His Desire-The Blessing & The Curse-Arhi-Note Pg 28 - Page 5

My god, this story literally reeks with such passionate intensity! Love it!

thanks for the pm as well as the long update


so finally kushi is infront of arnav again


lets c their response now

Awesome update...beautifully written as always.
Khushi shares a very strong bond with her brother which is very natural as he is her only living relative and in top of that a sick one which has made khushi more protective of Akash and as a result gave rise to extreme jealousy in Arnav as he does't want anyone's claim on Khushi's time, love and attention and because of this unreasonable possessiveness and his underhanded plans and tricks to get all her attention he ends up loosing the one person he wanted above all.

Akash even what he witnessed in the past as Arnav's complete disregard to his feelings and the callous way he treated him and the painting he gifted him to try improve the relation for his sister's sake as he even then had realised that his sisters happiness is with Arnav and even now Akash is advising Khushi to give him another chance or give happiness another chance, he is a very selfless person who loves his sister and want her to be happy.

I just enjoyed and loved reading all the flash backs of their past and they did help to understand the responses of the past and present responses of characters and why they behaved and still acting in certain way, it helped to understand them much more. Would love to read more of the past incidents in form of flash backs.

Arnav lost his memories but eventually he did find out that there was a girl in his life before his accident who was very important to him and he tried to search for the details about her to go out and fund her but was unsuccessful but she came back in his life anyway. Now he has got her in Shersh Mahal and she is now supposed to be working for him as his secretary but how did he manage that and does he now remember khushi and the incidences prior to her departure from his life as he said to her that he Imagined her on the desk all the time and of all places she had to come to Lucknow.

I would love to read a detailed analysis of the story, I wouldn't say no to anything you write, I love your style of writing and the way you are telling this awesome story in a Faboulous way. Please continue soon. I really look forward to the updates from you and get real excited to see a PM from you.

Waiting for the analysis and the next update eagerly.
Thanks for the PM.

The Update was amazing ! The way Arnav loathed Akash and he is still trying to be cupid for Arshi , I loved that part !
Poor Khushi , torn in between !
Put some more Flashbacks too , I love reading them ...

So Arnav is going to have what is 'his' in ASR way ? Loving the Track so much ! Please continue you , You are so Awesome !

I honestly wonder why you dont get well Deserved comments and likes when there are people whose storyline is nothing but Cliche and still get 1000 likes and so many comments ? No offense to anyone out there , I'm just curious !

Please update soon as I said I'm loving your story !!!

P.S thank you for making the font size big and pming me ! 😊

awesome

Awesome Update

congrats on new thread amazing update and you pen down everything beautifully.

very nice...

fantastic update ...arnav needs treatment for his over possessiveness... both of them have flaws but they are meant to be...wicked story...keep it up