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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kicha111

Awesome update Manvi s hurt knw'g virat's nd maya relation nd on otherside virat s angry 4 viren's nd manvi's relation And dclast part ws unexpected bt manvi hs done ri8 thg he hs hurted hr n past nt anymore nw wait'g eagerly 2 knw hw virat gona react Totally loved d update Cont soon dear Wait'g eagerly 4 nxt part nd thnx 4 d pm

Plzzz dont discontinue d story even aftr d shw ends v would like 2 read ur updates more nd sure v wl give feedbacks too bt plzzz continueee.

You wana know how virats gona react......
Exactly you will say OUCH..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

this was really needed manvi clearly showing virat that she is not gonna take any of his nonsense again that slap was much needed one really soo happy some kinda satisfaction ...
manvi ignoring virat just letting him not effect her atleast infrot of him being soo strong and staying like a starnger am loving this behaviour of hers this was soo badly needed for virat and seeing his reaction to all this excites me...😛
but the way he asked her without caring of anything else for why she was crying that was really sweet forget manvi even we cant hate virat yaa 😛
karan i just hope he gets to know the whole truth soon
this is getting hell interesting ...fab update so amazing loved it 👏
and plz dnt discontinue this already many writers did that plz plz plz continue it for us for we regular readers

More dramma coming up babes...😉...
Yes I am obviously thinking about all the sweet readers and updt soon but its just sometimes it hurts to see so less likes...😭 😭 and I feel like discontinuing...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jannat94

Firstly don discontinued it Lara
and second the slap was too good and I want more slap coz he only deserve her slaps only...
loved the whole update...I love this strong manvi
thanx 4 the Pm
waiting for next part
update soon

Thanks a lot for your beautiful comment jannat...😊 😊...
It means a lot to me...
Will updt soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: paddu503

Amazing update...really loved the whole update...finally karan thought to find about truth...eagerly waiting for the next part...both manvi and virat hurting themselves...at the end the slap was superb...now its interesting to know how they confront eachother...amazing work...continue soon...take care...sorry first time commenting...:-):-):-):-):-):-)

Thanks a lot yaar...😊 😊...
Theres always a first time to everything naa...Will be eagerly waiting for your comment in the next updt too..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshivirmanian

Hawww virat i hate this virat
Just read ur qwole story today its awsm pls pm me whn u update

Be ready to hate him more...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

Amazing update lara !! I loved everything abt the update especially the awesome slap !! Ek tapar kyaa 2,3 tapar aur maarnee chahiyeee !! How can he say like this !! His eyes are folded with anger n he don't noe wat he is doing 😡 i m hating this virat !! I really want him to feel guilty !!! Gosh hope the truth comes out soon !!!
Poor mannu !! She is trying to be strong !! But inside she is suffering alot !! I really feel bad for her :'(
But i m happy tat she is being strong in front of virat !!!
So karan is finding the truth !! I really really want all the truth to come out soon !! Looking forward for next update !! Will be eagerly waiting !! Continue ASAP !! Thanks for the pm :)

Jyada thappar khayega toh mera viru boy ka thobra bigar jayega...🤢 😆 😆Thanks a lot yamin, will updt soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .jai.

Awesome update.. wow Slap he deserves it... M really really happy Proud of U Manvi .. Manvi ignores Virat Very Gud Manvi Ignore him.. I hate this Virat n his rude behavior towards Manvi poor Manvi feeling so sad for her ... Waiting for the next update .. don't discontinue it pls pls...pls continue soon

More drama coming soon... thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nixdix

Hey...Lara please...

just don't talk about discontinuing it...😭
this is one of my favourites...
u're a fab writer...plsss dont do this...
nd abt this update...it was supert awesome...
do continue soon...😊

I get disappointed when I see less likes and comments dear..Cry..
It makes me want to dc ...🤢
Will updt soon for u awsm readers...thnks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Awesome update Lara..!! 👍🏼 Loved it ❤️❤️.. Manvi slapped Virat!! Darun 😃.. It was much needed.. I wanna slap him too.. How dare he called her Viren's mistress 😡😡.. Arrogant jerk.. This slap is enough to tell him that she is not going to tolerate his nonsense anymore.. She is not weak.. Though she is going through a lot pain yet I loved her attitude in front of Virat.. Her ignorance towards him is making him crazy and somewhere it's hurting his ego also.. I'm loving this strong willed Manvi .. Ruchi is sweet.. Hope Karan will find the real culprit soon.. Superb update ⭐️⭐️.. Will be waiting for the next part.. And please don't even think of discontinuing this SS.. I love your work so please do continue all of them.. Noito ami toke khub jalabo 😈.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

Tora toh thappor mere mere amar viru boy'er thobra kharab kore dibi !!! 😲 😲 😲...
Amake jalabi...OMG !!
Thnks fr ur comment meery baby...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nrithyao

loved the update
virat is being so rude now
feeling bad for maanvi
hope karan finds out the truth soon
thanks a lot for the pm
please continue soon

Thanks dear...😊..
Will cont really soon...

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