SwaRon SS :10 days Without You ❤️..Ch- 1..Pg-1

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NehuFFpmz

@NehuFFpmz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

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Rose

@--Rose--

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Wow Lovely update:-D:-D
Aww I loved Swayam and His dad's convo:-)
and Swayam's reaction🤣
Jus loved it<3<3<3
Plz continue soon:-):-)

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Swathi

@swathi_swaron

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

unres ed in page 1...

deepu a complaint/suggestion from myside...

please dont like the comment when it is in res...

let the person unres it...

otherwise the person who unresed the comment doesnt even know whether you checked their comment or not...

hope you dont mind telling this to you 😳

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

sorry am late :(
but the update was awesome👏
u cum back to writing stuff with the bang👍🏼..

loved the start..
swayam dream..teasing dad🤣
swayam wanted to be with sharon to care her aww..
sharon selfless love❤️
these 10 days really gonna be hard for both😊
loved the update alot..
really excited for next..
plz update soon..
thanks for the pm :)

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

itna der me pm kyu----?

dil toot gaya mera deepu.😭

i wanted to comment early early.

but anyway---mai bhi late ho gayi hun---jab pm actually aya---i still have not been able to check it🤢. blame kisko kar rahi hu🤢

anyway, ok---i read this and this was everything i wanted in the erstwhile track...when swayam came to know. of the murgi disease.

uggh its seriously hateful that one---the inactivity of chicken pox.

i loved the love in it---and the care. and the pain of the separation of a new new couple. but the best was how you gave us the papa beta scene. the papa shekhawat track ended abruptly----and we never really had an intimate scene of bonding. the behind the ztage scene was all we could wish for----papa understood swayam---fantastic---approved sharon---fantastic---but what about making up the lost conversations with his son-----the intimacy---the bonding?

well i found it here. thank you for it deepu---and as alwaysi loved your writingl. and the humour in the sharon resembling papa was real cool.

love--medha.

Edited by medhasarkar - 12 years ago

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Yogini

@yogini64

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Wow... its lovely..😃

Awww... majnu boy dreaming abt his laila urf diva...😉

& caught red handed by papa shekhavat ... rofl...😆

I badly wanna see ... such a scene in show...😛

Kitni cutely wierd & shy+embarrasing situation hogi na... 😃😳😆

Big deal... he already know-- they are a couple... moreover he's happy with their match...😎

Ohhh... its so damn sad time... when 2 lovers can't meet ... coz she's sick...

Poor swayam... he wanna care her... but he got a really stubborn gf... lol 😆

Awww... this house shifting thing is really cute... thats what is true love...🤗

Amazing...👏

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

This ss is a nice and innovative.initiative by u to spend.swaron less.days! nice effort! I liked the first chapter..it wasnt.overdone at any.point..a nice.blend of love.and innocence..cute start..update soon!

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kespari

@kespari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

update

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😭😭

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Namratha

@nami2811

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

OMG dats lovely..

I so wished something of this sort happens on d show!

Swayam n papa having a light hearted conversation about Sharon n he approving her is so wonderful to c..

And wen Swayam gets to know abt her chicken pox the way he reacts is so Swayamish but poor guy usi gaadi ko break laga diya Sharon ne :(

I would love to read d next parts Deepu. Jaldi update karo :)

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

wow!! a new SS by u eee it's gonna be great 😃
awesome start..
Loved the Father-Son part.. and such a awesome dream I must say 😳
loved the way Swayam was behaving after knowing about chicken pox...
amazingly written as always 👏
Do continue soonnn!!
sorry for the late comment 😔