SS (Completed): Of Lemons & Limes #6 (Ch 23 - 24/ Epilogue)

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hesinahi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

Hi dear!

I also read of lemons and limes...very nice story..how u r able to write these many different stories on arnav and khushi...our most lovable and romantic pair...👏

when khushi is abt to fell on the ramp...i was tensed when i was reading this part...and then arnav holding her and presenting to the audience as average beautiful indian woman...i was i never expected this...so nice...how he saved khushi as well as his show...what a difference between ASR in first episode of ipkknd and arnav who already fell in love with khushi here...

and aas t their romance after marriage in the last chapter ...so nice..which we missed in our ipkknd show..

finally the secret of lemon u revealed at the end is unimaginable...its really funny and am thinking about arnav's state if he comes to know abt this secret...oh god..its really funny...

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ipkviewer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

fabulous

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10th Nov: I liked it very much. It was so unique of the way how you build their relation thru their daily carpool with mostly silence prevailing in those journeys. It was interesting to read of your updates in showing that growth when Simran was out sick. I simply loved your interpretation of DeviMaiya into the story.

If I observe closely, all your updates are long by starting the story on a simple line with not many characters to give you a buffer to talk about. Yet, on that thin wafer line story, the way you put together each and every update is fabulous and intriguing. Kudos on that. Its certainly not an easy task to make your readers stick to your story with no major conflicting points or so called cliffhangers.

I seemed to have not remembered several points I liked during certain updates. But one I remembered and liked is that you explained why Khushi might always be failing in fastening that belt. I liked the way you chose to show their bond of how Arshi feel for each other as their own thru A always fastens both their seatbelts and K also wait for him to do that job as if thats his right on her. So I didnt even bother to expect the logic of why Khushi always falters with her seatbelt thing.

I also liked it when Arnav immediately got the hints of why Khushi didnt accept his bag gift and started approaching her to clear his stand on Lavanya even though he is still not ready for commitment. Khushi's doubts and misunderstandings on Arnav and his statements in the fashion show are only valid for all plausible reasons.

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xXShriyaXx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

This is truely a beautiful story:-)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Maria Adam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

The only thing I can say is that lol.
I thought the mystery over the lemon scent must be something like natural scent, but it was an actual lemon.
Lol