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Destinyhope0305

@Destinyhope0305

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

aah the Holi scene 😳
my heart skips everytime 😳
wonderfully written😉

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

I really liked this story!

That Holi dialogue was utilized so well, I think you did a far, far better job with it than the CVs ever did.

I also loved the entire scenario with Khushi suffering from AF, and Payal's role was great too.

The characterization was perfect, and Khushi's disbelief was etched very well. Arnav's way of showing her what she meant to him was beautifully done.

It was a touching, romantic story, and I'm so glad I stumbled onto it!

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago

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PixieFairy

@PixieFairy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

I Absolutetly Loved it .. you all writers do a job which even CV's of the show failed to stand on ... it was absolutetly blissful & hey i am still in love with 'Opposites do Not Attract' and you bring yet another masterpiece sighs <3 as Juhi said perfect utilization of Holi Dialogue that was the cherry on the cake...❤️

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nazca

@nazca

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

The way you used Holi dialogue was really nice, it fits the situation perfectly.

I liked this OS, Payal and Akash what a nice understanding siblings.

At first when I read about the hospital situation my mind was thinking all sort of things, but the ending calmness dipicted the whole scenerio in a disticnt way.

Nice OS.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

what a wonderful heartwarming story...

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Congratulations!

This story richly deserves to be 'OS of the week'!🥳

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Res

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Chai, I am so sorry about this but I thought I had commented. looks like I was wrong. :(

Anyway, here is what I wanted to say

This has to be the single, most beautifully simple story around the Hamari Dhadkanein Ek Ho Jaati Hain dialogue. I was mesmerized by the beauty of unrequited love, of love that strikes unexpectedly and the fact that the heart that is the keeper of it all, is at fault here for being damaged in a way that makes it complete.

This OS deserves to be the best OS of the week and every other accolade that comes its way.

Beautiful, beautiful story.

Edited by meera30 - 12 years ago

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nazca

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Posted: 12 years ago

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