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dershika

@dershika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

This is a beautiful work dear

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Awww a very cute OS... Silence says it all :)

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Chandana

@chandana.s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Brilliant... Very beautifuily written..simply loved it

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

its awesome...so beautifully written...loved it so much...

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gifttag

@gifttag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Amazing OS...written beautifully.
So that is what is wrong with her heart.
I love the way you have used the lines from Holi episode, one of my favourite too.
Thanks for the PM.

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Absolutely beautiful...

Loved the ending and the usage of "dil ki dharkar ek ho jati hain.. it was our hearts calling out to one another...beating as one."..simply simply delicious...

Also very innovative way of saying Khushi's dhak dhak as an ailment...but Arnav also feeling the same owing their heart feeling a similar emotions...

Edited by Aparamegha - 12 years ago