Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 16

Originally posted by: hangok

oww poor manvi hope nothing happens to the baby,
too short one, thanks for pm

Originally posted by: prathe

wow..oh god trust and betrayal... these two imp t things you have potrayed very well in these two updates hats off!!super
do continue dear...

Originally posted by: roshreb

another nice emotional update.. my poor mannu..she is totally broken..i guess she lost the baby ... so its not karan who sent those pics but that lady.. who is she? i don't like that karan too.. why competing wiz virat.. update soon..

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

awesome updt..manvis situation was totally painful...cont soon..

Originally posted by: Ankita1997

Hey i am so sorry that i am so late in commenting that u have updated the 2nd part too.. So let me give the cmnt for both the parts ^__^
Virat didnt believe her [:'(] he was so damn angry and believed those idiot pictures taken at wrong angle instead of believing his wife
he also called their with this bad word and forgot about the love,all promises they made and everything
manvi thought karan broke her trust bt he was saying about her bday..
who the hell is that nonsense girl who created all these misunderstandings to get Virat >.<
manvi is falling in the road helpless and nobody is even helping her huh! World is full of Selfish people
did she lost her baby
both the parts were fantastic and superb!
loving this story update asap
love ya

Originally posted by: Rachel19

hey awesome update

ohw my god virat is so rude

and karan is innocent

then who is behind all of this

and who is that girl

i hope manvi will find her luck again

so much emotions you explained her emotions very well and nice

please continue soon will be waiting

Originally posted by: yusra8

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

awesome update

loved it

karan did'nt do anything

poor maanvi

so emotional update

plz cont soon

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Update was very emotional!! Poor Manvi .. I guess she just lost her baby.. Feeling so bad for her.. Its too painful .. My heart went out to her.. She was lying on the road lifeless but no one came forward to help her.. She is all alone now .. I think Karan is not at fault.. He was actually shocked after seeing those pictures.. Who is that lady?? I think she is behind all these.. I'm already hating her .. Fabulous update Lara! Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care