SS (Completed): Of Lemons & Limes #6 (Ch 23 - 24/ Epilogue) - Page 73

Read dis ff for d nth time now 😊
Simply love it .. it has such freshness .. like lemony fresh 😉
U hv written it brautifully... n m sure m gonna read it for i dunno how many more times 😆

I have read this numerous times:) .. And commented at least a couple times.
This has to be my favourite version of arshi . Especially bcos they r the only ones in this story .
Also , I love how you have written Arnav and khushi almost same as the series keeping the characterization intact..and the way u have woven some of those key dialogues in a complete different mood or situation is amazing.. I have loved those words in your work more than the actual serial. I also loved the way Devi maiyya actually had a role in your story . That was very clever of you to actually involve khushi 's Devi maiyya in the story where she's the one playing the keyrole in bringing them together.. Loved her reactions:). If I read it a few more times, I m sure to have it by heart very soon. That is how much I love this. Also, I ll probably never look at limes or lemons without thinking khushi or this ff:) .. Loved his addiction to her smell... Even if it was b'cos of a dried lemon ..
You are a brilliant writer. I m sure you get to hear that a lot. Are u going to start any new work? Please let us know if u r.. Loved this . Keep going:) ... I m still in arshi land and stories like this hmmm keep me happy:)

Omg!!!!!
What r u??? ( amazing writter i mean)
I jus love dis 1 like hell :* :*

Hey Dear,

Res.

What a lovely story!!! Well worth the read! :D I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

Simply awesome I will miss this story so much. Thank you so much. Hope you start a new one soon. God bless you are a brilliant writer. 👏

beautiful story...loved the secret of lemon; DM played it from start.

great story