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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

lovely os

thanks for the pm

Twinkle

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Mithila

@Mithikush

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

What a beautiful OS yaar

Loved it

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Lovely !

Thnx for the pm.

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sweetly_sour

@sweetly_sour

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Beautiful and touching OS 😳

Loved it !

I don't know how grave her illness was , hope it got cured after the surgery and she becomes all hale and HEARTY again😉...can't see them suffering 😕

Arnav could see her heart rate, and Khushi could feel his, now isn't it beautiful.They have two different hearts that beat as one

Chaitu, as always this piece was also impeccably written, with all that hospital like ambiance that you create, monitors beeping, pesky nurses, and yeah your deep research into her ailment. ( for me its deep 😆 ,,,)

Loved those last four lines, gave the OS a fitting sweet touch.👏

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hot.cakes

@hot.cakes

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Sweet

I thought the storyline was a little borrowed, but changed my mind later on

You do bring medical stuff everywhere 😆

I loved the stanza at the end

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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Aww that was great
So many word in that little gesture

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starsarun

@starsarun

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Wow beautiful OS yaar. Well Dhak-dhak was the sole of our show so there too. :)

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Sidda

@Sidda8

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Thanks for such a sweet OS about Arshi's heartbeats.

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sshh.. ;)

@momo121

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

wow,

once again beautifully written :D

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

awe heart touchingly beautiful ...loved it...keep it up

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