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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

awesome update

loved it

karan did'nt do anything

poor maanvi

so emotional update

plz cont soon

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Update was very emotional!! Poor Manvi 😒.. I guess she just lost her baby.. Feeling so bad for her.. Its too painful 😭.. My heart went out to her.. She was lying on the road lifeless but no one came forward to help her.. She is all alone now 😔.. I think Karan is not at fault.. He was actually shocked after seeing those pictures.. Who is that lady?? I think she is behind all these.. I'm already hating her 😡😡.. Fabulous update Lara! 👏👏 Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

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nimi00

@nimi00

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

That was it, mujhe aur bhi padna tha 😕. I really loved the update, you had me in tears at the end. It was really well written. So Karan didn't plan it, it was someone else. Us ladki ko toh mein 😡 . How dare she frame Manvi, I want Manvi to punish her severely for making her loose Virat's trust 🤬.Haww, baby ko mar dala 😭, I feel so bad for Manvi right now, she lost her hubby and on top of that her baby too. The drunk man is responsible for a death of a baby and making me cry too 😭. Update again soon, and thanks for the PM. 🤗

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

awesome update
poor maanvi
hope nothing happens to her kid
cant wait for the next part
please continue soon

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

i cant believe that u can write such stuff lara ❤️ today im not gona call u devil but i will just say i love u so much for writing this and u are great at writing tragic stuff too as the way u write the crazy ones...i loved ur writing here true that her trust is broken and maybe can never be repented karan wanst at a fault its all that girl's game or better to say the cruel game her fate is playing...i got goose bumps reading the last part...i really dont have enough words yar aj vampire is speechless 👍🏼

lots of love ❤️

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

This was so emotional !!! ;'( poor mannu !!! i can't see her like this !!!! Laura this is awesomely written !!!! manvi pain her emotions was portrayed superbly !!! omg who is tat she ???😲 tat jerk !!!😡😡😡 n wat abt karan?? :( Awesome update !!!! 👍🏼 really excited for next part !!! will be waiting !!i really loved the update❤️ i m juz speechless !!! continue soon if possible !! thanks for the pm :D

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: virumanu
loved it...
it was just fab...
plzzz continue sooonn
this like button is not working for ...srry
but count my like tooo...

COngrats dear...Yaara tu toh first ho gayiii iii iii... 👏 ⭐️...Will cont soon haa... 😊 😊...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: jannat89
Again I'm second, yipee
come to the update
it was awesome
manvi know Karan evil plan and some girl is after Virat also, I hate him
poo Manvi agrr that drunker person, hope she is fine
thanx 4 pm
update soon

Yahooo... hooo... hooo... 👏 👏...Tu firse second ho gayiii... ⭐️ ⭐️...Am so proud of you... And hold hold hold on yaar... karan has no evil plans... The mystery girl is at fault... tada...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: IISHITA
IT IS FABULOUS, MESMERIZING & ABSORBING
SONG WAS A PERFECT MATCH
VERY NICE UPDATE
HOPE TO READ SOON D NXT PART
BTW WHO'S DAT EVIL GIRL????

Thanks a lot iishi... 😃...Glad that you liked thhe song as well...You will get to know about the girl as the story proceeds...