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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prathe

wow superr finally manvi slapped him atleast this slap would fill some sense in his senseless brain..
wow am loving this super women manvi 😆lara...more of drama ahead...u r story is just rocking as always dear...pls dnt ever think of discontinuing it dear pls dnt do that...we all love your stories dear...😊
do continue soon dear will wait for your update😊as always...

Thanks prathe...😃..
Will updt soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Seriously naina.. tu hamesha high hi raha kar...😆

Your comment is speaking their emotions better than my updt...😃 👏...
Thanks a lot for this loong comment and good news...
Tere iss long comment sei mujhmei takat aagayi hai...⭐️
Now I will updt in one day... kal jitor for mahnat karungi aur updt karungi pakka...😉...
Are you happy naw .. dear 😊 😊
And as you can see in the precap... you will get manvir their...😳 😳...
Yes their will be virat too but updt parneke baad tu usko pakka mar dalegi 🤢

accha... 😉 you want k hamesha high hi raha karun... ohh only for a long comment... ryt...?? 😛 😆
thank u thank u... 😃
wowww... really... dat means update will be only for me😉 is it...??? i mean early for me 😳 😉
yes i am very happy... jumping on my bed 😃 😃 😃
manvir... yeyyy 😃 n virat... i mean he will turn more wicked and will be a jerk.. 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
first sorry for being late. Coming to the update it was awesome loved it to the core nd it was so touchy. Virats anger nd manvi's pain really well describe. Poor manvi bearing all this. How can virat stoop so low he is such a cheapu i really hate him in this part bt nt from heart u knw 😳 haww manvi slapped virat bt he deserve that doze. Eagerly waiting for the next part cont soon thanx for the pm tc
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Tora toh thappor mere mere amar viru boy'er thobra kharab kore dibi !!! 😲 😲 😲...

Amake jalabi...OMG !!
Thnks fr ur comment meery baby...😊

Tor Viru boy kaaj e korche thappor khawar moto 😛.. Ha toke khub jalabo!! 😈😆 Jaldi jaldi update kor please 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
ITS 100!!!👏👏 CONGO!
Edited by sindhu4karanika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
after the slap was eagerly waiting for the update :D
congrats on completing 100pg..fabulous update...but i can't see manvi in soo much pain.what's wrong with this virat..his words are so heart stabbing...he is not making things worst for manvi only but for himself too...when the truth will be out he won't be able to forgive himself ...he has crossed all limits...leaving no stone unturned to insult her ...and that maya..it's really difficult to tolerate her throughout... can't imagine what will virat do to her once karan bring out the proof...waiting for next part
Edited by roshreb - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
CONGRATES FOR 100 PAGES.

AWESOME UPDATE.
EMOTIONAL ONE.
PLZ GET THAT BITCH MAYA OUT FROM STORY SOON.PLZ...
WHERE IS KARAN?
I THINK AFTER THIS MUCH INSULTS VIRAT DOESN'T DESERVE MANVI.
LOVED VIREN CARE FOR MANVI VERY MUCH.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res
unres
finally... hai na... pheww... 😉 u must be happy that i am unresing ... hai na...??? 😉
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar...
dilbar pe ho na... dilbar pe ho na... koi asar... very apt... ⭐️
manvi bechari maar bhi jae na tab bhi uske dilbar pe asar nahi hoga kyunki uske dilbar ka dil to toot chuka hai... 💔 it doesnt matter ke woh dil bhi manvi ke dilbar ki samjhike wajah se toota tha... 😡
matlab... virat ko toh mann karta hai... ek rakh doon... 😡
but fir main sochti hoon... ke uss bechare par toh i should feel pity...
i mean kisiki kismat kharab hona kya hota hai... go n ask virat... bad luck toh jaise uska middle name hi ho... 😳
jisse kabhi kissi mangta tha aaj usi ne rakh ke diya ek 😆 😆
aur dena bhi chahie... par poor virat,... mujhe toh bura feel ho rha hai uske liye... khud hi apne bacche ko gaaliyan de rha hai... kitna badnaseeb hota hai wo baap jo apne hi bache ko ganda khoon, n illegitimate kehta hai...
but what to do virat ji has gone way too far this time... i mean maya also calling him a puppy... isse bura aur kya hoga virat ke saath... mann karta hai maya se uski shadi aaj hi karwaa doon... fir jindagi bhar royega n he will regret his mistake...
OKKK THATS IT... 😳 😉
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nAwesome Update Lara..!!! Virat has to face the disaster this time not Manvi...Loved Maanvi's answer to Virat...but he hit the compleltly wrong chord...he shouldn't have mentioned abt the child...wonder what will he do if he finds that it was his own...!
Maanvi is complete numb now...beyond repair...Viren is the 1 who she looks up to..but how far can he understnd...N Virat needs serious repair in his head...n Maya will put the chain back..i guess Virat would strangle her if she tries he is a monster now...Waiting fir next Lara..!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats Lara on completing 100 pages...!!!!

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