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Posted: 12 years ago
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character sketch -same as show

Part-1

1 Year later (after riya 's bacteria incident )
everyone was working at etf office as usual .suddenly rathod's fone rung .

Rathod:jai hind sir ...(after listening 4m other side )ok sir .its really a gd news .we r waiting 4 her .
(Cutting the call )
Rathod:shree ,aj se tomara kam adha ho jayenge ... 😊
Shree 😕 :kyu sir ?????
Rathod :ku ki koi aa raha hai jo tomara kam ko adha kar dega .jaise tumhe aj see koi paper work nehi karna padenge ...
shree 😃 :what !!!really sir !!!!!par kaun ane wala hai ????
Rathod 😉:wo kuchi der me pata chal jayegi ...wo bas raste me hi hai ...
(Everyone was totally confused except arjun )
Sakshi whisperd in ayesha's ear :ayesha ,tumhe nehi lagta aj sameer ko arjun ka bimari lag gayi hai .i mean aj sameer itna paheliya ku bujha rahi hai ????kaun ane wala hai ?????
Ayesha :pata nehi .kuchi der me to pata chal hi jayega .so just relax ... 😊
(After 20 minutes )
suddenly a familiar swt voice came 4m the door
Everyone turned 2 the direction

A beautiful girl standing there with her dimple smile

Shree & chotu were shocked .on the other hand sakshi & ayesha were confused
Shree 😕 :ri !!!!!!!!!!
Chotu :haila shree !!!!jo mein dekh rahi hu kya wo tu v dekh raha hai ??? 😲
Shree 😲 :ha re chotu ...shyaad ...
(I think u all can understand who is she ?????? 😃 )
riya came 2 them & pinched choree
They both shouted 2gether
Riya started laughing
Shree :tu yaha kaise ?????? i mean tu thik kab hua ?????
Riya :1 month pehle hi mein haush me ayi aur mujhe pata chala ki mein singapore me hu .thik hote hi tum logo k pass chali ayi .wese to mein 1
week pehle hi ayi thi par mene socha tum logo ko surprise du .mein ne rathod sir aur arjun sir ko tum dono ko batane k liye mana ki thi .
Now chotu & shree hug riya
Sakshi & ayesha were mesmorized 2 see the luvly frndship among the trio

Rathod :shree ,chotu ab aise hi hug karti rahogi ya riya ko sabse milwaoge v .
Shree :oh yaah !!!!ri meet ayesha & sakshi ...
Ayesha & sakshi (2gether):hai riya !!!! 😊
Sakshi:riya ,mein ne sirf tomari bare me suna tha aj tumse milkar bohot achsa laga .u r really the pride of etf .
Riya :thax sakshi 😊

Suddenly liza entered & saw riya &gav a big shout
Liza :ri !!!!!!!!! 😲
(Actually shree ,lisa & riya were in same college )
Riya :liza tum yaha ???? 😲
Liza :ha ,mein etf me forensic expert hu .par tum thik kab hue ???i just can't believe!!!!iss speecky ne mujhe tomari ane k bare me kuch nehi batayi ...
Riya:actually shree ko v nehi pata tha ...

Rathod:shree ,ab tum logo ki introduction round khatam ho gayi ho to riya ko uski new office dikhao ...
shree:oh yes sir !!!chalo sab riya ko office ghuma kar le ate hai ...
riya ,shree ,chotu ,liza ,sakshi & ayesha just going 2 leave the conference room .suddenly riya spoke up -
Riya:shree,ruko !!!!mein kuch vul gaye hu
She turned 2words arjun
Riya:gd morning arjun sir ...
Arjun :gd morning riya & have a new starting 😊
Riya :thax .
(Sakshi was little shocked bcoz she never heard arjun saying gd morning reply 2 anyone )
after saying that they left the room


Ok enough .i don't know how it is ???
bt achsa lage to v bolna aur bura lage to v bolna .
😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
hai riya back and wishing him gud morning
riya hi jeetegi pakka
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
wah kya come back hai.. Nice start.. Really looking forward for ur story.. Continue..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
part-2

at evening-


in conferrence room :

rathod:guyz aj k liye aur koi kum nehi...

shree,riya,liza,chotu,ayesha,sakshi bcom happy 2 hear this but soon their smile get fadded😲

rathod:par ek bohot jaruri kum hai...🥱
shree:what??????????kya kum???????
rathod:usk liye hume niche hall me jana hoga...😉
they r confused at his act but left 4 hall

the hall room was totally dark.chotu went 2 the switch board and switched on the light .at the mean time piceces of colour paper started 2 shower on riya and there was a ledger writing "WELLCOME BACK RIYA" on the floor .riya was just surprised.she become so much happy that her eyes got moistered.

everyone was smiling,clapping & cheer up riya .actually it was a surprise plan by shree.everyone was acting...😉

rathod:riya,bohot short tym k andar hum logo ne arrange ki hai...i hope tumhe achsa laga...😊
riya:sir,mujhe sirf achsa nehi bohot achsa laga...😊
ayesha:wese riya ye idea shree ka tha...😆
riya:what!!!!!isk matlab tum log acting kar rahe the!!!!!!!!!!
shree:kya hai na ri ek saal pehle tune jo hume dara diya tha ye uska badla hai...ab samjhe ya samjhau(acted like arjun bcoz arjun was not there)
everyone was laughing suddenly arjun came...

arjun:ab aise khada rahogi ya riya k liye jo cake laya hai usse katoge bhi...

everyone went 2 the table except arjun...
shree handed a knife 2 riya...
shree:le ri cake cut...
riya took the knife & cut the cake.everyone was clapping 4 her.arjun saw her 4m far and unknowingly a little smile crept on his face...

riya fed cake everyone & after few minutes she went 2 arjun with a picec of cake on a plate.

riya:sir...
arjun just looked at her.
riya:sir,i know apko ye sab party pasand nehi...fir v yaha hai to plz mere khushio me shamil ho jayie.(after a pause)sir,ye cake apk liye layi thi...

arjun looked at her & took the cake.riya became so happy.she just going 2 leave suddenly arjun called her.
arjun:thax riya...
she just gave her dimple smile & then joined the others.on the other hand sakshi was observing ariya 4m far and she felt bad seeing that arjun said thax 2 riya !!!!!
sakshi(pov):ajeeb baat hai !!!!!!!!!!!arjun riya ko itni choti si baat k liye thax kaha...mujhe to kabhi thax nehi kehti😕

after half an hour they took dinner and began their chitchat.
at 11pm they left 4m the office .

precap:riya-sakshi nokjhok



sry frnds mein utna achsa writer nehi hu .bas thoda sa likhneki koshish kar rahi hu.just give ur opinion...😊😊😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Lovely part...
So Ri is back... plz update soon & thx 4 PM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
pls add me in this PM list dear
love ariya stories only :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
wow
arjun saying thanx to riya how sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
ohhh lvly story ..
riya alive in this story..
nice prologue n ...
both part r lvly..
Lv riya's entery n sakshi expression...
update soon..
story is realy cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update dear.
so riya is alive in this story.
love her entry.
love chore and riya friendship.
both parts are gr8
continmue soon.
and thanx for pm.

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