SwaRon SS :10 days Without You ❤️..Ch- 1..Pg-1

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lakshmi

@ShasthaaPriyaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Sorry for the late comment.😭 I loved the update!😃 The dream was so romantic and the papa-son convo adorable.Kaash aise kuch show mein hota😒.this is the first writing i am reading of yours.Beautifully written.captures the reader's mind.Please update soon.Eagerly waiting for the update.😃

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swaronloverme

@swaronloverme

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

awesome start deeps

I really liked the funny and teasing papa shekhawat

bechara swayam kitna acha sapna dekh raha tha toot gaya

its was really amazing to read it

thanks for the pm

do me me the next part

sry for late comment

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Princess_Devil

@Princess_Devil

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

awesome update deep di...

loved papa shekhwat n swayam's convo...

our majnu in laila's dream land

but in reality it was papa shekhwat 😆

sharon having chicken box 😔

swaron not meeting eachother for 10days...

aisa hoyi nahi saktha humara swayam bhi majnu hai 😉

update soon...

thnx fr d pm...

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

This was pretty amazing! :) Majnu missing his diva n dreaming of her :P n d Kiss seemed so real lol. Rishi n Swayam convo was gud :D I liked ur choice of vocabulary! :) It was penned down perfect n aptly :D

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

deepika di is back and how!

it was beautiful di.

the emotions were soft and innocent and i loved how you used nature to illustrate that.

while its true that you were a little rusty there due to your long absence from writing,it is also true that even then you were better than most.

waiting for you to hit your stride so we can get updates to your other ffs as well!😛

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samira

@laksh_kt

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Awesome update 👏 sorry for the late comment..

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Ayushi.

@-.wanderlust.-

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

An SS by you after a longgg time & you are back with a bang😳
Awesome awesome awesome. Loved the first part😊❤️
The Son-Dad part was the highlight for me😛
"Kya hoga aj kal ke bacchon ka"😆😆

Continue & update soon.
Sorry for commenting late😭
Love,
Ayushi

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Anushka

@fun4ever

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

First of all sorry 4 commenting late
My net wasn't working 😭
Amazing ss
Pls do continue and update soon 😊

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

awesome start of the ss di

this is an amazing concept

this ss is based on the current track n all those moments which i wished to see on screen r shown here

loved the father son convo n papa teasing his son

n the best part both having the same ringtone pehla nasha was something wow wow wow

sharon down wid chicken pox n swayam cant stay without his love

sharon the diva n swyam our one n nly majnu

just waiting to read the next update

plz update as soon as possible

thanx for the pm

will be waiting for the next update

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Guys..plz dont say sorry for late comments..i know u all r busy..if u are busy in studies or job...no need to stress urself and comment..just press the like button...i wont mind...i completely understand ..😊plz dont say sorry...acha nhi lagta 😳

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago