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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

great one FP !! 😊
so FINALLY, we get to know what actually happened. well, kind of. :)
umm, i think arnav should have tried more to talk through rather than leaving things at such loose strands. khushi was bound to be hurt, but she went overboard. a little maybe. they two were best friends and solving issues between them is like their duty!!
so arnav and lavanya had an amiable breakup. but what if they two remained in the same cities?they would still be in a relationship.?
why has arnav suddenly started feeling jeaolus seeing khushi with other man. didn't he feel any of that while fixing varun and khushi??
if them being separated invoked feelings in him, then i think it happened for the best. na?

so we are back to the present!! :)
waiting for more.

try to update soon. waise, how much time(for the next update) are you talking about ??

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

just came across this story, loved reading it. and I love your characters, specially akash, he's adorable and charming. do continue soon :)

love,
Sonia

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Khushixoxo

@Khushixoxo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

aww it was so short, but none the less it was perfect! I'm so glad we are back in the present so we can see what is happening with arnav and khushi's relationship!

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: Anupama.
Pehle to thanks to Charu aka 1chilly to have made me come across this story. Fir hugs to you for writing this fiery! Aag laga di tumne 🤗 :D but seriously, the basic concept must have taken up many here to write upon. But I honestly feel that no one must have presented it as uniquely as you did. Plus not only the narrations about the characters, their feelings and actions seem real and just , you have also written it so well that it is absolutely a delight.
One can not only relate to Khushi but to Arnav too or Lavanya or Varun for that matter. Even if one hasnt been them in some point of one s life. There hasnt been teachings in these 8chapters that I read until now that this way was right or wrong. Thats how people are. Its all circumstantial that makes us feel and act.

The story is absolutely endearing. I loved that you havent gone the way that Arnav out of the blue realizes he had this latent undiscovered love for Khushi once their bond was severed. Great one at that. M loving the point where the story is right now. Jealousy and all. Its evident that he now feels something for her. They have spent a long time witnessing a lot of shades of the other one. Still a lot of builing back is left. Maybe thats what he meant in those last lines.

Lovely story. And sorry for unres'ing so late. :)

unres'd on pg 66. And yes, please Varun is mine.? I just realized that I love him. ;>

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

the situation cud have been delt differently from both sides, however teenage is the time when no one stops and thinks before speaking and that is how things got bad for arnav and khushi!
it is a very common fact that if a guy and girl are best friends once the guys gf comes in the picture things change and since khushi liked arnav things got ugly.

if we look at it , it wasnt anyones fault. not varuns, not lavanyas or arnav and khushis!
it was the bad timing and more so the harsh words spoken!

it feels as if they got stuck in a spiral and just couldnt get out of it!

by hurting the other they tried to save themselves from further heartbreak! and eventually life got in the way of their friendship, they carried on but never forgot each other!

im hoping arnav sorts this out with less hotheadedness since i dont expect co-operation from khushi 😆

amazing update love!
no wonder i love this story so much!!
update soon

xx -T

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

missing you and your updates!!
hopefully your schedule clears out soon. 😊

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Life and it's googlies... It's ultimately how you play them.

Khushi's pain and then the mortification... Arnav trying to ammend but ultimately his ego wins ( I assume his justification for dropping his efforts when reciprocated would be that he is not the one at fault here)... such a sad mess.

Glad we are back to the present... hoping there will be some progress/ improvement to their cat & mouse relationship soon.

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

endearing story of love and friendship:
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pls add me inPMlist

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#449

Hey ...
I read all the chapters in one go in the wee hours and I just couldn't sleep without completing it ...

I loved the way the story has progressed ...
They way you've peeled all the layers one at a time was captivating !!

I knew that something just isn't right between Khushi and Arnav coz they just bickered over trivial things ... But then as the the story moved ahead and with all the fab flashbacks, their animosity they held for each other now seemed understandable !!

And yes besides Arnav and khushi I absolutely adore all the characters too as in Payal, Akash, Varun and Lavanya ...
They just add the perfect spice ...

Oh and yes I loveee the jealous Arnav to the core ... ;)
He's just amazing ...