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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
part 23
nice part...
poor Aamna and Raj...
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Recap: Rajeev dream of some romantic scenes with Aamna, He goes to her but she again behave rude and reject him

Kissmat Part 24:
Rishi and Aman were in the college
Rishi: Aman don't u think ke we should do something to make big b happy
Aman: yea bro...but what...I mean...have u some ideas
Rishi: ya...we should make him fall in love with Archie
Aman: Archie???...why her
Rishi: because she loves him so much and u know she will take more care of him than Aamna
Aman: ok ur rite but i'm not goin against Aamna bhabhi...First she is very sweet with us...Secondly mumma defend her and I don't wanna hurt mumma
Rishi: mumma ki baat to thik hai but Aamna...she don't act well neither with me neither with big b...then if she do her drama and crocodiles tears she with you all and can make u in her side I will not let her does
Aman: ok mere dada, i'm with u
Rishi: Then we plan a home date in big b 'room this night with Archie the rest I tell Archie what she should does
Aman: ok but why home date?
Rishi: to make Aamna jealous
Aman: what...ur such a big evil
Rishi: are nahi yaar i'm too good
Aman: chal...
Sanjana overhear this conversation and become upset
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In the hall all except the young people who were busy in office/college
Veena: Vassu, aaj Archie ka birthday hai tumne uske liye surprise party rakni hai ya aisse hi
C.G: Nahi wo bache kehrahe the that they have plan something pehle cake kate ghein with all then they made a surprise for Archie
Vassu: haan they tell me that it will the best day of her life
Lallit: no the best day of her life will be her wedding day
Veena: haan to aap loog uski shaadi kyun nahi karte
Vassu: shaadi bhi ho jaye ghi don't worry
Lallit: haan wo C.G main tumhari proposal accept karta houn
C.G: wwwooww u mean Archie agree for the wedding
Lallit: haan
Veena: kiski wedding aur Chetan ka proposal main kuch samji nahi
Vassu: are Veena, Rajeev aur Archie ki wedding
Veena was just shocked
C.G: hum party me announcement karein ghein
Vassu: yeh lo moon meeta karo
Vassu force Veena to tke the sweet she eat a bit but tears come in her eyes and she goes from there
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Akshat, Charu and Kanan were in the sinah house chating
Charu: Kanan make some coffe for me i'm very tired
Akshat: why? naukar hai kya tumhari
Charu: shut up Akshat
Akshat: aur waisse bhi lunch time pe coffe nahi pite aur tum abhi se thak gaye abhi to tumari duity sham thak hai
Charu: ya I know but This morning I does three deliveries
Akshat: haha...u...wrong u only threat the three womans who deliver
Charu: ya...ya its the same
Akshat: oh bechari charu if u deliver three time in one day I think we can open a school
Charu: oh shut up Akshat...the fact of the matter is that i'm very tired
Kanan: ok don't fight here is ur coffe Charu
Charu: thank god u come warna is Akshat ko to main mar dalti
Kanan: by the way he is not wrong u only help the womans to deliver
Charu: yes but u know Kanan somewhere it's magic when you hear a baby crying for the first time, when you take the baby in your arms, it's just a very small and cute baby and when I have time I goes see my patients after their delivery to I can feel how happy they are with their child...
Kanan: yes I know, it must be very emotional, Charu did you somethimes dream of being a mother
Akshat who were drinking coffe began to cough
Akshat: heellloo gaals i'm there abhi shaadi nahi hui ke bachoun ki pargai
Charu: exuse me kisne kaha ke I will marry YOU
Akshat: CHARU!!!
Kanan laugh
Charu: hasle tu bhi main to chali
Kanan: chalo Akshat hum bhi office chaltein hain
Akshat: let's go waise bhi muje is ghar me rehne ka koi shok nahi hai
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In the R&G mansion Rishi and Aman have decored the hall and Archie's room
First Aamna come home
Veena: Aamna betta go and get ready
Aamna: but what happen mumma kisi ki anniversary hai kya
Veena: nahi Archie ka birthday hai
Aamna: ok i'm coming in just 10 mins
Veena: ok, how are you Amana in theses day?
Aamna: I'm fine mumma
Veena: if u need something u tell me ok, kuch bhi, tumhari tabiyat to thik hai
Aamna: yaa...don't worry mumma, par aap kuch ajeeb si lag rahi hain is everything ok
Veena burst into tears and hug Aamna
Aamna: mumma kya hua...mumma aap ro kun rahi hain
Veena loses her balance and they both fall on the stairs
Aamna fall first and Veena fall on her
Veena get up immediately
Veena: Aamna betta are you ok i'm sorry
Aamna: nahi...it's ok...I think i'm ok
while she was getting up she feels some pain in her tummy
Aamna: aaahh!!!! mummaaa...mere bacheee!!!!!
She hold her stomach
Veena carry her in her arms
Seeing this Sanjana come there
Sanjana: bhabhi!!!! are you ok
Veena: Aamna!!! kya hua??
Soon it stop hurting
and she sits slowly on the stairs
Aamna: ...i'm ok...I just feel pain...it's ok...sorry mumma I think I cannot come in the party I will take some rest ok...You wish Archie form my part too hhmm
Veena: haan betta jao take rest waisse in wich month you are
Aamna: four months ho gaye
Veena: ok goes take care
Aamna: haan don't worry
Sanjana: even I don't want in this nparty
Veena look at her
Sanjana goes in her room crying
She goes in her room
Veena(in her mind): Aamna...tumhara is party me naa hona hi thik hai
Later Archie and Rajeev comes
All the guests were also there
They First wish Archie but before she cuts the cake
Rishi: Attention please...Today i'm glad to imform you all ke mere Bhai Rajeev aur Archie ki shaadi hone wali hai
Rajeev was just shocked
All were being normal jaisse ke un saab ne yeh faissla kar liya ho Rajeev ko bataye binna
He look at Veena who have tears in her eyes
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Later when the party finishes
All were sitting in the hall
Rajeev: Aap saab se kisne kaha ke Main Archie se shaadi karoun gha
Veena: betta is me mera koi kasur nahi hai yeh saab inka plan tha
C.G: Rajeev betta maine sirf tumhara bhala socha, main is tara tumhe is haal mein har raat rote nahi dekh sakta main janti houn ke tum Aamna se abh bhi pyaar karte ho lekin betta...she doesn't love you, aur tum logon ka divorce bhi ho gaya hai, she is settle with Akshat in her life they meet everyday I know, wo to is ghar se bhi jana chahti thi baas Sanjana ne use yaha raine par majboor kiya, aur Archie is a nice girl she love you very much
Lallit: mujhe bohot rhushi hogi agar mujhe tumjaisa dhamad mile
C.G: aur hum sare ghuests ko batta chuke hain agar tumne is shadi se inkaar kar diya to na sirf mera dil toote gha par humare parivaar ki behesati bhi hogi
Vassu: aage faisla tumare hatoun me hai Main tumhe kal tak time deti houn
C.G: Haan
They three goes to sleep
Veena look at Rajeev
Rajeev: apko pata tha mumma
Veena: haan betta par...mujhe yeh tumse kehne ki himmat nahi thi
Rajeev: Aamna kahan hai
Veena: wo..zara sa ghir gaye use dard hua to maine use kaha ke take rest and don't come in the party
Rajeev: what? Is she alright
Veena: haan u don't worry
Rajeev: kya use pata hai
Veena: nahi
Rajeev: ok
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Later he was in his room
Rajeev(in his mind): ab main kya karoun, main tumhe dhoka nahi de sakta Aamna
Black soul: usne bhi to tumhe dhoka diya hai Rajeev
White soul: koi tumhare khane me zeher dale gha to kya tum bhi uske khanne me zeher dalo ghe
Black: Dekha nahi aaj kal kitna bura karti hai tumhare saath
White: socho to sahi uski koi achanak wajah hogi...wo bhi to tumse pyaar karti hai
Black: nahi karti wo tumse pyaar shuru se thoka diya hai usne tumhe and she told you that by herself
White: nahi Rajeevplz yeh ghalati maat karna
Black: She is settle in her life aab tum bhi ho jao Rajeev plz...apne papa ki behesati maat karo ek aissi larki ke liye jisne tume sirf dukh aur dard diya
White: lekin kya usne kabhi tumse kaha hai ke I hate you...she just said I don't love you
Black: it's the same shaadi ke liye haan kardo
White: naa kardo
Black: haan kardo
White: naa kardo
Black: haan kardo
White: naa kardo
Black: haan kardo
White: naa kardo
Black: haan kardooo
Rajeev: ENNNUUUFFF!!!!!!!!!!!
he realise he is alone in the room
Rajeev keep crying
Rajeev(in his mind): main kyun ro raha houn papa sahi kete hai she is settle I will too
The next morning
On the breakfast table
Rajeev: papa
C.G: Haan
Rajeev: main Archie se shaadi karne ke liye tayiar houn
Dhamake on Veena, Mehek, Varun,Sanjana and the most Aamna
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This is the next part I hope u like it do comments
Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
part 24
awesome dear...
lovely...
poor Aamna...
hope someone gets to know the truth...
OMG Raj hes a big fool...
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Recap: All celebrates Archie'birthday, C.G and Lallit decide to get Rajeev and Archie married

Kissmat part 25:
Rajeev: main Archie se shaadi karne ke liye tayaar houn
Archie: sach Rajeev ...u donno how much i am happy
C.G: thanks betta Rajeev
Veena: lekin betta tum to...
Rajeev: nahi mumma jis Rajeev ko aap janti thi wo nahi raha...aap ke saamne aaj ek naya Rajeev hai aab main sirf apne liye sochoun gha, jo mujhe chot pochaye main bhi usse chot pochaungha
Aamna: Rajeev...
Rajeev: sorry main duchmnanon se baat nahi karta nhi to humare bich jagra
Ho jaye gha
Aamna: par main to tumhari dost...
Rajeev: thi tum meri dost thi, aur kal tak to tumhe mujse baat karne se bhi aitraz tha, aur aaj tum yeh keh rahi ho ke tum meri dost ho...I think you have a problem in your mind, ke tum yeh bhi nahi janti ke what do you want. So papa main office ja raha houn ok
He leave
C.G, Lallit, Archie and Vassu look at her mischievously
Aamna feel that she cant stay here more
Aamna: exuse me...mumma main bhi office chalti houn
Veena: Aamna betta nashta to kar ke jao
But she has leave in tears
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Aamna was in her cabin but not working, crying
Aamna(to herself): I am very stupid...mujhe pata hona tha...ke..ke uss Swayam ne mujhe kyun kaha ke Rajeev se dur raho he want to make Rajeev against me...main kyun ro rahi houn jab maine Rajeev ki zindaghi aur apni rhushi me se Rajeev ko chuna tha tab hi mujhe pata tha ke yeh saab...aab wo Archie se shaadii...(she break down)
When there is a knock on the door
She get up and sits on the chait as she was crying on the floor, she wipes her tears and said
Aamna: com in(weakly)
Varun come in her cabin
Aamna: tum ao naa kuch kaam tha
Varun: nahi bhabhi bas aap...wo...Sanjana ne mujse kaha tha ke aap Rajeev bayia aur Archie ki shaadi ki news se toot jayinghi to usne mujse kaha ke main apko support karne jaoun office mein as she know ke aap akele roti rahi ghi jo is halat me apke liye thik nahi
Aamna: oh...nahi Varun aissi koi baat nahi hai main to baas...wo kaam kar rahi thi
Varun sees that her eyes are red and, he also sees she is very weak and tired
Varun: apko jhoot bolna nahi ata bhabhi
Aamna: ok you won I was crying
Varun: Rajeev bhayia acha nahi kar rahe
Aamna: I don't want to hear anything bad about him
Varun: i'm not blaming him but...(he think for a min) par bhabhi aap to Akshat ke saat hain naa to phir is me bura kya ke bhayia meri behen se shaadi karlein
Aamna: hhmm
Just then Rajeev come in her cabin
Rajeev: Varun I need you in my cabin wo aaj sham ki meeting ke liye kuch discuss karna hai
Varun: haan i'm coming bhaiya...(to Aamna) take care
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Aamna compe soon around 3pm from office as she was not feeling well
She was in her room crying
when Aman and Sanjana come to meet her
Sanjana: hi bhabi how are you
Aamna: fine...tum kaissi ho aur tumhare exams kaisse chal rahe hain(trying to avoid the shaadi topic)
Aman: exams? what exams hum to sirf college me abhi enjoy kar rahe hain koi exams nahi hai bhabhi
Aamna: oh...err...wo...main...
Sanjana(holds her hands and start to have tears in her eyes): bhabhi...i'm sorry...big b ki taraf se main apse maafi mangti houn bhabhi(cry)
Aamna(start crying too): mujhe aur sharminda maat karo Sanju...I...I love you so much like I love Kanan Charu or Mehek...tum meri behen jaissi ho plz
Aman(crying): lekin bhabhi hum bhi to aapse bohot pyaar kartein hain...Sanju meri behen thori aur meri dost zayda hai..par aap...aap ne meri dii ka farz nibhaya...aur aaj mere hi big b ki wajah se aap...
Aamna wipes their tears
Aamna: iss saab se koi farq nahi parta we are brother and sisters...aur hum hamesha rahein ghe ok
Aman and Sanjana: ok
Then they goes and Veena comes in her room:
Veena: how are you feeling betta
Aamna: destroyed
Veena: hhmm I know, par betta aapna khayal rakha karo ok
Aamna: haan rakhti to houn
Veena: kya aapna chehra dekha hai tumne...uff ankhein ro ro ke sujji pari hain tumhari
Aamna: nahi mumma main ro hi kab rahi thi
Veena: always, you are always crying Aamna
Aamna: mumma(sobs)
And then she hugs Veena tightly
Veena was rubbing her fingers on her back to make her calm
Veena: naa meri bachi rote nahi hai...sab think ho jaygha you don't worry betta
Aamna(still hugging her): mumma(sobs) thank u for(sobs) for being here always...always with me
Veena: ssshh don't cry
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Aamna was calm now in here room, Rajeev was back to office all were in the hall it was around 9pm
Rishi come inj her room
Rishi: hello Aamna ji
Aamna: what do you want now
Rishi: Aamna why do you always fight calm down...main to tumse baas ek message dene aya tha yeh lo Swayam ne diya hai
Aamna take the paper:
Now Rajeev and Archie are going to be husband-wife, now Archie ko Mrs Rajeev Garewal bulaiya jaye gha tumhe nahi...Now I want that you leave this house it's an order not a proposition I want ke tum Rajeev aur Archie ki rhushal zindaghi se bohot dur chali jao. And if you stay here to tum janti ho ke kya hoga...Is bar main Rajeev ko nahi tumhare bachoun ko marne ki koshish karoun jo bohot aasan kaam hai...I can empoison your water, I can push you from the stairs, many things...
your dear friend
Swayam,

Aamna has tears in her eyes
Rishi: Kya likha hai isme
Aamna: It's not your problem
Rishi: Swayam ne mujse yeh bhi kaha ke agar after reading this you are not packing your bag to mein tumhe hall me le jaoun sabke samne...strange
Aamna: no Swayam...
Rishi: I'm Rishi not Swayam but I will does his work
He holds Aamna'hand tight, itna tight ke it's starthurting her
Aamna: leave my hand!!!!!!!
But Rishi was dragging her
She was screaming and shouting at him but he was not listening
He comes with her down stairs
All were shocked
C.G(natak once again): what are you doing Rishi
Swayam: Uncle hum ne decides kiya hai ke this woman cant stay in our house
Rajeev: why? Swayam what happen
Swayam: Rajeev plz
Lallit: i'm agree I don't want her in my house
Veena: aap meri betti ko is ghar se nahi nikal sakte she is my daughter
C.G: It's true but she has not pay her rent of this month
Aamna: but papa...abhi tak Rajeev ne mujhe salary nahi bheji jab wo bhej de gha I'll pay it
Vassu: I don't care you get out from there
Aamna knew ke what is happening ke wo saab usko iss ghar ke nikal ke hi raheighe dhake mar ke bhi it's better that she takes her luggage and goes from there
Aamna: ok I'm goin just give me Half an hour to pack my bag
Veena was shocked
Aamna was packing her bag she take the wedding pic of her and Rajeev and hugs the frame near her heart
then she put it in her bag.
Later Aamna come down with her bag only Veena,Aman, Sanjana, Varun and Mehek were there
Veena: betta maat jaotum meri betti ho don't goes plz
Aamna: apna khayal rakhna mumma...Mehek, Sanjana Varun and
Aman...you take care of my mom don't let her work Mehek
They all hug and then Aamna goes
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Aamna was leaving with a heavy heart
Aamna(in her mind): aaj main tumse aur dur ho gaye...but mujhe is sab ke liye tayar hone chayie tha wo Swayam to kuch bhi kar sakta aab mujhe sirf apna khayal rakhna hai...apne bachoun ke liye aab wohi to meri zindaghi hai
She return an last time wen she sees Rajeev standing in the balcony and crying
She knew in her heart that Rajeev still love her
But she must goes so she goes
Rajeev(to himself): kyun...kyun kar rahi ho tum aissa mere paas wapas kyun nahi aati tum why...Maine samjha tha ke you will react sout at me and tell me that you love me...if I agree to marry with Archie but no aaj mujhe yakeen ho gaya ke you cheated me...from now Rajeev you not love Mrs Akshat Shergill
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Akshat and Charu were again chatting whilke fighting pyaar se and Kanan was again lock between them when there was a knock on the door
Charu: main dekhti houn
She open the door and sees Aamna with her bag
Charu: Dii aap is waqt...
She notices her bag
Charu: Dii yeh bag
Akshat: Aamna batao what happen
Aamna tell them the whole story
Charu: oh...is Swayam ki to main maut kar doun ghi damn it
Akshat: andar ao bahar kyun khari ho yeh tumhara hi to ghar hai
Kanan: main kuch samjhi nahi...Swayam ne aapko damki di ke wo Rajeev ke bacoun ka khoun karegha?
Dii I don't understand
Aamna tell Kanan saab kuch shuru se leke
Kanan: aur aapne aab thak mujse yeh baat chupaye
Aamna: i'm sorry
Kanan: no i'm sorry aaj tak main yeh samaj thi rahi ke aap ne bhayia ko dhoka diya i'm sorry dii
Aamna hug her
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Veena was crying in her room
Sanjana: mumma maat royie
Veena: unhone meri betti ko yahain se nikal diya aur main tamasha dekh thi rahi
Sanjana: iss me aap ka koi kusur nahi hai mumma
Veena was looking at a pic of her and Aamna
Veena: meri Aamna bohot achi thi kabhi mujhe koi kaam nahi karne deti thi, office bhi jati thi, and she's pregnant after all
Sanjana: haan bhabhi bohot achi thi agar aap chahthi hai to I promise you main kal aapko unke ghar lejaounghi unse milne
Veena: sach
Sanjana: haan I promise
Veena: tum bhi meri achi wali bachi ho
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Morning Aamna comes for check up in hospital
Charu: Dii mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai
Aamna: kya...batao sab thik to hai
Charu: kuch bhi thik nahi hai
Aamna: what do u mean Charu batao mera dam ghut raha hai
Charu: Dii main sirf itna kehna chahti houn ke aap aapna bilkul bhi khayal nahi rakhti...babies are fine but you are very weak aap ka blood preasure zayda hai...this is very bad abhi sirf aap ka 4th month churu hua hai aur aap ki yeh halat, Dii you must take care of you nahi to delivery e problem hogi , delivery kya you are just at you 4th month mlujhe dar hai ke kahin aapki miscarriage na ho jaye,
Aamna: nahi aissa maat kaho plz Charu, delivery me bhi mere bachon ko bachana ok
Charu: Dii yeh aap kaissi batein ka rahi hain
Aamna: tum kaissi batein kar rahi ho you said meri miscarriage hone ke risks hai
Charu: calm down dii main sirf yeh kehna chahti houn ke take care and you has twins dii aapko to double aaram karna chayie, ek taraf se acha hi hua ke aap wo ghar chor aye now you stay home no goes to office no work and no kitchen and all
Aamna: thank u Charu
Charu: welcome yeh li jiyen kuch vitamins hai
Aamna: ok
Charu: inhe aaj se ek baar suubo ko aur ek bar sham ko zarur lena ok
Aamna: ya...aab main chalun
Charu: haan bye see you this night
Aamna: see you
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When Aamna comes homes Veena was there crying
Aamna: mumma aap
Veena: Aamna betta(she rushes to her and hugs her) kahain gaye thi
Aamna: check up ke liye hospital
Veena: oh...sab thik hai naa
Aamna: haan aap fikar maat kariye pehli bar mere ghar me aye hain bettiye main aapke liye chailatti houn
Veena: nahi betta tum kahain ao betto aram karo, humesha yahain wahain bagti rehti ho
Aamna: i'm fine
Veena: main aab chalti houn bas tumse milna tha Chetan ko pata chal gaya to bura hoga
Aamna: ok bye
Veena: take care
Aamna: aap bhi
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I have try to post a long part this time
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Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
part 25
nice...
poor Aamna...
so they have sent her out of the house also...
and seriously Rishi cant read the letter and see whats happening in their house?
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Recap: Swayam oust Aamna out of the R&G house, Rajeev decides to not think about others from now
and I think that's all


Kissmat part 26:
Sinnah house 8pm
Charu and Kanan were having breakfast
When Aamna get up and comes
Aamna: tum logon ne mujhe jagaya kyun nahi...main aapko nashta bana deti
Charu: are Dii plz aap jake so jayie...it's not good for you
Kanan: aur waisse bhi aapki behenen aab baari ho gaye hai Dii...hum aap aur Mehek ke beghair guzara kar leti hain
Aamna: lekin aab main a gaye houn naa...aur waisse bhi main yahan akele sara din kya karoun ghi
Charu: don't worry hum lunch time pe ayghin
Kanan: haan aur Akshat bhi
Aamna: Akshat yahan lunch karta hai
Charu: haan iss me bhi meri hi badkissmati
Aamna(sits): kyun aapne pyaar se milne me kaunsi badkissmati
Charu: he is so irritating Dii
Kanan: don worry in dono ke ghar me hote hue aap bore ho hi nahi sakti Dii
the two sister laugh
DING DONG(door bell ring)
Aamna: main dekhti houn
Kanan: nahi Dii aap bhetiye main dekhti houn
Aamna smile at her
Kanan open the door and it was Akshat
Charu: oh god! subah savereh iss ki baat kari naa lo a gaya
Akshat: tumhe kya problem hai main to apni pyaari si Kanan behena ko lenne aya houn office jana hai hume, tumhari tara sara din hospital ki cafeteria me nahi ghumte
Charu: oh shut up!!!! Dii I'm going I don wanna spoil my mood with this joker
Charukisses on Aamna'cheeks then Kanan and give a flying kiss to Akshat then leave
Akshat stand there looking dreamly at the door
Kanan: erhm euhem...chalein Akshat
Akshat: haan...oh ya chalein bye Aamna
Kanan: see u Dii take care breakfast sahi se karna
Aamna: pehle to main tumhara khayal rakhti thi aur aab tum...ajeeb lagta hai...
Kanan: ajeeb kyun I'm ur sister
Aamna: ok jao late ho jao ghi to Rajeev ghussa hoga
Kanan: oh...haan wo (trying to avoid the topic) apni vitamins tablets le lena aur aaraam karna hum teeno to bahar se khanna leke yahan ajatein hai ok don't cook for us...actually hum aap ke liye bhi khanna le aighein ok
Aamna: ok ok...I know bilkul bhi sofe se nahi hiloun ghi happy
Kanan: very...ok bye
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R&G house same time
All were having breakfast
It was the silence
We can only hear the noise of the spoons banging the plates
Aman: eeemm...big b
Rajeev: haan
Sanjana: wo big kya hum aaj...
Aman: kya aaj sham Sanju aur main bhabhi se milne jaaa sakte hain
Rajeev: kaun bhabhi
Sanjana: wo...Big B...Aamna bhabhi
Rajeev: Don't call her bhabhi wo tum logon ki bhabhi tab thi jab she was my wife
Aman: To kya hum Aamna behena se aaj sham milne jaa sakte hai
All look at Aman
Chetan: Aman how dare u call her behena..tumhara dimaagh kharab ho gaya hai kya
Swayam: haan usne tumhare bhai ko dhoka diya hai...Archie tumhare bhai ko nahi zindagi degi call HER behena not the other bloody hell..
Veena: BAKWAAS BAND KARO...meri beti ko ghali di tumne
Swayam: wo aapki beti kab hui aapki beti to Archie hai
Veena: kya Archie ne meri beti hone ke farz nibhaye...nahi jab main roti thi tab Aamna mujhe pyaar se sahara deti mera har kaam karti thi mere maathe par chikan nahi ane deti thi...Archie ne to mujse kabhi Hi nahi bola baaki sab to aur baat hai
Sanjana: haan wohi Aamna Bhabhi ne humari behen hone ka farz nibhaya...Archie to humara Mazak urati rehti hai hasti hai hum dono paar
Veena: aap logon ne ek bettti ko uski maan se dur kiya pachtaynghein aap saab...
After saying that she gets up from there
While backround me Veena wali revenge music bajti hai (wo wali when Kashish send Sujal in jail on SG case)
camera zooms on Rajeev'confused and shocked face
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Lunch time
Sinnah house
Aamna were thinking somthink when the door bell ring
She open the door and Akshat come running in the house and close the door behind him
He was breathing fast like he has run
Aamna look at him confused
Aamna: yeh kar rahe ho
Akshat: bach gaya...warna wo...wo Charu to mar hi dalti( his voice break because of his fast breathing)
Aamna smile
Aamna: phir kya hua
Akshat: wo mere piche hi par gaye main sirio se bagta hua a gaya but they both are lock in the lift
😆He laugh
Aamna smile she stat walking but her foot slip she was about to fall but Akshat hold her
Meanwhile Rajeev who was passing by...has decide to meet her but as Akshat don't close the door properly he see this scene(just where Akshat hold her)
Akshat: Aamna, sambhaal ke yeh kya kar rahi thi
Aamna: wo baas...It's ok I'm fine
A tear drop from Rajeev'eye but he wipes it and goes
Kanan and Charu see him going in anger
Kanan: Dii yeh Rajeev bhaiya aapse milne aye the
Aamna: Rajeev...nahi to...kash wo mujse milne aata ...tum yeh sawaal kyun puch rahi ho
Kanan: wo humne abhi une jate hue dekha bohot ghusse me the
Aamna remember what happen and realise that maybe after seeing her and Akshat like this usko ghalat fehmi hogi
Aamna: oh no...yeh kya ho gaya
Charu: kya hua
Akshat: tumhari Dii abhi girne wali thi maine nahi bachaya hota to teeno ka kam ho jata
Charu: what?? Dii what was this for aapna khayal kyun nahi rakhti...kabi kabhi to mujhe bhi lagne lagta hai ke aap Rajeev jiju se pyaar nahiu karti...to unke bachoun se kya karein ghi
Aamna: CHARU!!!!
Kanan: charu!!! ufff(holding Aamna by her shoulders) Dii u just calm down Charu to aisse hi
Tears were rolling down Aamna and Charu'eyes
Charu comes near her, make her sits and sits on the ground
Charu(crying): I'm really sorry dii...ghusse me pata nahi kya bakwaas keh di maine I know u love Love jiju so much...and ur babies too...I'm such a big witch aapse wo keh diya ke aap us insaan se pyaar nahi karti jinke lmiye aap ne aapni zindagi barbaat kardi...maine socha tha aap yahan a gaye main aapko koi takleef nahi hone dounghi lekin maine khud hi aap ko hurt kia Dii I'm sorry main us Swayam se kaam nahi
Aamna: it's ok...koi baat nahi but Charu try ke yeh dobara maat ho please...tum to meri behen ho...kem se kam tum to mujse khilaf maat ho
Charu: main aapse khilaaf kabhi nahi ho sakti dii kabhi nahi...I love u Dii
Aamna: me too...aab chalo khanna khaletein hai hhmm
Kanan: haan chaliye Dii
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Night Raj come home drunk
All were in the living room
Rajeev: hellooo...everyone...
Veena: Rajeev betta yeh saab kya hai
She goes and holds him
Rajeev: zon't...zon't touch me
Veena: betta main tumhari main houn
Rajeev: no aap uzz uzz larki..uzz bloody dhoke baaz ki main hai
Chetan: who?
Rajeev: uzne...uzne uz Akzat ke saat uz ke zaat aaj...maine khud apni ankhon se dekha...ZHE CHEATED ME!!!!!! ze is bad...Me hate her mumma
Veena holds him
But he again push her
Rajeev: AAAMMMUU...I NEED U...PLZ COME BACK...please come back
I zeed u
Saying this He fall on the ground
Wahan Aamna who was sleepingwoke up with a jerk
Aamna: RAJEEV!!!!
Kanan who was sleeping beside her gets up too
Kanan: Dii kya hua
Aamna: Rajeev kahan hai??? KAHAN HAI
Kanan: jiju...wo to apne ghar me honghe
Aamna: nahi wo kisi musibaat me hai
Kanan hugs her
Kanan: shh Dii it's ok aapne koi bura sapna dekha hoga
Aamna separate from her, passina chut raha tha uske maate se
Aamna: NO!!!! don't u understand...uufff mera dham ghut raha hai...bohot gharmi hai yahan...(shaking Kanan) open the window please Kanan
Kanan: koi gharmi nahi hai Dii itni thandi hawa chal rahi hai
Aamna start crying and hugs her
Aamna: nahi koi musibat...mujhe dar lag raha hai...I'm not feeling well(cry)
Kanan is worried now
Kanan: yeh aap ko kya ho gaya Dii...thero I call Charu
She goes in Charu'room
Kanan: Charuuu!!! Charuu utho
Charu: eemm..what happen sone do
Kanan: Dii ki tabiyat kharab hai Charuu utho
Charu: WHAT?? kya hua unhe??
Kanan: pata nahi keh rahi hai ke she is not feeling well...ro rahi hain
Charu run in her room
And she is just shocked to see Aamna
She comes and holds her
Charu: kya hua Dii...kahin dard ho raha hai
Aamna: hhnaan mere dil me bohot dard ho raha hai...mera dam ghut raha hai...PHONE...phone do mujhe
Charu: Dii what do u Means please sambhalein khud ko
Aamna: Charu wo Swayam ne phirse Rajeev ko...mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai
R&G house
Rajeev was crying
Aman holds him and help him to gets up
Aman: chaliye bhaiya hum sone chaltein hai
Rajeev was still crying and muttering: Aamna come back...
When suddenely his phone ring He pick up
Rajeev: Aamna...Aamu azao mele paas plzz
Aamna: Rajeev...are u ok
Rajeev: no I want u plz hugs me once time only one...me love u
Aamna: I love u too
The phone disconnects as Rajeev ki phone ki battery khatam
Rajeev: bloody, stupid **"'_'('_''_'_"-('(&"'("-'_M/M%/M%L/%L/M%
Aman make him lying on his bed
Rajeev: mujhe wo armari...armari me ze...
Aman: haan kya chaiye aapko
Aman open the wadrobe
Rajeev: hhaaan wo zupatta do muze
Aman see a dupatta and give it to Raj
Rajeev take it...he smell it as it was Aamna'duppatta
Tab us bechare ko kuch aaraam ata hai he hugs the duppatta and falls asleep like that(he feel Aamna is near him like this)
Sinnah house
Aamna Rajeev aur aapni shaadi ki pic ko hugs karke Charu ki bahon me rote rote so gaye
Charu use bed pe letakar Kanan se kehti hai
Charu: Kanan please agar aaj sham tum mere kamre me so jao...I prefer stay here with Dii agar unko phirse kuch
Kanan: ok lekin sab thik hai naa
Charu: haan maine check kiya Babies are fine I think Dii ko kuch hua tha but It's still not good for her childs khair gud night tum thak gaye hogi
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Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Iman..
I just love your written update..now presently it is a difficult phase for Rajeev and Aamna ..and you have really describe the scene really well..it was very emotional indeed..Rajeev thinks that Aamna has cheated him but could really feel Aamna's emotion..feel really bad for her..hope they solve their difference..please continue soon dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 26
awesome...
poor Aamna...
idiot Raj saw only that scene...
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you for the pm..good update..
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Originally posted by: VishakaGal12

Hey Iman.. Welcom to my story

I just love your written update..
Thank u dear
now presently it is a difficult phase for Rajeev and Aamna
Yes it is
..and you have really describe the scene really well..it was very emotional indeed..
Thanks
Rajeev thinks that Aamna has cheated him but could really feel Aamna's emotion..feel really bad for her..hope they solve their difference
..please continue soon dear😊
Ok will try
Thank u for ur comment

Edited by Imanezara - 11 years ago

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