SwaRon SS :10 days Without You ❤️..Ch- 1..Pg-1

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter-1

Chapter-2

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Deepika

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Partner (Nehal)😳

First and foremost i am dancing here, finally my partner has resumed writing. Gosh i so wanted to read your write ups. coming to the SS..the title itself defines the eagerness and the question every Swaron fan must have faced when we all came to know about Sharon's absence.

Well, This part was just perfect in every term... Swayam dreaming about Sharon...Typical majnu boy. He trying to kiss her in dreams...and in reality Sharon has to demand it... 😆

Ha ha...poor majnu...was about to kiss his Dad... Loved his and Rishi convo... I would love to see something like that in D3...and then his re collection of the first kiss by Sharon...Aww... too cute...

I loved the way he is always ready to go towards Sharon when she needs him...* Touchwood*

He must be cursing Chicken pox like Swaron fans are doing right know...😆😆

Looking forward to see how will he spend those 10 days without his love..

Surbhi(My Miss Positive)

DD 🤗
A SS from you!! Wow, finally you are getting back on track 😛
And good that you wrote something from all your heart 😳
You dedicate it to your friends and 😃July-Babies😃 Yeahhh!!!

Okay now coming to the first chapter 😎
Swayam caught red handed while dreaming about sharon 😆 Majnu-ness ki limit paar!
And then his dad teasing him! Lol its so weird imagining them together, i wish cv's had included such scenes! Anyways coming back to the pehla nasha land

Their kiss was indeed the most amazing thing ever happened and the expression on swayam's face were to die for ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
I wish aisi baatein swayam ke dad bolte rahe 😆
Sharon ko chicken pox kya ho gaya bawaal mach gaya sher mei poore, but poor soul, i dunno i am talking abt vrushika or sharon 😳
I can imagine her voice and she sounded weak but the sweetness and chirpiness in her voice was still alive!
Poor swayam, cannot meet her but the care was evident in both of their actions.
You have mentioned everything very beautifully and i am happy that you wrote something on them, vrushaan on the banner feels nice! 😃
Waiting for the next Hukum 🤗
I am glad that you're back ❤️

Sakshi😊

Aapne mujhe Thank you bola??? Par kyun??? Oh aapko tang karne ke liye May be...

Di... You sure are a rockstar.. OMG such an awesome update.. No words to say.. Did u really made Swayam got caught red handed by papa shekhawat??? *shock*.. Aww papa teasing beta shekhawat was so sweet.. And Swayam face liting up hearing his approval for her was sooo cute...

He remembers when papa aaproved in front of Sharon and she kissed him in exitement and he touches his cheek.. How cute??

And Sharon crying not coz of pox but coz she couldn't stay away from him was sooo sweet.. Dono taraf aag lagi hai and the way Swayam panicked and started getting restless was the return of our actual lover boy who says "Smell the coffee Sharon this is your lover boy Swayam". And Swayam getting lost and adoring her unconditional love for him.. Aww.. And the same question goes with me how would they stay away from each other for 10 god damn 10 days...

Loved it di.. Jaldi jaldi next part do meri d3...

Love you

Yours
Pagal...

P.S- didu woh starting waala part dream tha ??? *shock* *wink*

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Vishaka

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Posted: 12 years ago

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deepu di is back with bang 😉

wonder part di 👏 with amazing start...kash woh dream sequence nahi hota... And swayam caught red handdend 😆😆😆

love the sweet convo bet son and father where most amazing part were dad pulling his son leg...and phone convo of our two love bird...which actually were sad cause they wont able to see each other another ten days...
All nicely presented lov it...frm beautiful dream to last part...wonderful job 👏

looking forward for next part vrushi ane se pehele update milna chahiye...😳

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Swathi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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another fantastic piece of work from you...

thank you for writing the SS on the present track...

Swayam dreaming of Sharon

Loved the father - son convo...

thank you deepu for covering this aspect which i always dreamt of but failed to see on screen...

loved the way how his father teasing swayam

"Aaj kal ke bacche..pata nehi kya hoga inka" ...So true 😆 😆

and wow both are having the pehla nasha as their ringtone 😳

Sharon is having chicken pox and asked him not to meet him for 10 days 😭

Agar Sharon the DIVA hai toh swayam the MAJNU boy hai...sharon se door rehna usse hota hi nahi...

kuch na kuch plan jaroor karega usse milne ke liye ya baat karne k liye...

lets see what happens next 😉

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-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Goood morning di🤗

subah subah aapka ss padah it really made my day🤗

such a beautifull start...

it was awesome d way u started it swayam ka dream n d way his dream broke i also broke out laughing... d father son convo was funny yet cute n sweet👏

majnu swayam se yahi expect kiya ja sakta hai..

reality dreams thoughts sab mein only n only sharon😉😆

very well written di👏

loved it😊

d pain d sorrow of nt meeting each other was perfectly penned down..

Perfect start to d ss...

lookin forward for d further chapters..

aapke writings always makes me smile like an idiot.. i luv them👏

waiting for next chapter.. write soon..

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_bellaSwan_

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow another os from you I love to read your writing on swaron . Concept is good it's exciting please update it as soon as possible

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pooja123456

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Posted: 12 years ago

NYc concept do continue.. Update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

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yayyy another one of your write up
deep dii🤗
I am jumping from joy literally😃 pls pls pls write this soon dying to read some of your amazing works...
love the concept cant wait
the background pehla nasha tune just adds to the magic of swaron😉
update soon and pls pm me😳
btw mujhe pm nhi milaa😭😭😭😭

Edited by cenation123 - 12 years ago