai fire and ice[ sorry guys we don't know anything abt discos this one is the most happening in pune but abt mum…. So just bear this wid us] all were having a blast.all were dancing in full swing Music was playing

Ya ali reham ali ya ali yar pe kurban hai sAbhi

Ya ali madad ali ya ali ye meri jan

Ye zindagi ishq pe ha mita du luta du

Mai apni khudi

Yar pe luta du mita du mai apni hasti

Ya ali reham ali ya ali yar pe kurban hai sAbhi

Ya ali madad ali ya ali ye meri jan

Ye zindagi

Mujhe kuch pal de gurbat ke

Fakeeran teri chahat ke

Rahe bechain dil kab tak

Mile kuch pal to rahat ke

Chahat pe ishq pe ha mita du luta du

Yar pe ha luta du mita du mai apni hasti

Ya ali reham ali ya ali yar pe kurban hai sAbhi

Ya ali madad ali ya ali ye meri jan

Ye zindagi...............

Rohan: hey Yuvi...yaar aaj hum dil kholke enjoy karenge...

Abhi: kyun bhai? kal kahi jaane ka plan hai kya?

Yuvi: dude kya pata hume academy se bahar aane ka mauka phir kab mile?

Ashi: zindagi mein pehli baar is wako ne sahi kaha hai Abhi... pata nahi hume phir kAbhi mauka milega bahar aane ka...

Anu: ha..aur isiliye we r gonna just enjoy all nite!!!

.....sAbhi frnds apni azaadi ka aakhri din manane mein itne masroof hote hai ki unhe apne aane wali zindagi ka kuch bhi pata nahi hota hai...woh bas iss apne zindagi ke iss pal ko khulkar

jeena chahte the...

its a bright new day ya u kahe its 'THE DAY' for our students to enter the academy...

its afternoon time..

saari raat apni azaadi ka aakhri lamhe manane mein itne masroof the ki woh yeh bhool chuke the ki unhe agle din "jaldi" academy pohochna hai...

per hamare honewale officers apne khwabo mein kuch iss kadar khoye hue hai ki unhe iss baat ka bilkul ilm nahi hai ki dupeher hone ko aayi hai aur unhe ab tak nikalna chaiye tha..

yes u guessed it right...hamare hoonhaar bachche ab tak so rahe hai...

phir kuch der baad Abhi jaag hi jaata hai..

Abhi: hey...Rohan..kitne baje hai?

per Rohan to gehri neend mein hai...

Abhi: ( a bit loudly) Rohan

Rohan: hmm

Abhi: kitne baje hai?

Rohan: hmm

Abhi: are kitne baj rahe hai?

Rohan: kya Abhi? Abhi kaafi raat hai, so jao, waise bhi hume savere jaldi uthna hai..academy jana hai.. so jao

academy ka naam sunte hi Abhi wakes up suddenly and looks at the watch..

Abhi: oh god! abe raat nahi...dupeher ka 1 baj raha hai... (gets up quickly) guys wake up..

per all in vain..no one wakes up..

Abhi shouts out loudly Rohan, Yuvi wake up...abe marvaoge kya? hume academy pohochna hai..

Abhi just rushes to the bathroom & gets ready...

therez a knock at the door..

Abhiopens the door..its Dhwani..

Dhwani: god..Abhi we are so late..hum log kaise pohochenge?

Abhi: Anu aur Ashi uth gaye?

Dhwani: ha Abhi Abhi unhe uthkar aayi hu...

Abhi: ok pls unse kaho jaldi kare hume kam se kam 3-4 ghante lagenge yahase gulmarg jaane mein

Dhwani : ha ha main dekhti hu unhe..

she leaves.

Abhi: (screams out loudly) Rohan........Yuvi ...wake up

Rohan and Yuvi wakes up...

both: kya hua?

Abhi: look at the watch..its 1:30 hume gulmarg pohochna hai...

both: oh god!

Abhi: get ready guys..hurry up!

Rohan and Yuvi rushes and gets ready...

waha girls too get ready...

all cum downstairs..

Abhi: chalo chalo guys hurru up nahi to bus chali jayegi..

Rohan: yaar kya hum taxi nahi kar sakte?

Anu: shut up Rohan and just het going..we are already late ..tum pls apni ideas apne tak hi rakho.

Rohan: oh really...u think i'm..

Abhi: stop it guys...yeh waqt in sab baato ke liye nahi hai...

kuch der mein sAbhi bus stop per pohoch jaate hai per to their bad luch the bus had alredy left an hour before...

Ashi: hey bhaggu! now wat? ab hum kya kare?

Rohan: hey common guys this is not the end of the world! hum taxi kar lete hai

Abhi: i think u r right Rohan..iske alaawa hum kuch kar bhi nahi sakte..we are already late...its already 3 now aur Abhi yaha jaane tak to shaam hi ho jayegi...

Yuvi: ok fine...

aur woh taxi kar hi lete hai...

per evrything is not that easy it seems to be...unhe nainitaal chode base 1 ghnata hi hue hota hai ki raaste mein woh traffic mein phass jaate hai...

Yuvi: hell! isse bura aur kya ho sakta tha?

Ashi: hey bhaggu! yehi 4: 30 baj gaye hai... iss accident ko bhi Abhi hi hona tha kya? lagta hai ki bhaggu ne thaan liya hai ki woh hume academy pohochne nahi dega..

Rohan: aye hello, Ashi maate aap chup rahegi? apne bhaggu se baad mein baithkar araam se baate kar lena per Abhi pls! chup raho..

kaafi der baad raasta khul jata hai aur raat ke kuch 9:30 baje saare frnds aakhir academy tak pohoch hi jaate hai.

they all are standing out of the gate... where they can see sum guards standing.

Yuvi: hell! we are jacked.iss waqt hum ander kaise jayenge?

Rohan: guys hum uss gate se ander jaa sakte hai(pointing towards the other gate)..shayad waha koi nahi hai...waha kaafi jhaad bhi hai..hume waha koi dekh nahi payega.

Abhi: ok.........per dhyaan se..pata nahi kab kaha koi guard saamne aa jaye.

evryone goes towards the gate...

per woh yeh nahi jaante the ki ander unhi ke teachers (our army officers) are having a meeting...

Suraj: well..guys kal se hamara pehla din hai...we have to be very alert...

Karan: ha..hume kal se double alert pe rehna hoga.ek to hamara mission hai ..jise hum handle kar sakte hai..per bhaiya yeh cadets???

Kunal: mujhe to apne academy ke din yaad aa gaye..

Rajveer: isiliye to Karan itna pareshaan hai...

Radhika: ha ..humne to kitni sharaat ki thi...per aaj kal ke bachche kuch jyada hi forward hai...

Pritha: ha..pata nahi kal hamara welcum kaise hone wala hoga...

Karan: aur aksar pehle din pe teachers ko hi target banaya jaata hai.

sabhi baate karte hote hai ki achchank Rajveer ko kuch sunayi deta hai...kyunki woh bilkul usi jhaad ke aage baitha hota hai jiske peeche se hamare cadets ander aane ke chakkar mein hote hai..

Raj bilkul chup hota hai aur yaha waha dekhne lagta hai..

Suraj: kya hua Raj?

Raj: sir ..woh ..yaha kuch

aur Raj yaha waha dekhta hai per kuch nahi hota hai....

Suraj: Raj?

Raj: nothing sir..shayd maine kuch suna

Samarth: lagta hai major Rajveer ke kan baj rahe hai… humesha hero banne ki adapt jo ho gai hai inhe

Raj and samarth gives each other a very hard stare raj was going to say something …. per tabhi Raj ko dubara kuch sunayi deta hai..kisi ki kadmo ki awaaz ....phir achchank jhaad hilne lagta hai...

Raj just gets up to see wat is it all others follow him aur jaise hi Raj jhaad ko haath lagata hai............

Ashi steps in ......

kisi tarha woh jhaado ke beech se ander aa hi jaati hai ....

per jaise hi woh ander kadam rakhti hai..woh bilkul hairaan ho jati hai....apne

saamne saare teachers ko khada paati hai...

ek ke baad saare frnds ander aate hai....aur saare teachers ko apne saamne khada

paate hai...

all the students are shock to see the teachers standing right in front of them!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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toooooooo goodddddddddddddddddd , lovely , marvellous , very coolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll...
yuhoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.....i tho totally loved it yaar.... 👏
u know now me seriously want to know ki agge kya hoga.. mazaa aayega.......😉
waise dear humari heroinejii kahaan gayab hain...😆 please uska intro jaldi se karwana.....😛
ab please jaldi se continue karna..me will be waiting for the next part... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi surya
thx a tonn 4 liking the part. am happy tht u enjoyed it. abt our heroine are yar sabr karo. jab humare hero ne entry me itna time lagaya to apni heroine bhi bho khayegi na but i assure u ki jaldi hi uski entry hogi. but tab tak keep reading and sending us ur comments the r really valuable 4 us
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guys first of all am really sorry tht our part is being delayed but yar am out of station so its taking a while... but i promise to post it as sson as possible..... but whats this yar no comments for part 7.... 😭 itna bura part bhi nahi tha.... aur agar tha bhi to bhi aplogo ka farz banta hai ki ap comments do 😃 am waiting 4 ur commets
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Posted: 18 years ago
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varallika dear plz post soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly.. 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Khwaabo Ki Manzilein....Part-8

recap:Lt.General sabhi officers ko ek naye mission ke baare mein batate hai jiske liye sabhi officers ko dubara academy..NDA..Gulmarg jana
padta hai.....Saare cadets raat bhar party karte hai aur as usual academy ke baare mein bhool jate hai...saare officers academy pohoch chuke hai per hamare
cadets abhi tak bahar hi hai..dekhte hai ki ab yeh kya naya gul khilate hai.........

At Academy.. (NDA..Gulmarg)............

Suraj: well..guys kal se hamara pehla din hai...we have to be very alert...

Karan: ha..hume kal se double alert pe rehna hoga.ek to hamara mission hai ..jise hum handle kar sakte hai..per bhaiya yeh cadets???

Kunal: mujhe to apne academy ke din yaad aa gaye..

Rajveer: isiliye to Karan itna pareshaan hai...

Radhika: ha ..humne to kitni sharaat ki thi...per aaj kal ke bachche kuch jyada hi forward hai...

Pritha: ha..pata nahi kal hamara welcum kaise hone wala hoga...

Karan: aur aksar pehle din pe teachers ko hi target banaya jaata hai. hey kunal waise tumhe kaunsa subject mila hai?

Kunal: physical training aur tumhe?

Karan: are mat pooch yar mujhe to French me dal diya hai

Pritha: chalo acha hi hai waise bhi tumhari baate kisi ko samajh me nahi ati hai. atleast students ye soch ke santushth kar lenge ki tum French me bat kar rahe ho

Karan: that was not funny. Waise tumhe kya mila?

Pritha: chemistry.

Karan: are wah mistry ko chemistey god saves ur students.

Pritha: shut up.

Kunal: are chod na. kya tumlog humesha ladne lagte ho. Radihka tum kya parhane wali ho?

Radhika: mujhe maths parhana hai aur isse pehle ki tumlog age pooch main hi bata deti hu ke Suraj sir physics parha rahe hai and samarth sir weapons and equitation.

Karan: gud yaar tum sab ko apne layak subjects mile hai siwaye mere. pata nahi kyou mujhe French me dal diya. But one min Raj use kya parhana hai

sabhi baate karte hote hai ki achanak Rajveer ko kuch sunayi deta hai...kyunki woh bilkul usi jhaad ke aage baitha hota hai jiske peeche se hamare cadets ander aane ke chakkar mein hote hai..


Raj bilkul chup ho jata hai

Karan: hey Raj tujhe kaunsa subject mila hai?[no reply so he shakes him] Raj kaha khoye huye ho?

Raj: nahi kuch nahi… tum kuch keh rahe the?

Karan: ha hum ye pooch rahe the ki tumhe kauna subject mila hai?

Raj: special services.


Raj phirse chup ho jata hai aur uski nazrein lagatar boundry wall ki taraf hoti hai



Suraj: kya hua Raj?

Raj: sir ..woh ..yaha kuch

aur Raj yaha waha dekhta hai per kuch nahi hota hai....

Suraj: Raj?

Raj: nothing sir..shayad maine kuch suna

Samarth: lagta hai major Rajveer ke kaan baj rahe hai… humesha hero banne ki adat jo ho gai hai inhe

Raj and samarth gives each other a very hard stare Raj was going to say something …. But Suraj stops him in order to avoid further arguments…

Suraj: bahut raat ho gai hai chalo sab ander chalte hai kal class bhi to hai

All goes in Rajveer also stands up to go in…….per tabhi Raj ko dubara kuch sunayi deta hai..kisi ki kadmo ki awaaz .... wo jaldi se uth ke us taraf jata hai ……………..

Chaliye ye to ho gai humare teachers ki baat lets see humare late lateef cadets kya kar rahe hai.
Now all 6 of them are standing infront of the boundary wall

Anu: are hum yaha se kaise ander jayenge?

Ashi: wo kya hai na ki humare liye yaha naya gate ban raha hai jaise hi wo ban jata hai hum ander chale jayenge

Anu: really?

Ashi: hey bhaggu! How will I handel this duffer. Mate hum yaha se kud ke ander jayenge

Anu: wht? kud ke nahi nahi ye mujhse nahi hoga? Main nahi karne wali DM Gautam shankar ki beti diwar phan ke ander jayegi. No ways !!!

Rohan: hey why don't u do 1 thing tum gate pe jao waha apne dad ka name bolo wo log tumhare liye darwaza khol denge.

Anu: shut up mujhe tumhare wahiyad ideas ki koi jarurat nahi hai

Abhi: stop it guys chalo ander chalte hai .

Yuvi: but bro hum charhenge kaise?

Ashi: hey bhaggu! Ye hai humare desh ke prospective sipahi jo ek 10 foot ki diwar bhi nahi charh sakte..

Yuvi: shut up wako aur agar tum itni hi kabil ho to jara charh ke dikhao.

Ashi: psyco diwar charhne ke liye takat ki nahi dimag ki jarurat hoti hai.

Yuvi: oh really.. to jara hum bhi to dekhe miss Anwesha jaisingh ka dimag.

Ashi: sure ! main tumhari ye icha jarur puri karungi…

Abhi: Ashi… yuvi stop fighting and Ashi agar apke pas koi idea hai to plz jaldi bataiye aisa na ho ki koi a jaye

Ashi: just wait and watch

Ashi pas pade huye bricks ko ek ke upar ek rakhke platform type ka bana ti hai aur uspe charh ke dewar ke uspar jati hai. all others follow her in the same manner. They were all behind the bush. Ashi tries to get out of the bush but she slips and fall down. Kisi ke haath ka sahara le kar wo uthti hai and jhari se bahar aati hai. in all this she forgets to bother about who's hand was that she very casually holds the hand thinking it was of sum friend's.

Ashi[cuming out of bush] : thx buddy

Person: you r most welcum

[Hearing the voice she raises her head…wo jhatke se apna sar uthati hai… and finds Raj standing infront of her with a killing smile on his face]

Raj:waise apke sath aur bhi koi hai ya ap akele hi…..

just then Anu, abhi ,Dhwani ,yuvi and rohan all cums unaware of the fact that they have been caught. Light was very dim so kuch thik se dikhai bhi nahi de raha tha. So all ppl come to Ashi unhone Rajveer ko nahi dekha hota hai

Anu:[ to Ashi] are ye army wale bhi kitne bewakuf hai na.. humne dewar par bhi karli aur kisi ko pat abhi nahi chala

Ashi: Anu chup

Rohan: are kya chup zindagi me pehli bar to sahi kaha hai is dumbo ne…

Rajveer: army wale itne bhi bewakuf nahi hote jitna aplog is waqt samajh rahe hai

[All trun around and finds Raj standing infront of them, his smile was still on his face. All were hell shocked to see him ]

So first year students.. interesting… ander ane ka bahut acha rasta dhunda hai aplogo ne but afsoos ye rasta 4 sal pehle hi azmaya ja chukka hai…. so am sorry to tell that u guys have made no discovery …. anyways I'm major....

[he was going to say his name tabhi hi karan uska name chillate huye waha a jata hai]

Karan: Raj…Raj… yar kahaa…..[seeing the students] ye kaun hai

Raj: humare naye mehman

Karan: mehman? Muhjhe to ye 1st yr cadets lagte hai

Raj: nahi karan ye humare mehman hai.. aur hume inki kahtirdari karni hai

Agli subha hamare sare cadets apna apna bag uthaye ground ke chakkar kaat rahe hai.. nahi samjhe are yar humare hero ne unko late ane ki punishment jo di thi. It was now more than one hour they were doing this punishment..

Rohan: are yar us major…kya name tha uska… ram… ragg…

Anu: Raj
Rohan: ha Raj yar us major Raj ne to humari achchi khaasi exercise karva dii. Itni to main gym mein bhi nahi karta…

Abhi: sab apk logo ki wajah se hua hai….maine kaha tha itni late night party mat karo

Anu: aye chal chal last day tha enjoyment ka hum kya karte

Dhwani: hum kya karte? Bol to aise rahi ho ke agar celibrate na kare to hume academy se nikal dete.

Yuvi: wah kya intro hai academy ke pehle hi din hum yaha bag le kar ground me daur rahe hai.. and all coz of our g8 Ashi

Ashi: hey bhaggu!! Ab maine kya kiya

Yuvi: kya kiya? Tumhe kya wahi major mila tha hath pakar ke chalne ke liye

Ashi: kya karu tumhari tarah intelligent nahi hu na ki hat pakarne se pehle uska name poch leti…

Yuvi: u have got us all in trouble psycho

Ashi: oh really wako

Just then they heared Rajveer's voice.

Rajveer: get going guys jitni der karoge utne jyada chakkar katne honge

Rajveer and karan was sitting in a shed made on side of the ground from where they could see the cadets doing their punishment

Raj: pata hai karan aj se 5 sal pehle isi tarah 3 log academy ki deewar kud ke ander aye the

Karan: Really??

Raj:hmmm

Flash back

Time:Exactly 5 years ago from today
Place: academy gate

Two cadets were standing on the academy gate they were late and the guard was not allowing them to cum in


1st guy: plz hume ander jane dijiye

2nd : ha waise bhi hum bas 5 ghante hi to late huye hai

Guard: am sorry but hum logo ko ander jane nahi de sakta permission nahi hai…aplog kal ao

2nd guy: plz… dekhiye ap samajhne ki koshish kijiye . hum first yr students hai humara ander jana bhaut jaruri hai

Gurd: hum kuch nahi kar sakta aplog jao

Tabhi a gal cums from behind

Gal: whats up guys tum log aise yaha kyou khare ho??

1st guy: dikhta nahi hai academy gates bad ho gaye hai

Gal: to isme kya hai khulwa lete hai….

2nd guy: sure… shauk se jaiye aur agar khul jaye to kindly hume bhi bataiye ga taki hum bhi ja sake..

1st guy[ to 2nd guy] ye sab tum dono ki wajah se hua hai…

2nd: maine kya kiya hai

1st : tumne kya kiya hai tumhari wajah se humari train miss hui kyou? Kyouki tum apni girlfriend ko dilasa de rahe the

2nd guy[who was trying to control his anger all this time cud no more bear he stood up and got hi collar] mind ur language

1st guy: leave my collar ….[ no reaction from Raj as he was fuming in anger] I said leave my collar

The gal who was watching all thse from long time cutted them in between

Gal: guys guys guys relax…. Abhi apas me jhagarne se behtar ha ki hum ander jane ka rasta dhunde…..

1st guy: ha wo to thik hai but kaise

Gal: I have an idea

She takes them to the boundary wall and they gets in thoru the same way as our 6 cadets did. And were cought by senior officers…

End of flash back

Karan: quite interesting yar but ye sab tujhe kaise pata… aur ye cadtes kaun the?

Raj: mujhe ye pata hai coz unme se ek cadet mai tha

Karan: what? Hey…but baki dono???

Raj: samarth and radhika

Karan: what I cant believe it….but ye bata ke tumlogo ko punishment kya mili thi??

Raj: wahi jo maine in cadets ko di hai

Karan: Raj u r too much….

Raj said nothing just kept smiling. Now it's a new day. All cadets have been instructed to gather in the assembly hall so that principal colonel bikramjeet singh could start the new batch wid his speech
All were assembeled in the hall…. For the first time in their life our cadets were in time….

Colonel: good morning students… welcum to the academy … from today u all are gonna be part of this academy…you will share its glory, prestige and honour… at the same time u all wud be responsible for its prestige glory and honour…u all are not just cadets u are our future… ur are our prospective soldiers… a soldier is the most important part of a country…. He is responsible to the country and for the country… he is one who gurantees security of a country and its ppl…by stepping in this academy you have come a step closer to becum a soldier… but mind it that from now onward the path is going to be really tough and dangerous… for those who have come here influenced by the army life shown in movies and televisions, I give them one chance to back out… coz its nothing like whats shown on screen its something real….. this path is full of challenges dangers and pain… where the cost of one mistake is paid by own life… so cadets I suggest u to be serious…. And devote urself in ur making cozzzz this country relies on u all… this is all I wanted to say now u can return back to ur classes…. Dismissed

All setteled down in the class. First period was of weapons. All were waiting eagerly for the teacher to cum in.there was 5 mins left for the class so all the cadets started talking which caused a g8 noise……. A handsome guy entered in the class and went to the teachers desk

Anu: jo bhi bol yar is academy ke teachers bahut handsome hai

Dhwani: tujhe kya marriage proposal dena hai inko

Anu: are mai to bas

Fed up with the noise teacher shouted: silence

[There was something in his voice and looks that could make him boss anywhere.. hearing to his voice all whole class fell silent while he continued with smile]


Very good. So I am major samarth chopra apka weapons teacher. But class shuru karne se pehle mai apko ek bat batana chahta hu mujhe kisi bhi tarah ki badtamizi ya indiscipline apne class me manzur nahi hai ye[catching a paper plane that was cuming toward him] aur ye bat ap jitna jaldi samjhenge utna hi apke. Is tht clear. So lets continue wid our lesson

After this they all go back to their lesson. Nobody dared to do any kind of prank in this class. Aur of samarth didn't let them do anything . but humari baccha party ke plans kuch alag hi the. Wo log jyada der chup nahi reh sakte . next class was of chemistry i.e of captain pritha sharma. She was going to enter the class when some one called her from behind.

Person: hey pritha wait…

Pritha: oh Raj sir….

Raj: pritha you left your attendance register in the staff room[gives register to her]

Pritha: oh sorry pata nahi kaise bhul gai?

Raj: its okay it seems that u r quite nervous abt the class

Pritha: actually yes sir….

Raj: relax kuch nahi hoga bas bacche hi to hai…. tum kaho to mai karan ko bhejdu tumhari help karne

Pritha[blushing] sir ap bhi

Raj: okay sorry anyways u go in class ke liye der ho rahi hai.

Pritha moves towards the class. Raj dekhta hai ki class ka darwaza band hai. use kuch garbar lagta hai… coz generally class ka door kabhi band nahi rehta… so he runs to her… pritha was abt to open the door when Raj pulls her aside… aur jaise hi darwaza khulta hai upar se ink ki barish hoti hai… tab tak waha Suraj samarth karan kunal radhika sab a chuke hote ha… sare log ye sab dekh kar hairan ho jate hai wahile Raj was fuming wid anger…he enters into class…

Raj: who the hell has done this? Kiski harkat hai ye….
[ koi kuch nahi bolta hai] maine poocha kiski harkat hai ye? [silence] fine to aplog kuch nahi bolenge… thik hai phir saza bhi apsabko milegi… whole class get up…. Bahar aplog ground ke 20 chakkar lagayenge wid rifles…. That also in 20 mins jise jitna time lagega use utne jyada chakkar lagane honge…

All class: but sir..

Raj: and ur time starts now…..

Sare log bahar jate hai and start their punishments…. Sabko pata tha ki ye harkar Ashi yuvi rohan aur Anu ki hai…. so sab use gusse se ghurne lagte hai…. but they simple don't care….. sare log time se punishment complete kar lete hai except our 4 late lateef cadets… aur wo log apne sath Dhwani aur abhi ko bhi late karwadete hai they finish their punishment abt 10 mins late…

Rajveer: u all are 10 mins late….. so according to our deal… aolog jaiye aur 10 extra chakkar laga ke aiyeye….

Dhwani: tum logo ki wajah se aj hume phirse punishment mili…..

Anu: humne kya kiya…

Abhi: wo sara plan aphi ka tha na

Rohan: to jake batade na us major ko…. Taki wo tumlog ko chor de….

Abhi: tumlogo se to bat karma hi bekar hai…

Yuvi: apas me larna band karo guys….

Rohan: ek to wo major kya name hai uska …. Ram…rag…ragu..

Anu: Raj

Rohan : ha Raj.. pata nahi uski problem kya hai?? har waqt punishment hi deta rehta hai…..lagta hai kabhi zindagi me pranks nahi khele hai…

Yuvi: shakal se to aisa hi lagta hai bro… waise wo samarth bhi kuch kam nahi hai… but this major Raj is a reall trouble…

Ashi: bahut over smart samajhta hai na khud ko… dusro ko bachata phirta hai… agar maine bhi use trap nahi kiya na to mera name bhi Anwesha jaisingh nahi ……

Now it was a fresh new day… all were sleeping in their rooms…alarm was ringing hard but koi bhi uthne ke mood me nahi tha… kal ke 30 chakkar ke bad sare log bahut thake huye the… but any how sae log uthte hai and taiyar hoke class me jate hai.. first period was of special services


Dhwani: pata nahi hume ye subject kaun parhayega?

Ashi: kya farak parta hai….sare ke sare Hitler hi to hai yaaha

Abhi: farak parta hai Ashi…this is the most imp subject… isi pe depend karta hai ki hum kitne ache soldiers bante hai

Just then a handsom good looking guy comes in the room all gets shocked to see him coz he was none other than our hero Rajveer

Raj: gud morning cadets… [looking at 6 of them] waise aplog mujhse kal hi mil chuke hai but abhi tak humara official intro nahi hua hai… ao I am Major Rajveer Rathod ur teacher for spl services…. Aj humara pehla class hai so this we will combine it wid physical education…. So all cadets come to ground in 10 mins…


Saying this he leaves the class.. all students get very excited..including out honhaar cadets..

Dhwani: wow spl services wid physical edu… bahut maza ayega

Ashi: sach kaha mate bahut maza ayega… ye major apne ap ko baut over smart samajhta ahi na… ab dikhati hu ise iski smartness

Anu: Ashi tu kya karne wali hai..

Ashi: jyada kuch nahi bas uski ek do haddi torni hai.. tumlog ye batao tumlog mere sath ho???

Rohan: unfortunately but am wid u

Yuvi: main bhi….

Ashi: cool… to suno plan…

They make some plan to trap Raj…after 10 mins everyone has gathered in the ground. Infront of them was a temporary wodden stage… on which teachers were supposed to demonstrate them….

Ashi: done! kam ho gaya

Yuvi: everything is done!!!

Rohan: great ab ayega maza…

Abhi: aplogo ne kya kiya hai??

Rohan: dude bas dekhte jao…. Bas us major ki us stage pe charhne ki der hai…

Tabhi they come Captain Kunal coming to them..

Ashi: hey bhaggu! Ab ye kaun a gaya??

Kunal: hi cadets.. I am Captain Kunal Kapoor ur Physical education and equitation teacher…. So I have this class combined wid major Rajveer Rathod but he has stuck up in sum work … don't worry he will be here any moment…. By the time I guess I shud start over

wo stage ki taraf barhta hai… aur yaha humare cadtes ki halat kharab ho rahi hoti hai…

Ashi: he bhaggu!! Agar ye stage pe char gaya to problem ho jayegi

Rohan: koi is bewakuf ko batao ki humne stage ki rassi kat di hai… charha to seedhe neeche jayega

Dhwani: wht?? I cant believe it tumlog aisa kaise kar sakte ho

Yuvi: we are completely dead this time guys… iss raj ko pata chala ki is sab ke peeche hum hai to pata nahi kya karega?

Rohan: God save us now….

Abhi: are koi roko unhe…

Abhi kunal ko rokne ke liye aage badhta hi hai per tab tak kunal stage tak pahuch chukka hota hai jaise hi wo stage pe pair rakhta hai pura stage toot jata hai uss platform ke peeche ek gehri nadi hoti hai usme gir jata hai…. Thik usi waqt Raj bhi waha a jata hai…. And kunal ko girta hua dekh ke wo bhi nadi me chalang laga deta hai… use bachae… aur yaha humare cadtes ki halat kharab ho rahi hoti hai…. Unhone itna sab expect jo nahi kiya tha..



end of part -8

hope u all enjoyed reading it....

do comment on it..

regards-

varallikka & farheen



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so guys wwe have posted the part hope u all like it
this time we want commets okay

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