Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 72

Originally posted by: naina927

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" Why you are getting so desperate to leave huh.. enjoy being virens mistress ?? He gives you so much ple.. "

thapad marna hai main tere virat... 😡 btameeez kahin ka... 😡 yahi sikhaya hai teri mommy ne... vanshika ki class toh main jaroor lungi... bigaad ke rakh diya hai bilkul virat ko... 😡

enough of my drama i guess... 😳

but coming to the update now, it was BANG ON...

though i missed viren... so therefore manvir... 😭

but virman made up for it... 😉

in the beginning, i was like aww...virat still loves manvi so much... he doesnt need to look at her to see her... he understands her and cares for her... but towards the end i was cursing myself for thinking good about virat... he has lost it... 🤢 he is continuously blaming manvi and hurting her without fail... and my poor mannu 😭 😭 😭

virat will regret it soo bad... it will kill him once he gets to know the truth... he will be broken... he will be that hurt that even going back to manvi wouldnt also seem like a good idea to him... he would feel as if he is a curse on manvi and he doesnt deserves to be the one for her... but again his heart would made him forget all this and would force him to go back to manvi... his yearning heart and soul wouldnt let her go... he would want her back on any cost... he would try his best to pacify her... but will he be able to do it...??? is it all so easy...??? breaking someone beyond repair and killing their soul and after all this going back and asking for forgiveness...??? would it have any effect on manvi...??? i know somehow it would bcos she still loves him but i really want manvi to actually hurt virat... hurt him the way he hurted her... making him realise what is to live without the one thing you desire the most... the one thing you love the most... the one thing which is your everything but still you cannot have it...

ps : ignore me, i am high... i desperately and urgently want a dosage of be-intehaan 😉

Originally posted by: naina927

kahin iska matlab wo toh nahi jo main samajh rahi hoon... 😲

anyways try to make it quick lara...

mirrors ka update ni bhi aata, toh its absolutely okk... bcos i dont read it 😛

Originally posted by: .jai.

Awesome Teaser Update Soon Cant Wait 😊

Originally posted by: Rachel19

Hey nice update liked it
Manvi ignoring virat was awesome
And virat seeing manvis puffy eyes and asking her what is wrong with her just loved it
Manvi changed into a workaholic so sad
Virat is so rude towards manvi and the words he said to her are just to get so angry on him
I would like to see manvi being so strong towards virat that he will be following her for forgiveness
And what is Karan doing hope he will will prove himself innocent
And that he will brig out the truth in front of virat
Thank you so much for the pm
Please continue soon will be waiting for your update
And please don't discontinued this story plz

Originally posted by: shaimah

Amazing update
Loved it
Liked the part were virat is concerned about manvi...its getting interesting
Cant wait to see a jealous virat
Excited for the next part
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
manvi slapped virat loved it
he deserves that
hey don't discontinue
continue it
thank for pm

Originally posted by: richa002

Lovef itt yar...
though Manvi is weak..bt she is strong from inside...loved d slap...
I hate virat of ur story..how can he say like that to manvi
Plzzz dont discontinue this...i love it soo much...
Nd update soon

Originally posted by: Tuba_KSG

Phata Poster nikla VIRAT LOL 😃 .. what has gotten into him MAN !! 😕Whats Wrong with this Virat , i too want to slap him like maanvi did !! PSH 😡 -_- , My bechari mannu 😭 , kitna tolerate kregi i just hOpe karan mystery or RAAZ jaldi unfold krde , huh .. Then maanvi would surely make him suffer !! 😃😆
Lara Update was really nice but again Short one , please next time i want larger than this atleast !!
But yeah , written very well .. 👏😊
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And dare u think about Discontinue this FF again .. ! 😡🤔

Fata poster nikna VIRAT...lol 😆 😆...

The most hilarios comment.. haa haa..

And dont worry slow slowly all mistery and raaz will disclose...😉 😆 😆 I thought I gave a long updt...

Originally posted by: hangok

owww this virat drives me crazy...
how can he , great to see this manvi...

i hope it doesnttake long to see how karan brings the truth out...

great work and thanks for pm