His Desire-The Blessing & The Curse-Arhi-Note Pg 28 - Page 2

Wow!! Such a long update dear. Update was amazing and beautifully written. Arnav's desire have no bounds that I had seen from very first part. So his jealousy have no bounds too. He just desires Khushi. He posess her. Well one thing I noticed Your every update justifies your title of Story. Well written. Will wait for next part and their another confrontation. Thanku for PM. :)

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Yayeee thread 2
Congratulations!!!

As for the update

It was amazinggg as ever n thnx fr this longish n comparatively quick update!!!

So now I know how deeply arnav abhored akash,gosh they even share their birthdays

Cant relli blame anyone there,akash being the sweet n unaware of the reality,khushi trying to be fair to the two most important ppl in her life,and as for arnav he is the most lonely person and its khushis affection n attention that keeps him fresh n going on n having a possession nature its only apparent that he greatly loathed akash

Ufff the point where he said sorry n kept his head in khushis lap fr forgiveness was beautifully written

I actually like akash fr an open minded n understandin person he is,not everyone can overlook a person faults n try to think the best of him as he do fr arnav,poor fella had seen all his attempt goin in trash like his sketche to make peace with arnav...
Arnav even made him to see his sister n an intimate moment

I dnt dislike any of your characters, you may say m biased to arnav after knowing the fact that he nearly put akash to death due to medicines

Soo khushi is finally were arnav wanted her to be,with him or her own will with out his intervention...GREAT!!!

Love how the story is being unfolded

Amazinggg update!!!

Loved it.
Damn I cant believe Arnav was so insecure he did that to Khushi's brother!

😃😳loveddd it

Missed 14.2.. *making a dash to the old thread* will be back soon.

Oh! Sorry forgot to congratulate you. Congratz for new thread :)