Riya V/S Sakshi :luv competition (part -5)updated at new page link r - Page 5

awesome update dear
loved the way arjun made riya undestand at the end
yeee riya back
thnx dear
shree is too sweet
liza is great
continue soon
thnx 4 pm and lovely update
will be waiting

Originally posted by: krinal5chhayal

A shock for who, Ariya or Sakshi?

Whatever the shock may be, nothing can separate Ariya and that's for sure!

Your surprise+shock is taking my patience away!

I just can't wait to find out what the shock is!

What's the shock? Please tell me

If it's in the next part then please update the story soon

well ye shock nxt part me v aa sakta hai nor uska baad wala part me .aur wo v arakshi wala shock ...lolz
Wait .kya hai na mujhe sabar ka imtehan lene me maja ata hai

Originally posted by: Arjunkibehen

WOW.. Back to IF after so long and I am glad maine aate hi ye story padhi.. SUPERB one!!

LOVED it... waiting 4 more..!!

Welcome back !!!!
mein v soch hi raha tha humeri behen g Kidhar hai ???

hey just read all the parts..!!

How did u miss this?!?

Thax every one 4 likes & luvly comments ... 😊
Here is the nxt part -

Part -4

Nxt morning at etf office -
sakshi has only come .she was sitting & talking with a picture .it was a pic of a little boy & a girl .

Sakshi :dost tum kaha chale gaye ho .8 saal se tumari koi letter nehi aye .meine tumhe kitna letters veja Par tumne ek v reply nehi di .tumne to kaha tha jab v problem me rahu to mein tumhe apna dilka baat baata sakti hu .aj me itni akeli hu aur tum yaha nehi ho ...i need u !!!
Tear drops felt 4m her eyes .
Suddenly she heard the door opening sound .she immediately hide the photo in her bag & wiped her tears .
Shree ,chotu & riya entered 2gether laughing .
They found sakshi was sitting there .

Shree :gd morning sakshi .kya baat hai aj itni subha subha ????

sakshi :ha wo kaal report work kuch pending reh gayi thi .to socha subha subha ake puri karlu .
Waise tum teeno ek saath ???i mean riya ka ghar to dusri taraf hai na ...

chotu :ha .wo kya hai na hum isse pehle v aise hi office me ate the .
Fir ek saal humne riya ko bohot miss ki .
Ab ri laut aya hai na to ab firse humari nayee routine chalu 😃

Saying this he gave a hi5 2 riya & shree .
On the other side sakshi felt zealous bcoz 4m when riya came shree & chotu hav their all attention 2 her .

After few minutes ayesha also entered .surprisingly she went 2 riya & sat bside her .
Sakshi was hell shocked ...

Sakshi(in mind ) :what the hell !!! 😡 ayesha ne v apna side badal li !!!atleast wo to mere saath akar baith sakta thank .

Few minutes later -
rathod & arjun entered in the conference room .

Rathod :team we hav a new case .
Juhu aur uski aspas ki area me pichle 7 months me 7 ladkiyo ki murder hue hai .
And interesting baat ye hai ki they r same aged aur same tarike se unka murder hue hai .
Aur last ladki ka murder pichle raat 11 ya 12 baje ki bich hua hai .

Sakshi :interesting ...

Riya :sir ,akdo ki hisaab se iss type ka cases me psycho murder ki haath rehta hai .

Arjun :shree aur ayesha tum pata karo ki pichle raat uss murder area k ass pass koi tha jo kisiko waha ate jate dekha ya nehi ...
Chotu pata karo ki inn ladkiyo ka koi missing file hue yan nehi ...
Sakshi tum unn sare ladkiyo ki information nikalo .kaha rehta tha kya karta tha every thing .

Arjun didn't say anything 2 riya .every one left 4 their work .rathod went 2 commissioner office .
Only arjun & riya in the conference room .
Arjun was reading a file & riya was sitting silently .she felt bad bcoz arjun didn't give her any work .
Suddenly arjun stood up & just going 2 leave .
But he turned 2 her .she was still sitting with a gloomy face .

Arjun :kya baat hai ???aisi tarike se baaithi raaho gi ya case base solve v karogi .

Riya looked at him with a confusing face ...

Arjun :(with a smirk )aisi kya ghur rahi ho !!!
hume avi chabi (the last victim )ka ghar jana hai uski parents se milne .

Riya bcome so much happy that she almost jumped with her diary .
a little smile crept on arjun's face at her act .
They both left .

After few minutes sakshi came 2 the conference room .but she found no one was there .

Sakshi :ajeeb baat hai kuch der pehle to arjun yahi tha .aur ye riya v nazar nehi aa rahi hai ?????

after 1 hour every one gathered in the conference room except riya -arjun .

Rathod :ye rawte aur riya kaha reh gaye ???

suddenly door opened & arjun -riya entered ...

Sakshi staired at them

Sakshi (in mind )šajeeb baat hai !!!! 😡
Yaha par hum logo ka kum karte karte paseena choot raha hai aur ye arjun k saath ghumne chaali gayi ... 😡


Precap :Sakshi found the same boy photo in arjun 's drawer .

Enough 4 2day .give ur opinion .jitna likes utna comments chahiye ...ab samjhe ya samjhau


Important note :guyz u all know ki ye mera pehla work hai .so mein ne ye work my forum me rakh kar test transmission kar raha tha .but bohot logo ne request ki hai ki mein ye work arjun forum me post karu .to part -5 se ye arjun forum par post hoga ...thank u

interesting pls continue soon

Ok now i got what the shocking revelation is... Sakshi nd Arjun childhood friends... Ariya was sweet... Arjun wanted Riya to go with him... aww how sweet... Choree back to their old routine... nice...

awesome concept
read all the parts
riya vs sakshi
loved ariya
sakshi is jealous
update next part soon

hey read all four parts.

really greAT. just please don't separate ariya.