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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

unres!

its wonderful chaitalee! beyond words..,,,how beautifully u use all the words here...! khushi and arnav ! the names which are always meant to be taken together! its all in our minds and here in this virtual world ya? but only few ppl like you and ur writings gimme the feel of that love story again! that story which ended months but stiil we are not out of it!

humari dhadkanein ek ho jati hai!

sanaya and barun did tremendous job when they act that scene and u did equally a tremendous job by giving me this version!

well,, hum sab jaante hain! words hold no inportance when it comes to ArHi...heartbeats are enuff!!!

this is for u..👏

Edited by avantisharma - 12 years ago

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Dee!

Laanat hai mujhe apni stalking skills par 😡

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you always amaze me with your writing skills. You know that? Agar nahi toh ab jaan lo!

By use of apt words, the emotions have been described so beautifully that I can't help but awe!

Aap aisa kaise kr sakti hain? You left me spell bounded woman!

Your take on this is so different!

At first I thought that, arnav might have done something & so he is not willing to go n front of her. But as I read the update, I realized that bina jaane conclusions draw ni krne chahiye!

Their hearts beating in sync! Can it be more beautiful? <3

'Humari Dil ki dhadkane ek ho jaati hai' The loveliest confession in drunken state & so was your update.

Difference being the drunken state thing, only <3

ILYD! <3 <3

P.S. Mujhe aur OSes padhne hain aapki taraf se, bas!

Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

That was so very beautifully written :) Amazing work :)

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

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I must applaud you for using the holi dialogue and essence better than the show's CVs! Because I had found those dialogues by ASR very cheesy but here they are so apt!

The famous Dhaks Dhaks of KKG has finally got a name to it in the form of a heart problem. I know she already looks so frail and on top of it had to go through a heart surgery! Scary! *shudders*

But another cause for her HB increase is the presence of a certain Mr. Raizada around her.

Did she sent him away the first time because she was embarrassed of the way her HB increased and was showcased through the monitor or she didnt want to let him see her in the state or she just didnt want to see him because it is too painful?

Payal's blatant honesty and pushing her sister just enough proves the ability of sisters always putting things right :-)

So Mr. Raizada showed the same symptoms like Ms. KKG and for the same reason ;-)

This Os had a sense of underlying calm even though it was set against a hospital :-)

Good one *thumbs up*

Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

One of my least favourite post marriage scenes inspired you enough to write this sweet OS.

I liked the entire idea of monitoring the heart beats while hearts talked and reacted. A physical representation of emotions. That was cool *claps*

Two hearts beating as one but unacknowledged. One because she isn't sure. The other because he isn't aware.

I liked how his awareness brought her assurance.

Beautiful story 😊

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome os. Beautiful concept way of storytelling wonderful. 👏

Words are not enough I know my limitations

But I want to tell you one thing this is the best os ever.

I love it. Lee you are the best.

Khushi's explanations to Payal about Arnav heart belong that touched my heart.

And his gesture to his chest wow...

Thanks for pm.

Sorry for being late.

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

lovely quote at the end...the OS is short version of a beautiful scene which is etched to the IPKKND viewers..Arnav's confession and admission to their love..sigh! I want to watch that scene again..you made me nostalgic!