Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 75

omg!!! such an emotional update..!! I'm speechless ..the song added fuel to the fire! it was completely astounding! ur an amazing writer!! superb *claps *

Hey very nice and emotional update loved it
My god virat is so rude really love to see manvi in a strong avatar
Virat opened all old wounds again by asking manvi about her baby but he is still thinking about her
Viren is such a good friend he really cares about manvi
What happend to manvi I hope she's fine
And where is Karan why hasn't he come yet to prove himself innocent
Would like to see what virat will do after he will find out the truth
And love manvi in a strong avatar
Thank you so much for the pm
Please continue soon
Will be waiting for your next update

Originally posted by: roshreb

awesome update..specially the slap..truly deserved..infact manvi should have reacted long back when he called their child a "bas***d"...virat's words were too rude & harsh..i hate him for treating her as a wh**e..how dare he calls her viren mistress..he did loved her but never trusted her... finally karan working on gathering proofs...im eagerly waiting for the truth to come out & to see a shattering virat..but after all these i'm still waiting to see virman together..and plz don't discontinue this story!! update soon

Hey thanks...😊...

Originally posted by: vamps1996

lara sach mein this was what manvi should have done long back i was so angry the way she suffred all that miserable pain and stuff and never confronted virat bravely not even when she lots her child but i loveeddd it there should be even more slps for him and i wasnt shocked at virat behaving this way coz the man who can call his child such a trash things can believe anyone's words about his wife atleast she still is legally i guess virat never loved her that much coz tryst is the second name of love for me and when he never trusted her that is surely he never loved her i want her to tell him all the truth on his face specially the road part coz he will suffer to much at the end i dont think listening to what he himslf did to his child will let him live and han dhamki kisis aurko de i wont let u discontinue it so stop ur threats devil wala roop mat dikha ^_______________^

lots of love❤️

Oye vampuu... sometimes it doesnt matter how much you love someone, jelousy and possessiveness are those two most evil things that makes the serene, holy love go to hell...

Originally posted by: shaalivirman

aaahhh...SLAP...😲

but i luved it...😛

tat guy needs a slap for hurting my mannu...😭 i want tis virat to chnge soonnn...poor virman 😭

ufff...tis story awsome...man u rock...cant wait

plzzz...continu sooonnn and thnx fr the pm...😉

Thanks a lot dear...😃...

Originally posted by: madhuharini

love this ff a lot lara...
please don't discontinue this...
it's really much interesting...
pls update soon.

Thanks for your comment dear...😊 😊...

Originally posted by: Fairysara

How dare s he ??? Already making her life a hell how cud he utter those words damn virat I hate him fr tht

You will hate him more now...🤢...

Originally posted by: anu0555

nooo lara u can't discontinue it...plzzz plzzz yrr...i love ur FF like anything...

n part was awsomeee loved it to the coreee... n manvi slapsss viraat omgg..!!! u really write superbly...its gettng interesting ...both r not in peace...n virat's anger...i hope manvi will clear all misunderstandingss between them..n karan gonna catch main culprit behind all these..loved this part..awsomee...plzz dont discntnue diss...n update nxt part soon...!! eagerly waiting... n thnks for pm yrr...

love yeaaa

-anu aka rouza

Hey anu thanks for your comment dear...😊...

Originally posted by: sindhu4karanika

hey b'ful updates man! I absolutely love dis brave n confident manvi! da way she gave it back to him saying "it ms" was too good. yeah its right he lost being her mr long back! n ohho someone is burning in jealousy! I like it! n finally manvi has attained her saturation level! she slapped him! she should hav done it long before! p.s hey dear ppl love ur work trust me! so pls don't even think abt discontinuing dis ff! its simpley awesome so go ahead!!

Thanks yaar...😃...

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Superb updt...yeah he hue na bat...that slap indeed needed...virat deserves that...it will help him to understand his insecurity...loved manvis attitude...eksss cant wait fr the next


hey dear can i req u something...actually there is some pichale janam ki dushmani btw ur stories n my mob that y the updt page never open on it...so can do me a favor...cant u send me the full updt in PM ill read there n then do comment...plzzz

Thanks dear...😊...