Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 71

Chapter 9: Very emotional chapter, loved Virman's faceoff! Haye Manvi's line, "Its Ms. Manvi!" I loved it, that is what he deserves for making her so hurt! I loved my Viren's concern for her, he is such a sweetheart, like I said earlier, meri pyare Manvir, kisi ki nazar na lage, Virat you will suffer hard for your deeds, Viren is so much nicer than you!

Chapter 10:

I slapped Virat twice while reading this! Really he called her Viren's Mistress and what about his Maya madam huh, he actually spent the night with her and yet no regret and poor innocent Manvi is just getting blamed for nothing! If he actually had a brain maybe his wife would still be with him! I can't believe he said Manvi is hurting him, no Virat you are just jelous of Viren and you should be, you do not deserve Manvi at all unless you beg for forgiveness, until you show that you can behave and be respectful to your wife Nimi can enjoy her Manvir's jodi. 🤣

Thank you so much for the PM's sorry for the delay in commenting! and please don't even think about discontinuing this one, if you need more assurance that we like the story, I will give you page long comments that bore you and start spamming your thread!

Originally posted by: Syed695

Ahh..Awesome..Lovedit Specially the slap..Damn she should have given this dose of harsh behaviour way early..but then its never late..She has answered him in just 1 slap...no words needed there n this is a come back..Simply nice...she may be hurt or broken soul but defntly not weak,..,Loved it Lara.,..Waiting for next!!!!

Lara donot discontinue the story..Please continue for readers who regulary comment n like..We would read and comment...ignre the rest...we will give our feedback..for sure...but donot discontinue..!!!

Originally posted by: nimi00

Chapter 9: Very emotional chapter, loved Virman's faceoff! Haye Manvi's line, "Its Ms. Manvi!" I loved it, that is what he deserves for making her so hurt! I loved my Viren's concern for her, he is such a sweetheart, like I said earlier, meri pyare Manvir, kisi ki nazar na lage, Virat you will suffer hard for your deeds, Viren is so much nicer than you!

Chapter 10:

I slapped Virat twice while reading this! Really he called her Viren's Mistress and what about his Maya madam huh, he actually spent the night with her and yet no regret and poor innocent Manvi is just getting blamed for nothing! If he actually had a brain maybe his wife would still be with him! I can't believe he said Manvi is hurting him, no Virat you are just jelous of Viren and you should be, you do not deserve Manvi at all unless you beg for forgiveness, until you show that you can behave and be respectful to your wife Nimi can enjoy her Manvir's jodi. 🤣

Thank you so much for the PM's sorry for the delay in commenting! and please don't even think about discontinuing this one, if you need more assurance that we like the story, I will give you page long comments that bore you and start spamming your thread!

Originally posted by: naina927

UPDATE DE DE NA PLEASEEE I AM WAITING...!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Oye naina maiyaa nei capital letters mein demand ki hai 😲 😲...

But abhi two days maximum lagenge yaar...😭

As I am still working on it... long one coming...😃

Dont worry I am giving you a precap now...

Precap:

Manvi: " Nothing viren.. I am just armmm sleepy and tired.. thats it.."

Viren: " I have this guts feeling that something is wrong.. Wont you tell me manvi ? Why do I feel like you are not well ? Are you having fever again ? Please manvi.. for Gods sake please tell me whats wrong.."

Manvi tried to speak something but words didnt came out of her mouth, she let herself slip into the deep, black.. painless world of nothing. Finally she could sleep after countless sleepless horrible nights of loneliness and misery.

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Precap:

Manvi: " Nothing viren.. I am just armmm sleepy and tired.. thats it.."

Viren: " I have this guts feeling that something is wrong.. Wont you tell me manvi ? Why do I feel like you are not well ? Are you having fever again ? Please manvi.. for Gods sake please tell me whats wrong.."

Manvi tried to speak something but words didnt came out of her mouth, she let herself slip into the deep, black.. painless world of nothing. Finally she could sleep after countless sleepless horrible nights of loneliness and misery.