SS (Completed): Of Lemons & Limes #6 (Ch 23 - 24/ Epilogue)

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divya_divs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#741

awesome story 😊 read it in one go😛 the whole story reminded me of many scenes from the serial yet completely in a different style...same arnav, same khushi but with lots of added flavour 😛 and i enjoyed it with devimayya's views in between😊 loved the way u wrote the story😊good luck😊

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MystifiedBean

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Posted: 11 years ago

#742

loved the story

the intrication of IPK dialouges too with it

and the presence of DeviMaiyya

they were writen in stars after all

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gurukhush

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Posted: 11 years ago

#743

Hey,

The n'th time that I have read THIS story, today😳😳😃... And this time when I am sitting in my brother's house in USA.. yes I have migrated but U'r stories have come along with me... I wonder if U still read any of these comments now... U'r flavour of ARSHI is unique and ever alive. I just request U to never leave this Forum... is it too much to ask of U??.. This epilogue ranks way up there, after a beautiful, touching, soothing tale.. only U could spread such magic around.. PLEASE do continue on this epic ARSHI journey😊😊... And Thanx for this and U'r various other stories..👏

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s-576

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Posted: 11 years ago

#744

awe...so romantic...the kind that makes tender heart flutter and the mind to relapse into dreamy wonderings...lol

loved it...how I wish somebody would make my heart beat the salsa rhythm...lol

loved it...the lemon bits and the limes too...

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mszoeystar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#745

Loved this story. Kept me glued till the very end :)

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Abhinaya Sri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#746

yummy.. hatsoff to the writer , u always leave me speechless. very good writing.. one of the best writers. God bless you.

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henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#747

i read the whole SS again :)

i was so moved and so involved in this simple yet romantic story :)

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ana-twilight

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Posted: 11 years ago

#748

Just read the whole chapters in one go!!
Beautifully writen..each n all..

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Afsha Ismail

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Posted: 11 years ago

#749

Oh my goddd
This is simply amaaazinnnggg..

His lemin..hehe arnavs an idiot bt cute..lovely narration <3

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RainyDays

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Posted: 11 years ago

#750

Beautiful ending of a sweet and simple yet lemon like story ! :)
Had a great time reading it ! The Story was superb !
Looking forward to D4D updates ! :)